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Tuesday, October 27, 2009

55 Fiction - #20

Hi everyone! This is my 20th 55 Fiction. Wow, I am really feeling happy.
Understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

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THE STORY

Shaan was narrating the storyline of his directorial venture to his friend, Madhu.cartoon After describing the tragic death of the lovers, he turned to see the moistened eyes of Madhu.
Shaan : My! this is just a sentimental story, don't cry.
Madhu : Tears are not for your sentiments, it is because of the Yawn I controlled

Yawn Specialist - Venky, gave me the concept YAWN and I wrote this 55Fiction based on the concept he gave me. So, how was it?

With Love,

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84 comments:

vEnKy said...

you made me proud de carry on your good work. I am glad gave this concept to you.

Shruti said...

@Venky
Hey nejamave va? Glad that i didn't let u down!

Kaka said...

lol....but good work on the concept...and it is never easy stifling a yawn...:P

Guria said...

Good one, Shruti...
Funny story, good concept! :)

Shruti said...

@Kaka
Experience speaks eh?!?!! :P :P
Thanks!

balasrini said...

Good sense of humour!

Good that you passed it to me thro this post!!

Shruti said...

@Guria
Thanks Girlie! Really, struggled a lot to bring this in 55words!!

Shruti said...

@Bala
Hey thanks pa :)

Neha said...

hey nice one queen :P

jokes apart, this was a funny 55ver..

Shruti said...

@Neha
Heeheh.. even Butter queen acknowledged this :P
Thanks Neha!

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Shruti,

good one..:) ..

Shruti said...

@Prams
Hey thanks!!

Mustaf said...

Good one, bechara Shaan :(

Shruti said...

@Mustaf
Bechara means?!

Mustaf said...

Bechara means poor guy,the way I understood this, his story must be so boring that Madhu felt terribly tired and so she yawned, so i said poor shaan.

Did you mean something else? :O

Shruti said...

@Mustaf
U understood correctly! Btw, Madhu is a HE :P
I didn't understand the meaning og Bechara...so asked :)

P.S : Used HTML codes?!

Mustaf said...

oh that hindi thing :)? ok no more hindi while commenting :D

And i used your codes, it is perfect now. I had replied you in my blog.Thanks again here.

Shruti said...

@Mustaf
Hey thanks a ton yaar!! I will be really glad if u don't comment in hindi :P

U r always welcome :)

Mahesh said...

It is a Googleee.....bit a spin....bit lite......a chick-let....jus a one more reading type..... sort of ...

but the anthropologist in me says it is marvellous.....Yes, I mean it....

I am not sure whether your intention, behind the writing is same, and exactly, what I perceived ..... may be it is jus my interpretation.....It seems quite simple, blend with subtle irony, but i caught many unsaid things(isms) hidden in those nuances of relativity and realism.....

I liked the way u have drifted from categorizing urself in 55 fiction....
Good effort.... :) :) :)

HaRy!! said...

ipo than comedy ku erungi iruka!! nice nice! :D... kotavi vidrathula ena ore siripu...hmm come to think of it..ll do a 55 fiction as well? ena pa solra...ore mokaya poidum nu i think!

RSV said...

he he....
:)
great work shruti...
reminds me of my profs....
they also make make us yawn...

Darshan Chande said...

Haha... Turned out to be a joke... At first I thought it's really sentimental... Anyway, humor is good. A witty attempt :-)

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

Rofl...super...

Rachana Shakyawar said...

@ Shruti

This was really fun reading it :D
Also I read that in the above comments that Madhu is HE...hmm...I really wonder why is Madhu is HE...??


Anyway great attempt :)

ηανєєη said...

lols .... :D :D
good one

Rajlakshmi said...

Lolz loved the humour in the story... :) keep writing :)

evanescentthoughts said...

Good one girl.. I was really ROTFLing here.. nice concept too :)

Chatterbox said...

That was very good Shruti!
I too react similarly at times when I am subjected to something just too boring to bear which I can't run from.

Keep up the good work!

Cheers!!

MM said...

LOL! Good 1 shruti :)
That was a tough subject ... writing a 55er for 'yawn'
I liked it..

Bharathi said...

nice lighter one, wspecially in the morning when I m about to start work :-). Hope I woudnt yarn today.

Makk said...

:)!

Keep it up!!

Rajalakshmi Umapathy said...

Nalla irundhadhu da.. I really liked.. congrats on completing your 20th 55 fiction.. :)

Shruti said...

@Mahesh
Whatta comment yaar! Yours was the first comment I read after switching on the system!
""It is a Googleee.....bit a spin....bit lite......a chick-let....jus a one more reading type..... sort of""
Sort of?!?! Woh kya hai?

what u presumed? Its simple I guess!

Thanks a lot buddy!

Shruti said...

@Hary
Venky kudutha concept apdi :)
But i struggled a lot while writing this 55Fiction... Couldn't compress it in 55Words...Happy 2 see the response :)

The second part of ur comment.. I couldn't understand

Shruti said...

@RSV
Thanks :)
My professor's did the same to me :) Singing lullaby :P

Shruti said...

@Darshan
Enjoyed it?
Thanks yaar :)

Shruti said...

@Sid
Thanks yaar :)

Shruti said...

@Rachana
Madhu being a HE or SHE doesn't make any difference. But I wrote it as HE. That's why i corrected Mustaf!

Thanks girlie :)

Shruti said...

@Naveen
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@Rajlakshmi
Thanks girlie :)

Shruti said...

@Avada
Heheheh :P
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@Chatterbox
I do the same always when I am in my class :)

Shruti said...

@Shruti
Shruti(MM) liked Shruti's 55Fiction :)
Thanks! Indeed it was really tough! Glad that I managed to shape this well!

Shruti said...

@Bharathi
Don't forget to tell me how your day was! Was full of yawn?!

Shruti said...

@Makk
Real appreciation from u! Then it must be good :)
Thanks :)

Shruti said...

@Raji
Thank u so much da :)
U r the first one to wish me on the completion of 20 55fictions :)

Ekam said...

Hehe...Boring college classes ki yaad aa gayi in which I used to yawn and sometimes sleep with eyes wide open and sleeping mind :D

Shruti said...

@Ekam
Sleep with eyes wide open? My friends are expert in them!

pRiYaN...! said...

weird concept and good narration !

dmanji said...

This one was different from your 55-ers and on the lighter side :D ...enjoyed it a lot ...

Shruti said...

@Priyan
Thanks Buddy!

Mahesh said...

@ Shruti,

I dont mean it is simple....
It may look simple.....
but i felt it is marvellous....i said it in next line na...

I gave you a compliment , but the other way....
:) :) :)

Shruti said...

@Dhiman
Hi dhiman, welcome back after a longggg time :)
Enjoyed?!
That's what I want :)
Thanks buddy!!

Shruti said...

@Mahesh
WoW!!
I breathed a sense of relief!
I am very happy to see such a comment!!

Swaram said...

Ha ha this is simply superb Shru! Am yawning as I say this ;) ;) ;)

Shruti said...

@Swaram
hey girlie! I bored u so much that u stated yawning ??? :O :O
:P
Thanks sweety!

Swaram said...

Arre no :P I felt as a part of the story myself that I started yawning he he he ;)

Shruti said...

@Swaram
I guess Shaan's story is that much poor!! First it was madhu who yawned, now its u!! :P
Shaan, next time write a gud story :P

Ekam said...

I'm in expert in it too :D

kanagu said...

ha ha ha... :) liked it..

you are good in writing funnier things in 55 fiction.. mostly I have seen only the sad things in 55 fiction...

Shruti said...

@Ekam
Wow girl, u have so many talents :P

Shruti said...

@Kanagu
U haven't read any of my so called funnier 55Fictions?
thanks buddy!!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Congratulations on the 20th.
Another good story and a pleasure to read.

Yvonne.

Shruti said...

@Yvonne
Thank you so much for the wishes lady!

Sapphire said...

hahaha...good one, shruti!!

Shruti said...

@Sapphire
Thanks girl :)

Singh Amit said...

Very Nice one :)
Made me laugh :)
Reminded me my one of my close friends..who used to sleep in every class... :)
Cheers!!

Shruti said...

@Amit
u wont sleep in any class??? :O
Thanks buddy

BK Chowla said...

It was vey simple but the narration was superb.

Shruti said...

@Chowla ji
Thank you so much ji!

Bharathi said...

Ha ha ha. its not a very busy day and I coudnt avoid a couple of yarns.

Shruti said...

@Bharathi
Hope nobody saw your yawn's :P
Hey, thanks for coming all the way and telling about ur day!

Wallpaper World said...

ha..ha.. that was funny... nice one...

Shankar said...

Hi di....

sorry for the late comment.... lol..that was funny.... a very good one.. VEnky's influence he..he....

Shruti said...

@Wall paper
Sorry, I don't know ur name :)
Hi and a big welcome to my blog!
Thanku!

Shruti said...

@Shankar
:P
Thanks :)
Epdi comment lam panna aarambicha!

Shankar said...

today morning got some free time... some one asked for my template.. I came to blogger for giving them my template....

seri blogger varaika vandhutom..ellaroda blog layum comment panlam nu... going to everyone's blog and commenting now.....

Shruti said...

@Shankar
Yenna perundhanmai da unakku!! Unna nenacha perumaiya irukku!

Shankar said...

why??whats there in giving template.... and I designed one slider for him too.... just a help from my side... that's it...

Shruti said...

@Shankar
Naan template pathi sollala... yenna perundhanmaiya yella blog layum comment panre...

Shankar said...

hello.... Na enniku comment pannama irundhurken??.. overa pesadha... ask bharathi..ashwini..shilpa.... I have never missed even one of their post....

Shruti said...

@Shankar
Nan yenna pesinalum theva illama sanda varum! Leave it!

MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said...

To whomsoever it may concern the Madhu mentioned here was not me ! Kidding..

Nice post..

Shruti said...

@Madhu
Lol :P
Thanks :)

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