Hi :)
Understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
SLAYING
The cops arrive on the scene.
"Looks like murder. He's been shot in the chest.", they say.
His wife seems to be in shock. Their little daughter is sobbing.
"Do you suspect anyone, ma'am?" they ask the wife.
She looks at them sadly. "The gun's in the cupboard. He was trying to molest my daughter"
How is this? Liked it? Drop a comment, let me know what you feel After reading this!
With Love,
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72 comments:
I did not like it...
I LOVED it. Truly Exceptional! :)
@Guria
Thanks a ton sreya!
Too good.. another awesome 55 fiction..same here.. did not like it.. but LOVED it :)
Excellent work Shruti!!
A very sobering thought to this story......all to apparent in the world today. To achieve the message in 55 words is remarkable well done.
Yvonne.
it was great.. awaiting a post on this topic..
Hey, Shrutuuuuu.. I'll b very blunt here(as um alwez ;).. wn evry one starts taking up the same issue one aftr the othr, it kinda bcums dragging.. nd thts wat happend wn i read this aftr having read Shilpa, Sid, Rahul and couple of othrs in last few days. Mayb bcoz i cud see no new dimension being added to this issue. (In Blog-a-Ton, we do the same thing but mayb format is sch tht it adds fun to it)..
However, the story is well written as alwez.. Keep thm cuming :)
Very well written, .... It is practical, responsive, responsible, relevant, revolutionary ,radical, instinctual, straight and it do sends a warning
I wrote my opinions on the same topic in my blog with anger and anguish. I read few posts on the same topic on my friend's blogs too. But your words had reflected my anger in 55 words.
I do really appreciate your approach and stand towards the social issues and concerns..... Keep exploring the social arena in all aspects.
Great effort buddy.
hey shruti,
well done..:)
amazing...again very different...from whr do u get so many different ideas gal?
a good 55 shruthi... nice one...
you are becoming really society conscious these days giving a lot of messages to the public good one.
@Avada
hey thanks a lot girlie! Nice to know that you LOVED this!
@Chatterbox
Thank you!
@Yvonne
To be frank i tried really hard to phrase this one!
Thanks!
@Vishnu
Hey, idhula post ah! :O :O
Will try yaar!!
That was very well written Shruti :)
@Vipsy
Hey, thought about it but i felt like writing this! Thanks a ton vipsy!
@Mahesh
Hey thanks a lot buddy! I tried to force the meaning and anger in 55words and I think I've done justice to whatever i wrote!Thanks mahesh!
@Prams
Thank you sweety!
@Neha
Hey when i see a daily I read something related to these social issues! I try writing them as 55F or a story or some blunt things!
That's it!
Thanks!
@Shankz
Thanks ;)
@Venks
Hey, giving messages in a way where it can reach people is gud na? That too, these issues are tuff 4 me to write!
@KG
Thanks!
It could be someone's reality who knows...
strong write there girl.. way to go!
Rane
Some things we dare to write and you give them just in 55 words.. A good, clean and touching one..
what can I say??Omg...ur brilliant shruti.. :D lemme close down the gap before a few flies cave in.. :P
Wonderful.. :)
Love,
Nikhil
Great one.. :)
Very Nicely written..
Keep writing such Societal post...
Our little contribution would create a big difference.. :)
Cheers!!
@Rane
hey welcome back after a long time!!
Thanks yaar!
@Raji
The advantage is you need nt explain things in details..Just words with rite emotions bring the stuff!!
Thanks!
@Multimenon!
Long time no see?! Thanks yaar!
Fill in the gaps soon!
@Amit
Hey,Even i felt the same...it can reach places and someone at sometime will realise!
nice another thrilling cop story
i think u rock n all ur 55 fiction
hahhahhahaa
Regards,
Prasee
@Prasee
Thanks buddy!
more awareness the merrier ..... gud
thats a nice one.
oye..conveyed yur message plain and straight!! gud one as usual again!...kalakify yu!
u could hav kept that as a suspense.. but this one is nice too.. :D
shruthi...
we ll make a deal... wheneva u wanna write a 55 fiction, find two themes... one for u n one for me..
khe khe khe...
cuz i dono how u find topics for 55F???? ;)
do we hav a deal??? ;)
ugh! if a reaction is what you were aiming for, I don't think you could have done any better...can visualize the 'debate' the trial on this one. ugh! gives me the creeps
You have said every thing in the post.
You seem to be becoming an expert in 55
Wow.I guess that sums it up.I LOVED it!So much power in those words.
@Naveen
Thanks yaar!
@Bharathi!
These days your comment doesn't exceed 10 words or sometimes u don't even comment! :O
anyways!
Thanks and ur comment mean a lot to me and You are the first person to review my blog!!
@Hary
Thanksngooooo!!
@Anoop
How should i maintain the suspense?!
@Anoop
No Idea! But u think of concept and lemme writ! :P
good one.. and happy diwali..
@Kay
Hey, these incidents will surely send shivers down the spine!
@Chowla Ji
Am still an amateur!
Thanks for your wishes!
@Miss Nobody
Thanks cutie!!
@Abdul
Thanks re!
Thanks for ur wishes!
Hey that s one of the beautiful 55 fiction. You introduced me to this kind of fictions and you have already become an expert in this :) Keep going
@RAM
Hey, yellam unga aasirvaadham dan! Thanks!
Good one. Such men need to kicked out of this planet!
@Adi
Thanks re :)
Come join hands and we all shall kick them out!
man... u wrote a fiction 55 on the topic... nice.
it's one of the best 55f in your blog
gr8
Good one:)
Hey Shruti,
A 55 fiction well written by you as always... This time I guessed nothing about the suspense part....
I just adore your writing because even when you write some crisp writing, you always try to impart a kind of social issue in it... That's really great DUDETTE....
I jus luv ur writing Shruti!!!
Guessed the ending but your story is superb.Liked it a lot.Write more Shruti:)
a good one shruti ..
I liked your 55 punch on the currently popular issue...
it emanates positivism and a determined action..
@Sid
Thanks buddy!
@Chetan
One of the best eh?? Thanks a ton re :)
@Ekam
Thanks a ton re!
@Bala
U dint guess he ending! Whoa!! Now, Its really good :P
Hey, just my contribution to the society! Avlo dan!!
U love my writing? Thanks bala :)
@Sams
U guessed the ending!??
Oh migh God!! But will write something which u cant guess...Will write more sammy!!
Thanks!
@RSV
Thanks rahul!!
Simply awsun Shruti..........................And the ending is awsum...............newaz im followin ya blog
@Quintessence
Hi girlie!
Welcome to my space and thanks a lot!
Bingo! Didn't see that coming. Lovely! :-)
@Karthik
hey thanks buddy!
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