Here is my next 55 Fiction.
Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
THE VITAL DECISION
Saif dumped her. She told herself, "He is loving someone else. How dare he do that?". Tears kissed her cheeks and her taste buds smacked it. She took Venom to her lips. Her mind and heart conflicted each other. She heeded her mind, wiped those tears and uttered, "I will live to see him regret"
Hope you liked this one.. I was completely out of my mood while penning this down. So I don't know whether I could live upto all your expectations. If I don't, am sorry!
Please do comment on this 55 fiction attempt!
With Love,
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92 comments:
"I will live to see him regret"
Great story Shruti.....awesome.
Cheers and wanna chat?
Hey kewl work :)
rombo nalla irundhuchi :)
"I will live to see him regret"
sema punch po ;)
btw Unnaipol Oruvan will be put up soon :)
keep blogging :)
cheers!!!
Thts a nice one, better thn sum previous ones!! U shud more oftn b out of ur mood i blive :p
the oldest love story on earth...loves someone else..
finally I got to read it!!
that was definitely a kind of whine....
hatred is something that should avoided though... a nice reflection of what usually happens with us...
wow !!! you are tuned well to 55 fiction...cheers !!
-bluffmaster
Not bad for a story written in a bad mood. Was that 55 fiction or 55 Faction :). Yet another post in the midnight moon huh?
haha....well here the guy dumped the girl...something for a change...:)....offlate watever movies i have been watching it is the girl who always says "u have been dumped"....:P....good one...:)
super pa.... a real eye opener for some one who is crestfallen!! need to take it from the mind rather than heart.!! yapa at least ithu sogam ilama irunthuchi... just jokin..good one!
@IP
Thanks re :)
I had hit the sack before you sent this!
@Satish
Kewl one eh?!
Heheh :P
Thanks :)
Waiting for unnai pol oruvan's review!!
:)
@Vipul
Ahhh!!
Welcome to my blog after a long time :P
""better thn sum previous ones""
That is the most unexpected comment yaar!!
""U shud more oftn b out of ur mood i blive""
:P Lol
@RSV
Hey checked out and thanks for the 2 awards!!
@Priyan
""you are tuned well to 55 fiction""
Mebbe! But not while writing this!
@Soin
Oldest love story eh?!
@Venks
""Not bad for a story written in a bad mood""
Thanks for this honest comment re!!
Yes, midnight la post panadhu dan :P!
@RSV
""hatred is something that should avoided though""
Yes, but not with a guy who dumped her and loves someone else!
Thanks :)
"completely out of mood" and the result is... this?
Girl, you have scored an Over-boundary yet again!! :)
No wonder, I wait when Shruti is going to write her next 555 fiction!
Way to go!
Love. ^_^
@Kaka
Welcome back after a long time!
Girl telling those lines?! Not the sect of girls i have witnessed!
@Hary
""need to take it from the mind rather than heart""
That was the essence of the story!
Unakku sogam pdikadha!!
:)
Thanks!
@Guria
""completely out of mood, and the result is... this?""
:P
""you have scored an Over-boundary yet again""
Thanks a ton!
""next 555 fiction""
Migh!!?! Another short story eh?!
kya baat hai...pretty neat one shru..read the fiction story i had posted earlier ths month - the ultimate painting..hope u like tht..
@Neha
Thanks!!
Ya. I have read that and it was damn good!
"I will live to see him regret"
strong statement:)
Nice one!:)
@Anu!
Thanks sissie!
Hey...well done ..:)
@Pramoda
Thank you!
gr8 one.. :)
I loved this one very much.... :)
One needs a strong purpose to continue one's life...
This was exactly the girl found....
Cheers!!
Shruthi..meaningful n thoughtful 55 fiction..Never kenw 55 fiction stories can be so powerful.Honest feelings of a broken heart!Job,well done! And I really wonder if u were in a a bad mood penning down this! If so,u write alwz when u r in a bad mood..jus kidding :)
@Amit
""I loved this one very much""
Really ah?!
wow!!
Thanks amit!
Confessions of a broken heart!
@Benny
Haaa!! Now you understood 55Fiction can be powerful eh?!
""I really wonder if u were in a a bad mood penning down this! If so,u write alwz when u r in a bad mood""
Many telling the same :(
Seems always i must be in a bad mood!
Oh man...superb...i was about 2 shout y do all these end in tragedy...but then the ending brought me back 2 senses...:D
@Sid
Thank god! You dint shout! I wanted to stress the fact- Confessions of a broken heart!
Thanks :)
Shruti that was great! Yaar mere dimag mein kyun nai aati yeh stories :(
Your last story was awesome. I just loved it:)
wow. that is really a cool one. a pinch of self confidence and hope in her words. neat one shruthi :)
@Ekam
Thumahri dimag mein yeh stories kyun nahi aati hai?
Aaram se think karo yaar! You will get better than everything! If not, be in a bad mood and you can do it with ease!
@ekam
Last story was awesome eh?!
Thanks girlie!
@Ram
Thanks da!
You are doing well on 55. Keep it up.
Good one!
I can give a 7!
But you know you can be far better!
Btw, I am coming back on to my blog today!
Cya there!
Cheers!
no matter in wad mood u r, u really r gr8 in writing dis thing called "55 fiction"
dis is d best one i hv read.......
cheers
I will live to see him regret
wow.. awesome line conveying the right attitude.. :)
your 55s are really good.. ;)
@BK Chowla
Thank you ji!!
@Pawan
7???
wow!!
""But you know you can be far better""
I was out of my mood, so i know i cant give my best :)
Will see you there ya ;)
@The Aspirant
hehheh :P
Great eh?!
Thanks a ton!
""dis is d best one i hv read.""
Am really honored!!
@Saad
My 55's are gud eh?!
Thank you :)
nice :) :) A cliched plot - guy loves someone else :P - yet told nicely :D
@Sapphire
Cliched story eh?!
Fine, next time will giv u a surprise!
Thank you!
hey
it might be not like your previous posts, but you have written in another beautiful style-
tears kissed her cheeks, and taste buds smacked it.
i like the two lines
@Chetan!
Heeheh another beautiful styl?
Wow!!
""tears kissed her cheeks, and taste buds smacked it""
I never wrote these kinda lines in my posts! :P
Just tried them!
Ah..I love the I'll live to see him regret part ;)
@Kasabian girl
hehehe :P
I too like it! :P
Nice attempt.
You are really good at writing 55Fiction.
Keep it up...
:)
@Vijay
Thanks alot buddy!
"I will live to see him regret"
...wow...tat was bold and really good one dear..:)...
makes u crack a smile and say way 2 go girl. :P
Hey bud, you are something super. I loved it.. mutual feelings I guess!!
@yellow tulip
he shattered her dream hence this decision!
Thank you!
@Suga
welcome back to my blog!!
""no wonder they call u 55 fiction queen""
Ahhh!! Too much of praise for me yaar!
@Scarlet diaries
hey that was a cute comment!
Thanks!
@Raji
am i something super?!
Nothing like that, just one fellow blogger like you!
Great Story, clever how you do it.
Yvonne.
@Yvonne
Thanks!
wow!! this one was too good Sruthi... "I will live to see him regret". the attitude in these words.. Liked it :)
Happy writing!
@Priyanka
Hi :)
Welcome to my blog!
Thanks for liking it on the first go!
Good one. I have a feeling that you more often write tragedy.
@Bharathi
Is this a tragedy?!
Am nt able to differentiate! I pen down whatever comes to my mind!
"I will live to see him regret" - this was too good girl... another awesome fiction 55 from the queen :)
@Avada
From the queen!?
:O
Am jus 12 55 fiction's old! Too young to be crowned as a queen!
Nice 55 fiction as usual Shruti! Two awards are waiting for you! collect them a.s.a.p.
@Pra
Thanks pra!
I received those awards! thanks a ton!
I will live to see him regret - What a punch!
hey u r dng really gr8 @ the 55ers! Want more :)
@Swaram
""hey u r dng really gr8 @ the 55ers! Want more""
Hehehe
wish granted!
All those who have had a heartbreak should read this 55 of yours.
@Shas
That's a real compliment!
//"I will live to see him regret"//
Super finish!
@Aditya!!
Thank you! :)
Gud one...
Just liked the positivity..!!
cheers..!!
:) She should be glad instead that she didn't get stuck with such a loser.. !!
@Vinz
Thank you!! Positive attitude wins the situation!
@Lostworld
Yes, she can be, but the pain lasts forever!
Hey super...
Great presence of mind for saif's ex Gf...
Saif u will surely regret man...
Great feel to get
Regards,
Prasee
@Prasee
Thanks buddy!
Thats a good ending!:)
@Srivatsan
Hey, welcome to my blog!!
Thanks :)
Revenge for regret, huh?? liked this 55 fiction Shruti :)
@Musings
yeah!
Thanks :)
For me it didnt seem to be a fiction.. but a short post with a strong theme within...
"I will live to see him regret" - Excellent!!! Thats where u stand tall Shruti!!!
@Bala
Thank you
Thank you
and
Many thanks to you!!
You are always welcome!!! :-)
@Bala
:-)
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