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Wednesday, January 20, 2010

55 Fiction - #29

Hope everyone knows what a 55Fiction is right?! So read the 55Fiction and let me know what you feel about it!

FATE??

He was astonished on seeing the big malls, skyscrapers. He told himself, "I will be working somewhere here in next 2 years". A gang rushed past him and he was floored. Bystanders pitied him. He was confused. When he tried getting up, he saw blood trickling from his abdomen. The gang shouted, "Have it blackie"


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47 comments:

Shilpa Garg said...

Ah...a sad turn of events!!
Racial abuse and discrimination in today's age is truly sad! :(

Shruti said...

>>Shilpz
Yeah, I hate them!

dmanji said...

however sad but racialism is a reality and one of biggest ills of humanity...

Vineeta said...

I just imagined indians in Australia on reading this post :( Loathe them!

Makk said...

you hit the bulls eyes.

Keep it up!

Bharathi said...

fair enough. I was expecting a mis-encounter :-)

HaRy!! said...

:( ....

Yellow Tulip said...

sad anti-climax..

Shruti said...

>>Dhiman
Yeah re, u are correct! Reality hits hard!

Shruti said...

>>Vineeta
Yeah, I wrote this keeping them in mind

Shruti said...

>>Makk
Thank u ji :)

Shruti said...

>>Bharathi
I always read to ur comment first or search ur comments in case of my 55Fictions! Cos, ur logic sometimes amuses me!

:) U r almost there!

Shruti said...

>>Hary
:(

Shruti said...

>>Yellow Tulip
yeah it is!

P.S : Welcome back after a long time! Hope u r doing good!

Karthikeyan S said...

Soo Sad :((

Shruti said...

>>KK
yeah it is

Raksha Raman said...

Tragic..Wish it would end like bollywood movies where hero jumps up despite the bleeding abdomen and beats the bad guys up! But reality is something else. Plot is nice though :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

A different 55-er. Good one.

kanagu said...

sad ending... :( but the racism exists :(

reminded me of one of my childhood incident.. when someone pushed me from the back while running to catch the bus... :D :D

Shruti said...

>>Raksha
Hi girl :), So nice to see u in H&M! All bollywood stuffs have one such ending! But practical life is different from the reel life as u said :)

Thank u! Keep Visiting!

Shruti said...

>>Saurabh
Thank you birthday boy!

Shruti said...

>>Kanagu
Yeah it exists! What can we do to the Indians in Australia except for pitying them?

I cant understand Ur childhood memory :(. Why they pushed u from the back?!

RSV said...

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but aren't you participating in blogomania:
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vEnKy said...

good one. U shoud include brownies to not the chocolates but the asians :-)

Bharathi said...

oh, thanks. I try to write honest comments. thats all.

Kavya said...

Hi Shruthi, I chanced upon your blog today. And I absolutely love your stories.. Extremely innovative! The accolades you've been receiving are well deserving!

To more stories... Cheers!!

Samadrita said...

Ah racial abuse!
Read To Kill A Mockingbird if you haven't.

Tavish Chadha said...

nice! its sad that we humans still discriminate... very nicely written Shruti..

--Tavish
Latest blog post: Fiction 55 - Shift+Delete

Shruti said...

>>RSV
Grrr, its okay!
Will check the link!

Shruti said...

>>Venks
They don't distinguish Blackie's and brownies! They consider everyone the same!

Shruti said...

>>Bharathi
That's what I like a lot! Thank u bharathi!

Shruti said...

>>Kavya
Welcome on board! A biggg Huggg to you! Confused? Girl u are my 100th follower! Am excited like anything...

Really glad that you like my stories :)

Keep visiting!

Shruti said...

>>Sammy
To Kill A Mocking bird by Harper Lee right? I love that book sammy! Especially when Boo Radley saves Jem and scout and disappears suddenly! Its one of the best book I have ever read! The court scenes involving Atticus is marvellous na?

Shruti said...

>>Tavish
Thank u so much re :)

Sat_hi_sh said...

Racial abuse is headlines in India & this fiction couldnt have come at a better time...

Nice illustration pa :)
Keep blogging
cheers !!!

gils said...

huh...semma nachu story...aana very bitter truth :(

Rajlakshmi said...

racial abuse... ahhh how much i hate those who distinguish people on color... its sickenning...
well written

Daone said...

Ah, that was impressive. Good work, gal :)
By the way, I am a writer myself. You might want to check out my work. :)

Shruti said...

>>Satz
Hey correct! Wherever we turn, there is this news! Pity them!

Thanks re :)

Shruti said...

>>Gils
Egjactly :)

Shruti said...

>>Rajlakshmi
U told correctly! Even I hate it!!
Ty :)

Shruti said...

>>Daone
Thank u re :)
U also a writer eh? Off to ur blog now :)

Gyanban said...

Nicely written.Reminded me of stuff happening in Ozland..

Shruti said...

>>Gyanban
Yeah! That was the motive behind this!

The Aspirant said...

a gud motive behind d post.....
d discrimination shud nt b let to increase as it vl leave wrld a harder place to live

Shruti said...

>>TA
You are correct! Already its a difficult place to survive! The reason- fellow human beings!

Bala said...

Racism’ told in simple words!!

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