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Sunday, September 20, 2009

55 Fiction - #12

Here is my next 55 Fiction.

Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.


Saif dumped her. She told herself, "He is loving someone else. How dare he do that?". Tears kissed her cheeks and her taste buds smacked it. She took Venom to her lips. Her mind and heart conflicted each other. She heeded her mind, wiped those tears and uttered, "I will live to see him regret"

Hope you liked this one.. I was completely out of my mood while penning this down. So I don't know whether I could live upto all your expectations. If I don't, am sorry!

Please do comment on this 55 fiction attempt!

With Love,

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Indian Pundit said...

"I will live to see him regret"

Great story Shruti.....awesome.

Cheers and wanna chat?

Sat_hi_sh said...

Hey kewl work :)
rombo nalla irundhuchi :)

"I will live to see him regret"
sema punch po ;)

btw Unnaipol Oruvan will be put up soon :)

keep blogging :)

Vipul Grover said...

Thts a nice one, better thn sum previous ones!! U shud more oftn b out of ur mood i blive :p

R S V said...

Hey, visit my blog
there is something waiting for you :)
Hope you like it:)
I will definitely read your blog after some time..

soin said...

the oldest love story on earth...loves someone else..

R S V said...

finally I got to read it!!
that was definitely a kind of whine....
hatred is something that should avoided though... a nice reflection of what usually happens with us...

pRiYaN...! said...

wow !!! you are tuned well to 55 fiction...cheers !!


vEnKy said...

Not bad for a story written in a bad mood. Was that 55 fiction or 55 Faction :). Yet another post in the midnight moon huh?

Kaka said...

haha....well here the guy dumped the girl...something for a change...:)....offlate watever movies i have been watching it is the girl who always says "u have been dumped"....:P....good one...:)

HaRy!! said...

super pa.... a real eye opener for some one who is crestfallen!! need to take it from the mind rather than heart.!! yapa at least ithu sogam ilama irunthuchi... just jokin..good one!

Shruti said...

Thanks re :)
I had hit the sack before you sent this!

Shruti said...

Kewl one eh?!
Heheh :P
Thanks :)

Waiting for unnai pol oruvan's review!!

Shruti said...

Welcome to my blog after a long time :P
""better thn sum previous ones""
That is the most unexpected comment yaar!!

""U shud more oftn b out of ur mood i blive""
:P Lol

Shruti said...

Hey checked out and thanks for the 2 awards!!

Shruti said...

""you are tuned well to 55 fiction""
Mebbe! But not while writing this!

Shruti said...

Oldest love story eh?!

Shruti said...

""Not bad for a story written in a bad mood""
Thanks for this honest comment re!!

Yes, midnight la post panadhu dan :P!

Shruti said...

""hatred is something that should avoided though""
Yes, but not with a guy who dumped her and loves someone else!

Thanks :)

Guria said...

"completely out of mood" and the result is... this?

Girl, you have scored an Over-boundary yet again!! :)

No wonder, I wait when Shruti is going to write her next 555 fiction!

Way to go!

Love. ^_^

Shruti said...

Welcome back after a long time!
Girl telling those lines?! Not the sect of girls i have witnessed!

Shruti said...

""need to take it from the mind rather than heart""
That was the essence of the story!
Unakku sogam pdikadha!!


Shruti said...

""completely out of mood, and the result is... this?""

""you have scored an Over-boundary yet again""
Thanks a ton!

""next 555 fiction""
Migh!!?! Another short story eh?!

Neha said...

kya baat hai...pretty neat one the fiction story i had posted earlier ths month - the ultimate painting..hope u like tht..

Shruti said...


Ya. I have read that and it was damn good!

Anu...:) said...

"I will live to see him regret"
strong statement:)
Nice one!:)

Shruti said...


Thanks sissie!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hey...well done ..:)

Shruti said...

Thank you!

Singh Amit said...

gr8 one.. :)
I loved this one very much.... :)
One needs a strong purpose to continue one's life...
This was exactly the girl found....


Benny said...

Shruthi..meaningful n thoughtful 55 fiction..Never kenw 55 fiction stories can be so powerful.Honest feelings of a broken heart!Job,well done! And I really wonder if u were in a a bad mood penning down this! If so,u write alwz when u r in a bad mood..jus kidding :)

Shruti said...

""I loved this one very much""
Really ah?!

Thanks amit!
Confessions of a broken heart!

Shruti said...

Haaa!! Now you understood 55Fiction can be powerful eh?!

""I really wonder if u were in a a bad mood penning down this! If so,u write alwz when u r in a bad mood""
Many telling the same :(
Seems always i must be in a bad mood!

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

Oh man...superb...i was about 2 shout y do all these end in tragedy...but then the ending brought me back 2 senses...:D

Shruti said...

Thank god! You dint shout! I wanted to stress the fact- Confessions of a broken heart!
Thanks :)

Ekam said...

Shruti that was great! Yaar mere dimag mein kyun nai aati yeh stories :(

Ekam said...

Your last story was awesome. I just loved it:)

RAM said...

wow. that is really a cool one. a pinch of self confidence and hope in her words. neat one shruthi :)

Shruti said...

Thumahri dimag mein yeh stories kyun nahi aati hai?
Aaram se think karo yaar! You will get better than everything! If not, be in a bad mood and you can do it with ease!

Shruti said...

Last story was awesome eh?!
Thanks girlie!

Shruti said...

Thanks da!

BK Chowla said...

You are doing well on 55. Keep it up.

pawan said...

Good one!
I can give a 7!
But you know you can be far better!
Btw, I am coming back on to my blog today!
Cya there!

The Aspirant said...

no matter in wad mood u r, u really r gr8 in writing dis thing called "55 fiction"
dis is d best one i hv read.......


Saad Shaikh said...

I will live to see him regret

wow.. awesome line conveying the right attitude.. :)

your 55s are really good.. ;)

Shruti said...

@BK Chowla
Thank you ji!!

Shruti said...

""But you know you can be far better""
I was out of my mood, so i know i cant give my best :)

Will see you there ya ;)

Shruti said...

@The Aspirant
hehheh :P
Great eh?!
Thanks a ton!

""dis is d best one i hv read.""
Am really honored!!

Shruti said...

My 55's are gud eh?!
Thank you :)

Sapphire said...

nice :) :) A cliched plot - guy loves someone else :P - yet told nicely :D

Shruti said...

Cliched story eh?!
Fine, next time will giv u a surprise!

Thank you!

chetan said...

it might be not like your previous posts, but you have written in another beautiful style-
tears kissed her cheeks, and taste buds smacked it.
i like the two lines

Shruti said...

Heeheh another beautiful styl?

""tears kissed her cheeks, and taste buds smacked it""
I never wrote these kinda lines in my posts! :P
Just tried them!

kasabiangirl said...

Ah..I love the I'll live to see him regret part ;)

Shruti said...

@Kasabian girl
hehehe :P
I too like it! :P

√♪נ汉Ψ said...

Nice attempt.
You are really good at writing 55Fiction.
Keep it up...

Shruti said...

Thanks alot buddy!

Yellow Tulip said...

"I will live to see him regret" was bold and really good one dear..:)...

Suga said...

this one was out of mood ???
man no wonder they call u 55 fiction queen :)
nice :)

ScarletTd1ar1es said...

makes u crack a smile and say way 2 go girl. :P

Rajalakshmi Umapathy said...

Hey bud, you are something super. I loved it.. mutual feelings I guess!!

Shruti said...

@yellow tulip
he shattered her dream hence this decision!

Thank you!

Shruti said...

welcome back to my blog!!
""no wonder they call u 55 fiction queen""
Ahhh!! Too much of praise for me yaar!

Shruti said...

@Scarlet diaries
hey that was a cute comment!

Shruti said...

am i something super?!
Nothing like that, just one fellow blogger like you!


Great Story, clever how you do it.


Shruti said...


Priyanka Agrawalla said...

wow!! this one was too good Sruthi... "I will live to see him regret". the attitude in these words.. Liked it :)
Happy writing!

Shruti said...

Hi :)
Welcome to my blog!
Thanks for liking it on the first go!

Bharathi said...

Good one. I have a feeling that you more often write tragedy.

Shruti said...

Is this a tragedy?!
Am nt able to differentiate! I pen down whatever comes to my mind!

evanescentthoughts said...

"I will live to see him regret" - this was too good girl... another awesome fiction 55 from the queen :)

Shruti said...

From the queen!?
Am jus 12 55 fiction's old! Too young to be crowned as a queen!

pra said...

Nice 55 fiction as usual Shruti! Two awards are waiting for you! collect them a.s.a.p.

Shruti said...

Thanks pra!
I received those awards! thanks a ton!

Swaram said...

I will live to see him regret - What a punch!

hey u r dng really gr8 @ the 55ers! Want more :)

Shruti said...

""hey u r dng really gr8 @ the 55ers! Want more""
wish granted!

Shas said...

All those who have had a heartbreak should read this 55 of yours.

Shruti said...

That's a real compliment!

Aditya said...

//"I will live to see him regret"//

Super finish!

Shruti said...

Thank you! :)

Vinz said...

Gud one...
Just liked the positivity..!!

lostworld said...

:) She should be glad instead that she didn't get stuck with such a loser.. !!

Shruti said...

Thank you!! Positive attitude wins the situation!

Shruti said...

Yes, she can be, but the pain lasts forever!

Prads said...

Hey super...
Great presence of mind for saif's ex Gf...

Saif u will surely regret man...

Great feel to get


Shruti said...

Thanks buddy!

Srivatsan said...

Thats a good ending!:)

Shruti said...

Hey, welcome to my blog!!
Thanks :)

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Revenge for regret, huh?? liked this 55 fiction Shruti :)

Shruti said...

Thanks :)

balasrini said...

For me it didnt seem to be a fiction.. but a short post with a strong theme within...

"I will live to see him regret" - Excellent!!! Thats where u stand tall Shruti!!!

Shruti said...

Thank you
Thank you
Many thanks to you!!

balasrini said...

You are always welcome!!! :-)

Shruti said...


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