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Friday, January 15, 2010

55 Fiction - #28

Here comes my 27th 55 Fiction! So everyone knows what a 55Fiction is right?! So read the 55Fiction and let me know what you feel about it!

IN HEAVEN...

heaven-gates-011

She died in a gory accident and reaches heaven.

She : God, I want to live long.
God : Your time is over, kid!
She : Fine, you have a computer with internet?
God : Why?
She : Yes or no
God : No
She : Gosh, I have to moderate the comments for the new post in my blog.
God : !!!???!!! *Faints*

That's the power of a blogger Big Grin Tongue
How is this new genre?

With Love,

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76 comments:

Karthikeyan S said...

Mokka Poduradhuku Oru Alavu irukudu, Replaced Yeman With God?? He He :))

Shruti said...

>>Karthikeyan
Indha thathuvam unakku purila :P

Karthikeyan S said...

Haiyo!! :)

Shruti said...

>>Karthikeyan
:P :D

ANWESA said...

The "she" is me :)

lol!!!loved it totally :)

Shruti said...

>>Anwesa
Really :P
Even 'She' is me :P

vEnKy said...

sema mokka di internet illama computer irunda epdi moderate pannuva loosu

Shruti said...

>>Venky
:P
Ippo mathidren :P

An Ordinary Gal said...

lol it was great...loved it so much :)

Tavish Chadha said...

APPLAUSE!!! This was "the" best fiction 55 I have read till now... and am saying this with all the honesty... you should have put this up for BAT 6... :)

cheers!
Latest post: All in a day's work part 2

Shruti said...

>>An ordinary Girl
:P
Thanks girlie :D

Shruti said...

>>Tavish
Oye Tavish, U serious?! Best 55F till now :O :O :O

I myself can't believe it! Am i reading it correctly?
*faints* Reading ur comment *fainting again*

Karthikeyan S said...

@ Venky : I Appreciate u..

Tavish Chadha said...

firstly i never really like F55 before... started liking it after reading Vipul's F55 for BAT 6... the one u just wrote was really funny and thats y i loved it...

so fainted after reading the comment haan? lol

ill know u r back up when i c this visible lol

Shruti said...

>>Karthikeyan
Grrrr... x-(

Makk said...

made me smile..



Keep it up!

Keep smiling!

Karthikeyan S said...

Added Internet?? any btw y u asked about yeman?

Shruti said...

>>Tavish
Yeah am ok now :D
U read vipul's other 55-er's! Some are awesome, others are great :)

Thanks Tavish :)

Shruti said...

>>Makk
Thanks re :)

Shruti said...

>>Karthikeyan
Yeah added that! About yeman - chumma keten :D

RamMmm said...

Ayyayyo. Shruti, konja naalukku computer pakkamey yosikkaadhey. Romba yosikkarey :) :) (God is Internet, Internet is God, for this generation)

Shruti said...

>>Rammmm
Aama la romba yosikaren :P What to do, manufacturing defect :D

Btw God is internet and vice versa, Idhu konjam too much!

Btw, ur tamil is good :D

dmanji said...

If I would been God I would assigned Chitragupt for comment moderation ;) after-all he maintains everybody's life's balance sheets :D ...
On a serious note liked this lighter genre though did have blood in it but end was real funny ...

Shruti said...

>>Dhiman
LOL dhiman! Chitragupt is the PA for the Lord of death! :P
And Mind u, Password must not be shared :P

And I just tried this genre and gotta mixed response :)

neeraj said...

lol, too good :-)

HaRy!! said...

unoda mokai ku alave ilaya?

The West Wind said...

Awesome.. Hilarious.. I bet 'She' is within all of us (us --> the crazy bloggers)

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

wow that was lovely...wen r u authoring for me? pls...

Shruti said...

>>Neeraj
Hey Thank u buddy :D

Shruti said...

>>Hary
Sari sari vidu vidu! Public public..

Shruti said...

>>West Wind
Hey She is you, She is me
:D
Correct We are crazy :P

Shruti said...

>>Sid
Hehehe Thanks sid :P
For you?? Yeah sure..

Karthikeyan S said...

@hary : good comment..

Shruti said...

>>Karthikeyan
Unakku vera polappe illaya x-(

Karthikeyan S said...

innaiku idhu dhaan :))

Shruti said...

>>Karthikeyan
Grrr... romba verupethara x-(

Karthikeyan S said...

Will try :)) :))

Shruti said...

>>KK
x-( x-(

gils said...

!!!kaameedi post!!! from u!!!!! nee joke adikarapo kooda paaren enaku seriousa solra mathiriye iruku :D like partibhan kanavu vivek :D

Samadrita said...

I actually lol-ed at that.
Wonderfully funny 55-fiction this time Shruti! :)

P.S:I AM BACK.And I would be stalking you regularly now! :D

Sat_hi_sh said...

Ayyo shruthi !!!!
Thanga mudiyala :D

Vineeta said...

hahahahaha :)) My god!! Tooooooooo good :D

Shruti said...

>>Gils
LOL gilsu!
Birthday boykku kozhuppu jaasthi :P
Sari kombukku yenna color paint adichennu sollave illa :D

Shruti said...

>>Sammy
Hey sammy is officially back! That's a news re :)
U really LOL'd yeh? :P

Thanks for stalking me and I will do the same :D

Shruti said...

>>Satz
:D
Romba pugazhadha :P

Shruti said...

>>Vineeta
:D :P
Thank u :D

MindfulMeanderer said...

LOL!! sounds like what I would have said! :) Good 1

Shas said...

Ha ha thats funny.

Shruti said...

>>MM
Not you alone shruti... We all are in the same gang :D

Shruti said...

>>Shas
Hehehe :P
Thanks girlie :D

evanescentthoughts said...

haha. that was funny, I am sure I will say this to god :P :P

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Hehe! gr8 55-er

You have a gift I say... Never take your hands of those keyboard! Even during headaches and "Pot" you write such good stuff!

Gyanban said...

new template looks cool, visiting after some time...
nice work shruti..enjoyed reading your post.!

geeta said...

Swift thoughts...
Wonderfully written...

I too have tried it for the first time but I still dunno whether it can be considered as a 55 er or not...check out if u have time

Shilpa said...

Hey Shruti, I loved this one!! It couldn't have been any better than this. Wow!! kudos, thumbs up from my side girl!!
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shilpa

Mahesh Kalaal said...

Wowwwwwwww.......
sooooooooperu........
Shruti iz back to Queendom ... :)
Sorry.....i cant use regular adjectives for this post.....
A.W.E.S.P.L.E.N.D.I.D
:) :) :)

The Aspirant said...

awesum one yaar.......really too gud.... :D

Shruti said...

>>AK
Hey thanks girlie, we all will tell this surely to God! :P

Shruti said...

>>Saurabh
Hey thanks buddy!

u are very firm regarding that POT matter :) I have a gift? Is it? LOL ;)
Thanks re :)

Shruti said...

>>Gyanban
Welcome back after a long time :)
Thank u and wish u a happy new year!

Shruti said...

>>Geetha
Hey thanks a bunch! I will visit yours for sure :)

Shruti said...

>>Shilpz
Hey thanks girl :)
U and sid wanted 2 me try this genre na, thatsy wrote :)

Shruti said...

>>Mahi
LOL ;)
Thank u! Back to queendom eh ;) :P

Thanks for this good comment :)

Shruti said...

>>TA
Hey TA thank u so much :D

Tavish Chadha said...

Hey shruthi... here is my first attempt on a F55...
Click here
do let me know how it is...

Shilpa said...

oh! It's wonderful shruti, I literally laughed after reading.I am glad you tried this genre. I really loved this one. :) \m/
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shilpa

Shruti said...

>>Tavish
Checked and commented too :)
It was good :)

Shruti said...

>>Shilpz
Hehehe :D
Thanks re :)

Tavish Chadha said...

thanks for the feedback... i replied to ur comments too! :)

Shruti said...

>>Tavish
Checked :)

kanagu said...

blogging is an addiction and poor god didn't know that... sob sob...

nice one Shruti... :)

Chetan said...

oh
good god
made me laugh, and felt proud, that i m also a blogger

Shruti said...

>>Kanagu
Well said :D
Especially its like that for me :D

Shruti said...

>>Chetan
:D
Yeah, proud to be bloggers :)

Haresh said...

ROTFL!

The kid could have better priorities ;-)

Bala said...

I like this genre Shruti!!

I just loved the short smile that came from ur writing!!

U simply rock with every genre u write!!

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