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Saturday, June 26, 2010

55 Fiction - #34



Long long time since I wrote a 55Fiction! It has been 4 months since I wrote a 55F! And here am with a fiction! Just read it and let me know what you felt! Are you game? Go ahead and read this!



A TALE



Krish was a regular kid. He went to school, and hated math. Playing cricket was his passion. He would run to the ground, join his team after school and then they would play. He would grab the bat, stand and wait. And listen for bells on the rolling ball. His ears were his eyes.







With Love,



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23 comments:

vivek said...

well tried ...Shruti..55 words are always diff ..though I hv seen ..22 words ..as well these are the toughest to pen down..I never ..tried ..BTW..

have a gr8 weekend

Enjoy ! :)

Karthikeyan S said...

Soo Good Shruti! Nice to See you Back after Long time ! :)

Dhiman said...

Gr8 to see you back in action and in your old form....

Neha said...

nice one shruti.. :))

Raj said...

snake!

ANWESA said...

nice one :) the last line keeps you hooked.

Rachana Shakyawar said...

Hi Shruti Sweet!!

Beautiful Narration!! SO Apt!
You indeed came with the bang!!
:)Welcome back...! Missed you and your awesome posts so much...

~Keep the Spark ALive..

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Good one... Welcome back!

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Welcome back especially with an excellent story.

Yvonne,

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi SHruti, I've just said in ur previous post that i've been missing ur 55 fictions..

and here u r with one more nice story..

Thanks dear

The Aspirant said...

u havn't missed a thing yaar....
its awesum nd m glad to read dis 55fiction frm u again....

cheers :)

Sourav C. Pandey said...

Here after a long time, and I am glad am not disappointed. nice post.touched. you take care! :)

Harini said...

Very nice :)

Scribblers Inc said...

very impressive stuff...infact, its extremely tough to give such a concrete end to a story. GOOD job! :)

Scribblers Inc.

evanescentthoughts said...

Welcome back girlie.. sorry for commenting so late. I read it on the day you published. So happy to see a 55er from your side after such a long time. Too good as usual :) Hope we will get some regular doses from your side :)

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

nice one buddy.... good to see u back! :)

Makk said...

Should I say welcome back?

Keep SMiling.

kanaguonline said...

I am touched by this one Shruti... nice one :)

lostworld said...

Nice.. A 55-er isn't too time consuming right. Do write more often. We miss your thrillers ;)

Rajlakshmi said...

long time :)
and nice 55-er :)

Shas said...

Touched. Do i need to say more :)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

Nice one,liked the pic

Bala said...

Nice one Shruti!!!

Understood after reading many times... Hope I understood!!!

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