Well friends, am here again with another 55 Fiction! Sid said "A 55 fiction bug has bit him
". I think am influenced by the same bug. I tried two 55 fiction and got a wonderful response! So I tried another genre of 55 fiction today!! Don't know whether it will work out!!! Keeping my fingers crossed!!!
Well telling about 55 fiction it can be called as "Micro-Fiction". It contains characters, a plot where the story revolves! It should contain only 55 words or less than that! Here comes my 55 fiction....
STARGAZE
Krish envisioned his enemy coming near him.
"Should i kill him with my rifle?"
Nope!
'Something more is entailed for him', Enunciating himself, Krish struck him hard!
Thud!!
He dropped down! Krish smiled!
SLAP!!!!!!!!!!!
Suddenly he woke up with a start,
only to find his wife rubbing her cheeks.
'Help me, God' he prayed silently.
only to find his wife rubbing her cheeks.
'Help me, God' he prayed silently.
Hope you liked this genre of my 55 Fiction!! Please do comment on my attempt!! If its bad, am sorry!! Will surely come with something best!
Till then, Keep Smiling.
With Love,
Image Courtesy : GOOGLE Images
39 comments:
ha ha ha ha...this is nice...
God saw krish now...:P
@Sid!!
huh!!!
am relieved...Atleast u fel like laughing!!!
thank God!
Thanks Sid!
Hey nice and funny one.Good try with humour.Especially liked your signature which bears your name :)
@Ram
hehehe :D
thanks!
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super. super.. comedy..
Prasee
THANx u sooo much shruts....
i liked alot....
Thanx for dedicating to me
@prasee
thanks!!
its dedicated to all my friends who supported me
Thats a great post Shruti.
i am jealous of your 55 word fictions.....hahahaha
Cheers Shruti rocks big time.
@ IP
thank you so much!
Jealous huh?!!
:P
wow..this was cool....di....
well when u said its a 55 fiction i thought once again it would be about mom,dad or sis.. but this was different...
@shankz
thank you so much da!!
I was keeping my fingers crossed!!
but til now had a nice respons!!
Humor in 55!! That's cool!! :)
Man!!!!!!!!!!!! THis 55 fiction craze seems to be catching up fast!!! Gud one!!! Thanx for visiting my blog!! Happy frenship day to u too.
where did u get ur signature from??? its really cool....
@sumeet
thank you for ur visit!
@karthick
secrets are to be maintained
:) atleast he dared to slap his wife whilst dreaming. Short and funny Shruti
'Help me God' is a nice way to finish. Very nice. I enjoyed.
@musings
hehehehe :P
thanks!!
@bharathi
thanks yaar!
again difficulty in understanding 55fiction huh!?
quite a hilarious post..
:)
@amit
thanks for ur comment :P
Nope. Now I became expert, reading shruti teacher's continuous home work of 55-fictions.
@bharathi
Teacher does a homework?!
funny :P
Great strategy, good answers, really you are rocking with 55 fiction.
@yogesh
thanks for visiting my blog!
thanks for your encouraging comments!
Good one Shruti!
You have a great blog here, nice and interestingly layed out!
Will be visiting back again!
Cheers!
@pawan!
thank you so much yaar!!
sure!! its my pleasure to have u here!
Hi Shruti !
Just read all those 165 words :p i mean your three 55 fictions ! I should say , you are getting better and better :) Simple but nice , if I have to sum it up. Keep them comming ! :)
Mr.R
GingerChai.com
@ Mr.R
glad that u read all 164 wrds!!
my first 55F will have 54 wrds only:P
glad that you visited this one!
keep smiling
Hey its great. It was funny and i could see u rocking here :)
@savi
thank you da!!!
:)
Hi! shruti, it was a good one with a humourous ending.
hey shas thanks for the visit!
Crazy krish!!!
Atleast the husbands were able to take revenge in this way... :-)
@Bala
Hey,all wives are not the same and also all hubby's aren't the same!!
True!!! :-)
@Bala
Idhulayavadhu accept panengale!
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