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Monday, December 14, 2009

55 Fiction - #26

Hiya buddies! Well, as the post name indicates, here comes my 26th 55 Fiction! So everyone knows what a 55Fiction is right?! So read the 55Fiction and let me know what you feel about it!

HIS LOVE

man-rice

She was there, Right before his eyes, gleaming in white. She was hot. He loved her and felt excited to see her. The moment he thought about her, he experienced chemical changes in his stomach. He went and laid his hands on her. Being a coolie, its a rare thing that he eats Rice.

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With Love,

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13 comments:

Makk said...

humm....

Good one.

HOw are you by the way? hows life?

dmanji said...

True a something basic like plate of rice is luxury for some people ....and I am sure I am not first...Am I?

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Most enjoyable, how you can write in 55 words beats me, Well done.

Take care
Yvonne.

Shruti said...

>>Makk
I think all of u guys have read this! This is a old fiction I am reposting. I lost all my comments on this :(

But Thank u! Yeah am fine and life is moving at snail's pace.

Shruti said...

>>Dhiman
U were third in the original post.. But i lost all the comments :(

Yeah plate of rice is the basic thing for them!

Shruti said...

>>Yvonne
You try this apart from your poetry's na?

HaRy!! said...

am i wrong... deja vu ?
enga aale kanam?

HaRy

The Aspirant said...

lolllllllzzzzzzzzz
dats a nice one.......
really nice

RamMmm said...

Good one. I liked this 55er. It is true, for some people. (aana oru sandhegam. What will the coolie eat? kanji, I suppose)

Shruti said...

>>Hary
Not deja vu! U have already read this! Ne dan aaleye kaanum!

Shruti said...

>>TA
Hey thanks :D

Shruti said...

>>Rammmm
Hey thanks! Yeah generally they have Kanji..

Bala said...

Good one with a good theme!!

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