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Friday, September 25, 2009

55 Fiction - #14


Here is my next 55 Fiction.

Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

THE JOURNEY

Recession, politics, marriage… they talked about everything on the way. His quick wit and sound knowledge took her by surprise. Throughout the journey, they spoke. But it’s his casual charm that struck her the most. As the journey came to an end, he looked deeply into her eyes and said, 'Chutta, de do didiji'

For those who don't know Hindi, the translation for the last part 'Chutta, de do didiji' is Give me the change sissie, as asked by auto drivers Tongue out

Wrote a new genre as I told you all in my last 55Fiction. This is not a tragedy which makes you sigh! Liked it eh?! Should I improve?

With Love,






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71 comments:

R S V said...

chhutta dedo didiji....
ha ha....
maza aa gaya.....

Naveen kumar said...

lols ... gud one ....

Shruti said...

@RSV
:P
So was this different?

Shruti said...

@Naveen
Lolzz :P
Thanks!

Vinz said...

Indeed, a surprise..!!

:)

Shruti said...

@vinz
:P
Thanks

Singh Amit said...

Gr8 one...
Ha ha ha ha ...:)
loved it.. :)

Cheers!!

R S V said...

yeps it was different and I thoroughly enjoyed the difference...

Shruti said...

@Amit
hehehe :P
Thanks

Shruti said...

@RSV
Thanks re!!

Neha said...

hey nice one...

Paritosh said...

As humans we have the tendency to judge the intellect of someone from their jobs. It happens with me too. But when they turn out to be different its a very pleasant surprise.

Loved the way you captured this.

Shruti said...

@Neha
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@Paritosh
You are very true! I have seen auto drivers who speak about music and politics!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hehhehe...:) Enjoyed reading it ..:)

Shruti said...

@Prams
hehehe :P
Thanks :)

Makk said...

awwww
was it comedy?? ..I had taken for another tragedy.

lolzzzzz....

:D

nice one!!

Shruti said...

@Makk
Oh migh! Its ur perspective!
If you think this as a comedy, then it is!
:D :P
Thanks Makk!

ScarletTd1ar1es said...

lol. axed. :P

lostworld said...

Aha.. this surpassed all the others written till now.

aur likhiye didijee !

HaRy!! said...

Now this is a different take from yur end is'nt it? good one! :) ethavathu funny ah next time ezhutha mudiyuma? unala mudiyathathu iruka...keep the good work mam :)!

HaRy

Indian Pundit said...

Hahahahahahahaha......'Chutta, de do Shrutiji'....hahaha

Awesome Shruti.

u just rock yaar.

Cheers.

Check out The Part 2 of Maa Durga Series.

Some nice pandal pics there.

Kaka said...

do u like 20-20 a lot????wondering wat is the conn to ur post????i will let u know....well ur 55's are always good...i am running out of ideas wat to comment...:)

Swaram said...

Gud one :)

BK Chowla said...

Very original and very humorous.

Anu...:) said...

That was tragically comical :P

Nice change from the usual! :)

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Shruti! quite unpredictable plot. It refreshing to read your entries after such a pretty long gap sissie :)

Guria said...

Hey, good one!

Just have time to read your post (and then run again!), really enjoyed it! :)

Love, G.

Anoop said...

Hmmm...
this one is good.. ;)

Shruti said...

@Scarlet diaries
:P

Shruti said...

@Lostworld
Oh migh!!
Thanks a ton girlie!

Shruti said...

@Hary
Yes, i neva wrote anything like this. First time!!
Will try humor next time.. But i dunno how much i can do justice

Shruti said...

@IP
Thanks re!! Do i rock?! I don't know :P

Will check out your post!

Shruti said...

@Kaka
Yes i like 20-20 so much!!
Thanks!! Running out of ideas for commenting eh?!!

Shruti said...

@Swaram
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@Chowla ji
Thank you so much!

Shruti said...

@Anu
Nice change eh?!
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@Musings
Is it refreshing?! Oh!! That's great!!
Thanks anna!!

Shruti said...

@Sreya
carry on with pandal hopping!!
Thank you!!!

Shruti said...

@Anoop!!
Was this good?! Thanks!!

Sat_hi_sh said...

hmmm good attempt pa :)
u keep gettin better in ur 55-fiction attempts :)


keep blogging
cheers!!!!

Shruti said...

@Satish
Thanks ma :)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Very good, well done.


Yvonne

Shruti said...

@Yvonne
Thanks a ton re!!

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

Superb posting...perfect twist...

Shruti said...

@SiD
:P :D :O Thanks

Aditya said...

When did the Auto fellas at Chennai started speaking in hindi? :P

hehe this is soo good shruti. I like such light hearted ones. tragedies make me saddy waddy :P

Shankar said...

nice one shruthi....

Shruti said...

@Adi
Thanks :)
Let me try some more genres too!!

Shruti said...

@Shankz
Thanks da

vEnKy said...

Thats a good one. Nee enna Amit 123 rather amita 123 ah autokaran hindi la pesaraan

Shilpa said...

It was very nice, it seems to me that you really love writing 55fiction. Keep it up.Thumbs up.

shilpa

Shruti said...

@Venky
:O

Shruti said...

@Shilpa
Thanks re :)

RAM said...

hahaha... good one

The Aspirant said...

ha ha ha ha ha
dis is really very gud.... :P
really awesum

Shruti said...

@Ram
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@The Aspirant
Hey thanks buddy!!

evanescentthoughts said...

hahaha.. too good girl.. sorry for the late comment.. good to see a different genre of fiction 55.. lol :)

Shruti said...

@Avada
Hehehehehe :P
Thanks :)

pra said...

Hey Shruti This is avery different 55 fiction. It is not only the comedy as it looks on surface! Very deep one...

Shruti said...

@Pra
Hey pra, welcome back after a long time!!
Very deep one?!
May be!!

Shilpa Garg said...

Interesting! :)

Shruti said...

@Shilpa
Thank you!

thoughtworld said...

Now I believe we shall tag you as 55 fiction queen!

Good one.

Prads said...

Good one but diffrnt try.. ..

keep going forward//

Regards,
Prasee


plzzz infrm me abt ur new blog updates

Shruti said...

@Amrit
Yo!!
Welcome back after a long time..
You are tagging me as 55Fiction Queen eh!!
Thank you thank you!!
Ahhh... the Crown is wonderful!!
I love it!!

Shruti said...

@Prasee
Thanks :)

balasrini said...

Gud one... I somewhat guessed the suspense at the start itself... May be am becoming brilliant reading ur posts... :-P

hey girls.. U like speaking about politics too??? I dont think so...

Shruti said...

@Bala
hey, yen posts ah padicha blunt ah irukara mindsum sharp aaidum :P
So no wonder that u became brilliant!

I speak politics man ;)

Shruti said...

hehee.. well done! :)
WHy did he look so deeply into her eyes to say that :P

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