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Friday, August 7, 2009

55 Fiction-My first attempt!

55 fiction is more or less a short story. These stories have characters, struggles and answer. These stories often have a wonderful turn towards the end! It has only 55 words or less than that(u start counting the words in my story)

I always wanted to write a Mini-fiction. So here is my 55 fiction!!



Topic: Odd Morning

She opened her eyes to the warm rays of Sun.

She had barely slept after returning from the railway station last night

Her man must be going in train for his sister's marriage.

Lazily, She switched on the TV,

Headlines: Train Derailed; All passengers dead.

She never got out of her bed again!


Hope you liked it!

This is my first attempt in writing a 55 fiction!! Do tell me your comments

P.S: Shilpa only commented and suggested me to Give a title

Image courtesy: GOOGLE Images


33 comments:

Indian Pundit said...

Hi Shruti

Hit or miss?? Hit of course!!!!

Good first attempt!!!

Cheers.....

Shruti said...

@ Indian Pundit
thank you so much!!

Indian Pundit said...

Thanks and more thanks.

i am so very glad that u liked my posts.

i am following u now too......

Check out my posts:

"The God's Masterpiece".....

i dedicate it to you.

Cheers and stay tuned.

Shruti said...

hey IP am glad too that yopu are following my blogs!

thanks for that dedication!

RAM said...

Hey superb attempt yaar. A story with 55 words! still could not imagine how you could think like this. Great going.Keep it up )

Srividya said...

keep posting many things lik this..its really fantastic!!

Indian Pundit said...

Hi Shruti

i dedicated that post to you because i guess u really liked my posts as soon as u read them.
i loved your comments.

Most importantly, you are the ONLY PERSON who agreed with me wholeheartedly!!!!

Cheers.

Shruti said...

@Sri,
thank you so much da!!

@IP
hey really i loved ur posts the moment i read and those thoughts reflected in your comments section!!

Thanks for the dedication. Am honoured

savitha said...

I don have words to say. Its really fantabulous. U proved ur creativity. I wish u'd become a great writer.. keep goin.. This fiction is great great and GREAT.. My best wishes..

Prads said...

shurthi .. No words.. re to comment on this 55th fiction .

Good opening scene..

she thought tat she will miss her man for few days..

But she didn't thought for ever..

They know they can Never Live missing each other...

So he Carried her with him forever

dedicated to Symbol of true Luvs .

Regards,
Prasee

Shruti said...

@prasee
thanks!
its 55fiction not 55th fiction

Shilpa Garg said...

A Good attempt.
A suggestion: You should have a title for the story too!! :)

Indian Pundit said...

grabbing the tag means just write the tag after a nice link from where u got it.....then pass it on to others whom u feel deserving

Cheers....and girl i am sure u know how to hyperlink...u are a techie after all......haha

Indian Pundit said...

Step by Step guide:

1) First declare from where u got the tag.....give a hyperlink to that blog.

2) Write your ten points........

3)Then pass the tag to other bloggers.

Thats how tags are normally written!

Indian Pundit said...

Forgot to say Cheers in my last comment.

So Cheers.

Shruti said...

@IP
hey thank you so much re!!

Shilpa Garg said...

That's a good title, and it explains and gives more meaning to your 55 Fiction!!
Cheers
and
Happy Blogging! :)

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

hey quite nice, short and sweet...

I like this and yo...m following u now, check next friday am also gonna attempt something...:D

Shruti said...

@Sid
Thanks that someone got Idea from my blog!

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Hei! this fiction is a huge creativity packed into a small pill. Good writing. Keep it up!

Shruti said...

@musings
thank you so much for your appreciation!

Bharathi said...

Nice creative post. I tried my bit of 55-fiction in my recent post. you can check. seems your followers started increasing. Good. All the best.

Shruti said...

@ Bharathi
Thanks, Its through your blog,many are coming and seein my blog!
thanks

Shankar said...

wow..I still havent got a clue about what 55 fictions are ......

good attmept though..I am yet to make my attempt..

Shruti said...

@shankz
Thank you!!
will teach you abt 55fiction :D

Bharathi said...

LOL. so how much royalty you gonna pay me? Jus kiddin.

Yours is a nice blog and I am sure it will get more popular.

Shruti said...

@Bharathi
thanks for telling my blog as a nice one. I feel lik am rewarded by you!
Hope t becomes popular

abhinayah said...

hey i loved it Shruthi...it was awesome....da!PERFECT epitome f true love!keep it up...

Shruti said...

@abi
thank you so much!!

Poornima Dayalan said...

HI dear,
Great work da... your first post itself was awesome.. only few talented story writters end their stories with an irony...
But you ve created it in ur very first post..it shld be appreciated!
Keep it up! :)

Shruti said...

@poorni
thank you so much poorni

balasrini said...

Not that good Shruti... It was more like reading newspaper ma...

Since this was ur first attempt, just pass for u!!!!!! :-)

Shruti said...

@Bala
Aiyaa..bala sir passed me in this 55F!!

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