Here is my next 55 Fiction.
Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
THE JOURNEY
Recession, politics, marriage… they talked about everything on the way. His quick wit and sound knowledge took her by surprise. Throughout the journey, they spoke. But it’s his casual charm that struck her the most. As the journey came to an end, he looked deeply into her eyes and said, 'Chutta, de do didiji'
For those who don't know Hindi, the translation for the last part 'Chutta, de do didiji' is Give me the change sissie, as asked by auto drivers 
Wrote a new genre as I told you all in my last 55Fiction. This is not a tragedy which makes you sigh! Liked it eh?! Should I improve?
With Love,
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71 comments:
chhutta dedo didiji....
ha ha....
maza aa gaya.....
lols ... gud one ....
@RSV
:P
So was this different?
@Naveen
Lolzz :P
Thanks!
Indeed, a surprise..!!
:)
@vinz
:P
Thanks
Gr8 one...
Ha ha ha ha ...:)
loved it.. :)
Cheers!!
yeps it was different and I thoroughly enjoyed the difference...
@Amit
hehehe :P
Thanks
@RSV
Thanks re!!
hey nice one...
As humans we have the tendency to judge the intellect of someone from their jobs. It happens with me too. But when they turn out to be different its a very pleasant surprise.
Loved the way you captured this.
@Neha
Thanks :)
@Paritosh
You are very true! I have seen auto drivers who speak about music and politics!
Hehhehe...:) Enjoyed reading it ..:)
@Prams
hehehe :P
Thanks :)
awwww
was it comedy?? ..I had taken for another tragedy.
lolzzzzz....
:D
nice one!!
@Makk
Oh migh! Its ur perspective!
If you think this as a comedy, then it is!
:D :P
Thanks Makk!
lol. axed. :P
Aha.. this surpassed all the others written till now.
aur likhiye didijee !
Now this is a different take from yur end is'nt it? good one! :) ethavathu funny ah next time ezhutha mudiyuma? unala mudiyathathu iruka...keep the good work mam :)!
HaRy
Hahahahahahahaha......'Chutta, de do Shrutiji'....hahaha
Awesome Shruti.
u just rock yaar.
Cheers.
Check out The Part 2 of Maa Durga Series.
Some nice pandal pics there.
do u like 20-20 a lot????wondering wat is the conn to ur post????i will let u know....well ur 55's are always good...i am running out of ideas wat to comment...:)
Gud one :)
Very original and very humorous.
That was tragically comical :P
Nice change from the usual! :)
Shruti! quite unpredictable plot. It refreshing to read your entries after such a pretty long gap sissie :)
Hey, good one!
Just have time to read your post (and then run again!), really enjoyed it! :)
Love, G.
Hmmm...
this one is good.. ;)
@Scarlet diaries
:P
@Lostworld
Oh migh!!
Thanks a ton girlie!
@Hary
Yes, i neva wrote anything like this. First time!!
Will try humor next time.. But i dunno how much i can do justice
@IP
Thanks re!! Do i rock?! I don't know :P
Will check out your post!
@Kaka
Yes i like 20-20 so much!!
Thanks!! Running out of ideas for commenting eh?!!
@Swaram
Thanks :)
@Chowla ji
Thank you so much!
@Anu
Nice change eh?!
Thanks :)
@Musings
Is it refreshing?! Oh!! That's great!!
Thanks anna!!
@Sreya
carry on with pandal hopping!!
Thank you!!!
@Anoop!!
Was this good?! Thanks!!
hmmm good attempt pa :)
u keep gettin better in ur 55-fiction attempts :)
keep blogging
cheers!!!!
@Satish
Thanks ma :)
Very good, well done.
Yvonne
@Yvonne
Thanks a ton re!!
Superb posting...perfect twist...
@SiD
:P :D :O Thanks
When did the Auto fellas at Chennai started speaking in hindi? :P
hehe this is soo good shruti. I like such light hearted ones. tragedies make me saddy waddy :P
nice one shruthi....
@Adi
Thanks :)
Let me try some more genres too!!
@Shankz
Thanks da
Thats a good one. Nee enna Amit 123 rather amita 123 ah autokaran hindi la pesaraan
It was very nice, it seems to me that you really love writing 55fiction. Keep it up.Thumbs up.
shilpa
@Venky
:O
@Shilpa
Thanks re :)
hahaha... good one
ha ha ha ha ha
dis is really very gud.... :P
really awesum
@Ram
Thanks :)
@The Aspirant
Hey thanks buddy!!
hahaha.. too good girl.. sorry for the late comment.. good to see a different genre of fiction 55.. lol :)
@Avada
Hehehehehe :P
Thanks :)
Hey Shruti This is avery different 55 fiction. It is not only the comedy as it looks on surface! Very deep one...
@Pra
Hey pra, welcome back after a long time!!
Very deep one?!
May be!!
Interesting! :)
@Shilpa
Thank you!
Now I believe we shall tag you as 55 fiction queen!
Good one.
Good one but diffrnt try.. ..
keep going forward//
Regards,
Prasee
plzzz infrm me abt ur new blog updates
@Amrit
Yo!!
Welcome back after a long time..
You are tagging me as 55Fiction Queen eh!!
Thank you thank you!!
Ahhh... the Crown is wonderful!!
I love it!!
@Prasee
Thanks :)
Gud one... I somewhat guessed the suspense at the start itself... May be am becoming brilliant reading ur posts... :-P
hey girls.. U like speaking about politics too??? I dont think so...
@Bala
hey, yen posts ah padicha blunt ah irukara mindsum sharp aaidum :P
So no wonder that u became brilliant!
I speak politics man ;)
hehee.. well done! :)
WHy did he look so deeply into her eyes to say that :P
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