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Sunday, August 9, 2009

55 Fiction - #2



Hello everyone!

Here am back with my second 55 Fiction. I received a tremendous appreciation i received from all of you! I thank everyone of you for this! Am happy that all my blogging friend are really amicable!

Once again, telling about 55 Fiction~It is a story containing 55 or less than 55 words. Like other short stories, 55 Fiction also has characters with a background and a situation where this Chronicle revolves! Here is my 55 Fiction..


Power of LOVE!

After that catastrophic accident, her world moved to a gloomier side.

Her Father had been into ventilator, Mother was traumatized.

Then one morning, she found her mom waking her up!

Phone rang!

The Doctor called and informed her, "Dad recovered"!

She replied "I Know!"

Her mom's smile told that...

She understood the POWER OF LOVE!!

Hope you all liked this. Kindly post all your feelings as comments... This 55 Fiction is dedicated to all those true lovers and those who felt the "Power of LOVE".

Keep Smiling!



With Love,

Shruti

Images Courtesy: GOOGLE IMAGES

34 comments:

RAM said...

Hey shruthi very good yaar. Nicely captured the feel of love in those 55 words. :) Keep writing

Shruti said...

@ram
thnx :)

Prads said...

nice feel in tat 55fiction da...
super... too read....


Note:
why always ending in sad note.
plzz do write some cheerful works. and suspense kind of stuffs.

Regards,
Prasee

Shruti said...

@prasee
this is not a sad ending!!
her life became normal wen dad regained consciousness and her mom became cheerful!!

Shilpa Garg said...

Good One!! :)

Can I have your mail id please??

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

this one is very nice...:D

Shruti said...

@shilpa,sid
thank u so much!!

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

oyw wrote a 55-fiction myself...do read it...and ping me on facebook...

Indian Pundit said...

Good one again Shruti!!!!

Cheers... improving all the time!!

Check out my recent post again got tagged by Shilpa.

Cheers

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

see my latest post for 55 fiction...is dere any other means of cntacting u? IM mayb orkut...like that???
u can safely put that in my comments...won't approve ;)

Shruti said...

@sid
sure ll look into ur 55fiction

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Shruti,

You have expressed the power of love in 55 words; like a single mustard seed, your short fiction appeals more than it appears.

Cheers

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Hi Shruti! visit my blog to view my first hand try at 55 fiction :)

Bharathi said...

To be honest, I am little dumb in understanding most of the 55-fiction kind of stories. And that is why I wait untill someone clarify the ending in the comments section. However I wnjoy once that is done :-). You have done a good job so far.

Shruti said...

@bharathi
this 55fiction is not complicated na?!
i don understand why you don't understand!!
thanks for your wishes!

Bharathi said...

The problem is not with you but its with me and my understanding. yes I understood your story after reading comments.

Shruti said...

@bharathi...
hehehe :D
atlast you understood!

Shankar said...

ha..ha..bharathi..i too have the same problem..... whenever i see the number 55....i would wait for others to comment....good one shruthi... i understood this one..since i know about u..

Shruti said...

@shankz
thanks buddy!!
i didn't post the one i told you!

savitha said...

Very nice and cute story dear.. Keep posting ur works.

Shruti said...

@savi
thanks!

Srividya said...

true power!!
cheers..keep going di:):)best wishes

Shruti said...

@sri
thank you so much

archana said...

hi shruti. ur 55 fiction is very nice... really a power of love... keep goin

Venky said...

power of love or should i say the power of smile which gave it away in this case

Shruti said...

@archana
thank you so much da!!

keep smiling

@venky

Seriously power of smile is measured by the power of love.
thanks for the visit.

Geetha said...

fiction 55!cool!!gimme a hi-5 wen u c me...touching fictions....

Shruti said...

@srivats
thanks bro!
hi-5 assured!!

balasrini said...

Gud one Shruti!

Love is the greatest power on earth... It can conquer anything... but we ppl deceive some other things as power and go behind those....

Shruti said...

@Bala
Ahhh... This techie is speaking about love! Cupid smitten you eh? Who is that lucky?

balasrini said...

Hello... wait... wait... I was speaking more generically about love... It may be b/w a parent and their kid, between friends, between siblings... So dont think of much ma...

Shruti said...

@Bala
Sari sari....yepdi ketalum ess aagarenga! Pathukaren ;)

balasrini said...

Eppadi kettalum unmai onnu tham madam!!! :-)

Shruti said...

@Bala
Unmaiya illaya nu seekrema kandu pidikaren!

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