Hi everyone! This is my 20th 55 Fiction. Wow, I am really feeling happy.
Understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
THE STORY
Shaan was narrating the storyline of his directorial venture to his friend, Madhu.
After describing the tragic death of the lovers, he turned to see the moistened eyes of Madhu.
Shaan : My! this is just a sentimental story, don't cry.
Madhu : Tears are not for your sentiments, it is because of the Yawn I controlled
Yawn Specialist - Venky, gave me the concept YAWN and I wrote this 55Fiction based on the concept he gave me. So, how was it?
With Love,
Image Courtesy : Google Images
84 comments:
you made me proud de carry on your good work. I am glad gave this concept to you.
@Venky
Hey nejamave va? Glad that i didn't let u down!
lol....but good work on the concept...and it is never easy stifling a yawn...:P
Good one, Shruti...
Funny story, good concept! :)
@Kaka
Experience speaks eh?!?!! :P :P
Thanks!
Good sense of humour!
Good that you passed it to me thro this post!!
@Guria
Thanks Girlie! Really, struggled a lot to bring this in 55words!!
@Bala
Hey thanks pa :)
hey nice one queen :P
jokes apart, this was a funny 55ver..
@Neha
Heeheh.. even Butter queen acknowledged this :P
Thanks Neha!
Hi Shruti,
good one..:) ..
@Prams
Hey thanks!!
Good one, bechara Shaan :(
@Mustaf
Bechara means?!
Bechara means poor guy,the way I understood this, his story must be so boring that Madhu felt terribly tired and so she yawned, so i said poor shaan.
Did you mean something else? :O
@Mustaf
U understood correctly! Btw, Madhu is a HE :P
I didn't understand the meaning og Bechara...so asked :)
P.S : Used HTML codes?!
oh that hindi thing :)? ok no more hindi while commenting :D
And i used your codes, it is perfect now. I had replied you in my blog.Thanks again here.
@Mustaf
Hey thanks a ton yaar!! I will be really glad if u don't comment in hindi :P
U r always welcome :)
It is a Googleee.....bit a spin....bit lite......a chick-let....jus a one more reading type..... sort of ...
but the anthropologist in me says it is marvellous.....Yes, I mean it....
I am not sure whether your intention, behind the writing is same, and exactly, what I perceived ..... may be it is jus my interpretation.....It seems quite simple, blend with subtle irony, but i caught many unsaid things(isms) hidden in those nuances of relativity and realism.....
I liked the way u have drifted from categorizing urself in 55 fiction....
Good effort.... :) :) :)
ipo than comedy ku erungi iruka!! nice nice! :D... kotavi vidrathula ena ore siripu...hmm come to think of it..ll do a 55 fiction as well? ena pa solra...ore mokaya poidum nu i think!
he he....
:)
great work shruti...
reminds me of my profs....
they also make make us yawn...
Haha... Turned out to be a joke... At first I thought it's really sentimental... Anyway, humor is good. A witty attempt :-)
Rofl...super...
@ Shruti
This was really fun reading it :D
Also I read that in the above comments that Madhu is HE...hmm...I really wonder why is Madhu is HE...??
Anyway great attempt :)
lols .... :D :D
good one
Lolz loved the humour in the story... :) keep writing :)
Good one girl.. I was really ROTFLing here.. nice concept too :)
That was very good Shruti!
I too react similarly at times when I am subjected to something just too boring to bear which I can't run from.
Keep up the good work!
Cheers!!
LOL! Good 1 shruti :)
That was a tough subject ... writing a 55er for 'yawn'
I liked it..
nice lighter one, wspecially in the morning when I m about to start work :-). Hope I woudnt yarn today.
:)!
Keep it up!!
Nalla irundhadhu da.. I really liked.. congrats on completing your 20th 55 fiction.. :)
@Mahesh
Whatta comment yaar! Yours was the first comment I read after switching on the system!
""It is a Googleee.....bit a spin....bit lite......a chick-let....jus a one more reading type..... sort of""
Sort of?!?! Woh kya hai?
what u presumed? Its simple I guess!
Thanks a lot buddy!
@Hary
Venky kudutha concept apdi :)
But i struggled a lot while writing this 55Fiction... Couldn't compress it in 55Words...Happy 2 see the response :)
The second part of ur comment.. I couldn't understand
@RSV
Thanks :)
My professor's did the same to me :) Singing lullaby :P
@Darshan
Enjoyed it?
Thanks yaar :)
@Sid
Thanks yaar :)
@Rachana
Madhu being a HE or SHE doesn't make any difference. But I wrote it as HE. That's why i corrected Mustaf!
Thanks girlie :)
@Naveen
Thanks :)
@Rajlakshmi
Thanks girlie :)
@Avada
Heheheh :P
Thanks :)
@Chatterbox
I do the same always when I am in my class :)
@Shruti
Shruti(MM) liked Shruti's 55Fiction :)
Thanks! Indeed it was really tough! Glad that I managed to shape this well!
@Bharathi
Don't forget to tell me how your day was! Was full of yawn?!
@Makk
Real appreciation from u! Then it must be good :)
Thanks :)
@Raji
Thank u so much da :)
U r the first one to wish me on the completion of 20 55fictions :)
Hehe...Boring college classes ki yaad aa gayi in which I used to yawn and sometimes sleep with eyes wide open and sleeping mind :D
@Ekam
Sleep with eyes wide open? My friends are expert in them!
weird concept and good narration !
This one was different from your 55-ers and on the lighter side :D ...enjoyed it a lot ...
@Priyan
Thanks Buddy!
@ Shruti,
I dont mean it is simple....
It may look simple.....
but i felt it is marvellous....i said it in next line na...
I gave you a compliment , but the other way....
:) :) :)
@Dhiman
Hi dhiman, welcome back after a longggg time :)
Enjoyed?!
That's what I want :)
Thanks buddy!!
@Mahesh
WoW!!
I breathed a sense of relief!
I am very happy to see such a comment!!
Ha ha this is simply superb Shru! Am yawning as I say this ;) ;) ;)
@Swaram
hey girlie! I bored u so much that u stated yawning ??? :O :O
:P
Thanks sweety!
Arre no :P I felt as a part of the story myself that I started yawning he he he ;)
@Swaram
I guess Shaan's story is that much poor!! First it was madhu who yawned, now its u!! :P
Shaan, next time write a gud story :P
I'm in expert in it too :D
ha ha ha... :) liked it..
you are good in writing funnier things in 55 fiction.. mostly I have seen only the sad things in 55 fiction...
@Ekam
Wow girl, u have so many talents :P
@Kanagu
U haven't read any of my so called funnier 55Fictions?
thanks buddy!!
Congratulations on the 20th.
Another good story and a pleasure to read.
Yvonne.
@Yvonne
Thank you so much for the wishes lady!
hahaha...good one, shruti!!
@Sapphire
Thanks girl :)
Very Nice one :)
Made me laugh :)
Reminded me my one of my close friends..who used to sleep in every class... :)
Cheers!!
@Amit
u wont sleep in any class??? :O
Thanks buddy
It was vey simple but the narration was superb.
@Chowla ji
Thank you so much ji!
Ha ha ha. its not a very busy day and I coudnt avoid a couple of yarns.
@Bharathi
Hope nobody saw your yawn's :P
Hey, thanks for coming all the way and telling about ur day!
ha..ha.. that was funny... nice one...
Hi di....
sorry for the late comment.... lol..that was funny.... a very good one.. VEnky's influence he..he....
@Wall paper
Sorry, I don't know ur name :)
Hi and a big welcome to my blog!
Thanku!
@Shankar
:P
Thanks :)
Epdi comment lam panna aarambicha!
today morning got some free time... some one asked for my template.. I came to blogger for giving them my template....
seri blogger varaika vandhutom..ellaroda blog layum comment panlam nu... going to everyone's blog and commenting now.....
@Shankar
Yenna perundhanmai da unakku!! Unna nenacha perumaiya irukku!
why??whats there in giving template.... and I designed one slider for him too.... just a help from my side... that's it...
@Shankar
Naan template pathi sollala... yenna perundhanmaiya yella blog layum comment panre...
hello.... Na enniku comment pannama irundhurken??.. overa pesadha... ask bharathi..ashwini..shilpa.... I have never missed even one of their post....
@Shankar
Nan yenna pesinalum theva illama sanda varum! Leave it!
To whomsoever it may concern the Madhu mentioned here was not me ! Kidding..
Nice post..
@Madhu
Lol :P
Thanks :)
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