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Tuesday, August 11, 2009

55 Fiction - #3


Well friends, am here again with another 55 Fiction! Sid said "A 55 fiction bug has bit him smile_tongue". I think am influenced by the same bug. I tried two 55 fiction and got a wonderful response! So I tried another genre of 55 fiction today!! Don't know whether it will work out!!! Keeping my fingers crossed!!!fingerscrossed

Well telling about 55 fiction it can be called as "Micro-Fiction". It contains characters, a plot where the story revolves! It should contain only 55 words or less than that! Here comes my 55 fiction....

STARGAZE

Krish envisioned his enemy coming near him.

"Should i kill him with my rifle?"

Nope!

'Something more is entailed for him', Enunciating himself, Krish struck him hard!

Thud!!

He dropped down! Krish smiled!

SLAP!!!!!!!!!!!

Suddenly he woke up with a start,

only to find his wife rubbing her cheeks.
smile_eyeroll

'Help me, God' he prayed silently.

Hope you liked this genre of my 55 Fiction!! Please do comment on my attempt!! If its bad, am sorry!! Will surely come with something best!

Till then, Keep Smiling.

With Love,





Image Courtesy : GOOGLE Images

39 comments:

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

ha ha ha ha...this is nice...

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

God saw krish now...:P

Shruti said...

@Sid!!
huh!!!
am relieved...Atleast u fel like laughing!!!
thank God!
Thanks Sid!

RAM said...

Hey nice and funny one.Good try with humour.Especially liked your signature which bears your name :)

Shruti said...

@Ram
hehehe :D
thanks!

Prads said...

hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh

super. super.. comedy..

Prasee

Prads said...

THANx u sooo much shruts....

i liked alot....

Thanx for dedicating to me

Shruti said...

@prasee
thanks!!
its dedicated to all my friends who supported me

Indian Pundit said...

Thats a great post Shruti.

i am jealous of your 55 word fictions.....hahahaha

Cheers Shruti rocks big time.

Shruti said...

@ IP
thank you so much!
Jealous huh?!!
:P

Shankar said...

wow..this was cool....di....

well when u said its a 55 fiction i thought once again it would be about mom,dad or sis.. but this was different...

Shruti said...

@shankz
thank you so much da!!
I was keeping my fingers crossed!!
but til now had a nice respons!!

Shilpa Garg said...

Humor in 55!! That's cool!! :)

Sumeet.Shah said...

Man!!!!!!!!!!!! THis 55 fiction craze seems to be catching up fast!!! Gud one!!! Thanx for visiting my blog!! Happy frenship day to u too.

Karthik said...

where did u get ur signature from??? its really cool....

Shruti said...

@sumeet
thank you for ur visit!

Shruti said...

@karthick
secrets are to be maintained

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

:) atleast he dared to slap his wife whilst dreaming. Short and funny Shruti

Bharathi said...

'Help me God' is a nice way to finish. Very nice. I enjoyed.

Shruti said...

@musings
hehehehe :P
thanks!!

@bharathi
thanks yaar!
again difficulty in understanding 55fiction huh!?

Amit414@IT-BHU said...

quite a hilarious post..
:)

Shruti said...

@amit
thanks for ur comment :P

Bharathi said...

Nope. Now I became expert, reading shruti teacher's continuous home work of 55-fictions.

Shruti said...

@bharathi
Teacher does a homework?!
funny :P

yogesh - I don´t need wings to fly said...

Great strategy, good answers, really you are rocking with 55 fiction.

Shruti said...

@yogesh
thanks for visiting my blog!
thanks for your encouraging comments!

pawan said...

Good one Shruti!
You have a great blog here, nice and interestingly layed out!

Will be visiting back again!
Cheers!

Shruti said...

@pawan!
thank you so much yaar!!
sure!! its my pleasure to have u here!

Lakshmi Rajan said...
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Mr said...

Hi Shruti !

Just read all those 165 words :p i mean your three 55 fictions ! I should say , you are getting better and better :) Simple but nice , if I have to sum it up. Keep them comming ! :)

Mr.R

GingerChai.com

Shruti said...

@ Mr.R
glad that u read all 164 wrds!!
my first 55F will have 54 wrds only:P
glad that you visited this one!
keep smiling

savitha said...

Hey its great. It was funny and i could see u rocking here :)

Shruti said...

@savi
thank you da!!!
:)

Shas said...

Hi! shruti, it was a good one with a humourous ending.

Shruti said...

hey shas thanks for the visit!

balasrini said...

Crazy krish!!!
Atleast the husbands were able to take revenge in this way... :-)

Shruti said...

@Bala
Hey,all wives are not the same and also all hubby's aren't the same!!

balasrini said...

True!!! :-)

Shruti said...

@Bala
Idhulayavadhu accept panengale!

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