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Sunday, May 9, 2010

Meri maa

This is my entry for Blogadda's Contest

Hi Mom,
It has been a long time since I wrote any posts on this blog, which once bubbled with so many posts compelling a serious task for the readers/my best pals in blogger-world. Corporate world is demanding too much from me mom. I don't want to play the sad tunes once again and earn your or my readers pity.
Here's the poem I wrote for you.

You thought-She's born from a dream
from the womb of ebullience
tearing through the skin of expectation
a bundle of abundance
bringer of life and light.

I think-You possess every element of nature;
knew the songs of the birds,

you understood the messages of the rain
When you look into the eyes of the sun
you are the one for whom the flowers bloom.

Every step of yours is consequenceclip_image001
there's magic in your hands
I realized this when you caress my hair,
when I cry out of pressure.

Whatever I do,
wherever I go,
You were there to console me,
Now, I dream that you are near me,
But the fact is you became a dream!

You are my world,
And you will be my world!
Love you mom!

Maa, I need you near me, to wipe out my tears, to tell me you are always with me! Where can I find you mom? I miss you so much!

Happy Mothers day to you my lovely mom!

With Tear filled eyes & all Love ,

Your Daughter,



Karthikeyan S said...

Very Nice Poem and Soo Touching! Happy Mothers Day!!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

Touching and poignant!!!

Shilpa said...

So, very true. Happy Mother's Day to your mom :)

RAM said...

Wonderful poem shruthi.Happy mothers day :)

gils said...

nice poem..bigger words..deeper meaning

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

hey that was a touching poem Shruti and true too.

I am pretty sure wherever she is right now, she will be reading this or your feelings would have reached her by now.

Take care.

Swaram said...

She will always be proud of u Shruti :)
Lotz of best wishes ur way .. beautifully written :)

Gyanban said...

Good to see you back with a wonderful post.
Corporate world can be very demanding indeed. but the idea is to strike a balance.You have a talent for writing dont give it up.


A very touching, moving poem I'm sure many can relate to including myself. Remember the happy memories.

Have a peaceful Sunday.


Shruti said...

Thank you so much yaar :)

Shruti said...

Wish your Mom a happy Mother's day :)

Shruti said...

Ty :)

Shruti said...

Thanks Buddy :)

Shruti said...

Yes! You understud it!

Shruti said...

>>Sid Bhai
Glad to see you all back in my blog!
I wish see is near me always :)

Shruti said...

Hi maadi :)
Thanks for your wishes :)

Shruti said...

Yes! Striking balance is an important thing..At present am struggling to do that! Hope I ll attain that soon and be regular on my blog :)

Shruti said...

Hi yvonne!!
Good to see you back..yes! Anybody can relate to it anytime!

Vipul Grover said...

Lovely poem Shruti.. But some times its not the words that ring a bell in your heart but the feelings and circumstances.. Happy Mother's Day my friend.. She was, she is and will alwez remain a part of your world.. God bless :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

sniff sniff... Very touching. Liked it.

DAMN THE CORP WORLD... Salla stealing ppl from their moms

lostworld said...

Lovely !!! :) Your mom must be proud of you. I hope you got her to read it.

Samadrita said...

Absolutely delightful poem Shruti.Straight from the heart...
But I noticed a few typos while reading through-
Please correct the wrong tenses..
knows the songs of the birds,
you understands the messages of the rain

Btw good to see you blogging again.And I made a similar post on Mother's day! :)

Shruti said...

You Got it right!! I hope she is/will read this and be happy..

Shruti said...

Glad that you liked it..
Its not the Coporate world that separated me from mom..Its God.. Can I mutter DAMN GOD??! :(

Shruti said...

Thank you so much yaar!
I wish she read this from where she is!
P.S: She is no more in this world to read this!

Shruti said...

Hey corrected those typos! Thank you so much! Indeed it was straight from the heart.

RamMmm said...

I wrote almost the same comment below in another blog. Girls seem to share a much stronger bond with their Moms, and I am a tad envious. Not to say that boys don't bond, but never so expressive.

Have a good time.

Benny said...

Now, I dream that you are near me,
But the fact is you became a dream!

You are my world,
And you will be my world!
Love you mom!

Romba kastama irundhudu wen I read this,, grt piece of poetry.. gud work!

Dhiman said...

very touching.... good to have you back with a lovely post...

Kitty said...

Nothing new for me to say, but I must thank u for introducing me to this blog.

I hav read umpteen posts of different styles and contexts, but your's is unique. U got the knack of touching with melancholy which not many poets posses :)

Rajlakshmi said...

that is such a beautiful dedication to your mom... lovely write...

Anonymous said...

very nice indeed. loved this one. Best wishes and Happiness always

Anonymous said...

Nicely written..Thanks for sharing..

Being Pramoda... said...

Hi Shruti...

thats soooo touching one..loved the lines and the meaning..i can actually feel ur feelings..

At the end i was in tears too.. one thing i wana say, be happu shruti.. u r a good gal..:)

Shruti said...

You are correct! Wherever I see Girls are more attached with mom and they obviously share a special bonding!

Shruti said...

Facts of life are always difficult to accept

Shruti said...

Thanks yar!
Gud to see u back too!

Shruti said...

Hi yaar!
Welcome to my blog and thanks for such a lovely,cute comment! Keep in touch!

Shruti said...

Thanks buddy!

Shruti said...

Hey!! Welcome to H&M!
Thanks for ur wishes!

Shruti said...

Hey!! Thank you so much and Welcome to H&M!

Shruti said...

Hey prams thanks yaar! And u are my best buddy too :)

Tavish Chadha( said...

very nice lines Shruthi. Am sure the emotions are reaching ur mom, wherever she is and am sure she is more than proud of her daughter. and yes, no matter where they may be, whichever part of this universe, mothers always have thier blessings with thier children.

P.S. Read this on my phonme the day u sent me the link... but wasnt able to comment...

Bala said...

No words to say Shruti... Just got moved by your words...

I wud say that these are some lyrical words just make ur post poetic... but the exact depiction of love that you have for ur mom...

Wish u a Happy Mother's Day and hope you believe that ur mom enjoy ur love always...

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The Aspirant said...

so beautiful.......

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