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Saturday, January 23, 2010

55 Fiction - #30

55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

LETTERS

It was the last letter. She wanted to finish it soon.
It read : I’m sorry mom – I loved him...
It was punctuated by many sobs from the old lady.
“.... I can’t live without him, and so I’ve decided……… ”
She broke down – like she had every day for the past twelve years.

With Love,

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39 comments:

RamMmm said...

You seem to have a deep-rooted infatuation or love for tragedy. Back to square one again. :-|

Nice line-up of words. The first two sentences provided a neat alibi and good choice.

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Excellent piece of writing. so few words yet it speaks volumns.

Yvonne.

Karthikeyan S said...

Nice!!

gils said...

aaaarrrrrrrrgggggh.......mudiala....podhum...ithoda nirithikuvom...

Guria said...

This has got to be one of your most eloquent!! Keep at it, girl!

lostworld said...

head spinning..suicide is never the answer me feels.. loved ones suffer too much. any alternative is better.

cheers!

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

hmmmm....:O seriously u do think only from heart!!!

Nicey!!!

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

o_O wat r the chances I was first....O_o

Rajlakshmi said...

ouch!! that was sooo touching... just loved this one... you are becoming better and better each day at this form of story telling...

The Aspirant said...

its worth reading u again nd again, seriously.........
i think u've mastered d art of saying nthing widout leaving nething unsaid.....

Tavish Chadha said...

tragic story.. very nicely told...
btw i am falling in love with your F55s... and i dont think I can live without them... so I have decided to .................................comeread them often... hehehe

Cheers!
Tavish
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Samadrita said...

No surprise element in here.But very touching nonetheless. :)
Way to go girl!

MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said...

29 F55 ? Good God ! You are giving Shilpa a run for her money ? :-) .

Good one ; liked it.

Makk said...

humm,,,,

Missing your own Double edge... you can right better.

still nice one!

Sojo Varughese said...

You are getting good at this :)

kanagu said...

thembi thembi azha vaikaama vida maateenga pola irukee..

nice one :) :)

vEnKy said...

Very typical of your posts. At first go i couldnt understand then i got it

Harini said...

Hmm.. a love tragedy... the kinds that i dont like reading. A nice one though :).

Shruti said...

>>Rammm
Yeah May be! I just love writing such senti things!
And regarding those words - I spent more time in arrangine the phrase :)
Ty :)

Shruti said...

>>Yvonne
Thanks a bunch!! You are always encouraging!

Shruti said...

>>KK
Thanks!

Shruti said...

>>Gils
:-( :-(

Shruti said...

>>Guria
Welcome back to H&M after a long time!! Thanks a lot for those words :)

Shruti said...

>>Rohitha
Yeah! But are they following the other options? They are infact blinded by love!

Shruti said...

>>Sid
Thanksey!
Btw, what made you to think that I think from heart?

Shruti said...

>>Sid
U saw ur chances right?!

Shruti said...

>>Rajlakshmi
Hey thanks girl :)
Infact u won a contest on this fictions!

Shruti said...

>>TA
Hey thank u so much! Infact I am really happy to see ur comment! No matter how late it is, u read every post of mine fully and post a honest comment!

Shruti said...

>>Tavish
Love is in the air ;)
Tavish is in love!! Oooooooh :P
jokes apart, u are welcome to reads my 55Fictions :)

Shruti said...

>>Sammy
This is a straight one, so no suspense :D
Thanks girlie :)

Shruti said...

>>Madhu
Welcome back :)
Infact Shilpa is my Guru :)
Thank u :)

Shruti said...

>>Makk
Hey really even I felt after publishing that I could have wrote a better one!

Shruti said...

>>Sojo
Thanks buddy :)

Shruti said...

>>Kanagu
Duh-wuh :(
All the dust in ur eyes will go off if u cry! So no harm in making u cry I guess :P

Thanks re :)

Shruti said...

>>Venks
Finally u understood it na? Gud :)

Shruti said...

>>Harini
U don like love tragedies? uhhhh! Thanks anyways :)

Haresh said...

Brilliant piece of writing!

Loved the last line. It kinda shook me up.

Shruti said...

>>Haresh
Hi haresh, welcome to H&M!
Thank u so much for those words :)

Bala said...

Brought out the feeling that you wanted to convey very well Shruti!!
But I don’t like the suicide theme in it..

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