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Showing posts with label surprise. Show all posts

Saturday, February 6, 2010

What If...

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 7; the seventh edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

It was the last day of their college life. Shraddha was sitting in the lawn waiting for her friends. A sudden gush of wind made her dhupatta fall from its destined location. She cautiously took it from the grass and adjusted it again. It was then she saw Krishna waiting in the corner of the lawn. She was damn sure that he was looking at her. All these years, She had noticed him as the serenest guy in the entire class. But he never spoke with Shraddha. Shraddha decided to tell him a Hi on their last day.

When he saw Shraddha coming near him, he stood up and turned the other side for adjusting his shirt and face. The light perspiration on his forehead was the indication of his tension. He heard Shraddha's voice calling him. He turned and saw her face closely within a few steps. This was the most breathtaking scene he had ever witnessed. She said, "Hi Krishna. Its the first time we are speaking though we are classmates. Strange and weird na?". He acknowledged her by just nodding his head. The moment she was about to continue, Krishna continued, "Wait Shraddha, let me open up! I wanted to tell this for many days. But I didn't have the guts! But know what? I love you. I love you so much. Am loving you from the first day I saw you. I even know that you love Ajay. But he is not a good guy". Shraddha was burning with rage and she continued, "Stop it Krishna! You don't have the rights to speak about Ajay! He is my Ajay forever. Now get the hell out of here and go away! Wait, don't try to woo me!"

After 4 years, Krishna saw Shraddha on the 3rd floor of the mall in the same white salwar he saw on the last day. He entered the lift and told "3rd floor". When the lift's door opened, he saw Shraddha waiting for the same. He went near her and called out her name. She turned around and almost tripped on hearing her name uttered by some guy. Before Krishna could speak up Shraddha's sight was blocked by her own tears. They both went to a coffee shop on the same floor. It was Krishna who spoke first. "So Shraddha! How is life? By the way, where is Ajay?". She looked at him questioningly and said, "I don't know anything about that bloody @#$%^&! You were right that day! I shouldn't have listened to him.. But you know? I loved him so much and it was the love that shrouded me and prevented me from hearing out to you, even to the love you expressed on the last day."

She narrated the entire incident that happened after the last day. "We both loved each other so much! Like crazy people do, we went out for long drives, Continuous chatting and movies.. It was till Ajay's dad introduced him to Maya, the only daughter of an Industrialist. From that day, the time he spent with me is less than what he spent with Maya. Many of my friends told about these things. But I believed him completely till the day I saw him with Maya. That too...that too when they both were k....". Shraddha wiped her tears with the tissue Krishna offered. By then, she regained her composure and continued, "I went near Ajay and slapped him right there before Maya's eyes and came back! Later, that evening Ajay came to my house. At first I thought he came to pacify me. But he came there to invite me for his engagement with Maya. He also told the love he had on me was a time pass."

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Krishna consoled her and asked about her life. She replied about the job she is doing. When he asked about her marriage or any proposals, Shraddha didn't answer. But She didn't fail to notice the spark in his eyes! She herself gave an explanation to the spark, 'May be the love he has on me or the inquisitiveness to know about the other guy?'. She plainly said, "There is no space for any other guy in my life again!". Krishna understood her stress and assured her that he will be his best friend forever! Shraddha thought, "What if I had met Krishna before Ajay" and wiped her tears. They left the coffee shop, each having different thoughts and so many What If's clouding their mind.

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"What if the producer didn't accept this script? What if I didn't get SRK and Kat's dates?", Sighed the new director who reviewed his script for the umpteenth time.

P.S : This is completely my take on the topic. Comments having abusive language will NOT be accepted.


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Thursday, October 22, 2009

!!**GOLDEN JUBILEE**!!

DON'T MIND ABOUT THE LENGTH OF THE POST! ENJOY YOURSELVES.
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Hi everyone! Know what? This is my 50th post. Yes, I am hitting half century with this post! I started blogging 2 months back and now here am celebrating my 50th post in a joyous mood with every fellow blogger mates. I learnt a lot while writing. I got a number of friends, well-wishers in these two months. With 80 followers and 3000+ comments I will be the happiest person in this blogosphere. Among these 80 followers many of them are regular readers. Even I got the title 'Queen of 55Fictions', from my fellow bloggers. Everything made me really happy and I thought of thanking everyone of them for the recognition they have given me. Yes, this post is dedicated and am returning the honor (Which I have received till date) to my friends here. For the past one week I searched the cyberspace for different set of awards and I got 7 awards and am here to distribute them to everyone!

CAUTION : BRING A BIGGG BAG! YOU ARE GOING TO TAKE HOME SO MANY AWARDS

Arey, please be seated. If you have visited Hits and Misses in the past, then you will be one of the winner! So be seated and the function will begin now. So here comes...

::::AWESOME BLOG BUDDY::::

This award is for all my buddies who have been my followers, friends, critics, who helped me to give better article every time. This is just a gesture from my side, accept it and honor me. And this award goes to......

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Chowla Ji, Kaka, RSV, Neha, Naveen, Kanagu, Shankar, Bharathi, Indian Pundit, Sid, Amit, Pawan, Sumeet, Rane, Shashank, Pra, KG, Yvonne, Soin, Mohammed, Venky, Vishnu, Hary, Sathish, Babli, Arnav, Anu, Guria, Aditya, Kay, The Aspirant, Ekam, Saad, Urvashi, Shas, Lostworld, Swaram, Avada Kedavra, Shrivatsan, Amrit, Benny, Bala Nagesh, Chetan, Pramoda, Mustaf, Simba Tago, Mahesh, Sourav, Vrijilesh, Priyan, Raj, Rajalakshmi, Anoop, Yellow tulip, Makk, Happy Birdie, Riya, Rohini Prashant, Paritosh, Sapphire, Vishal Jindal, Samadrita, Rimz, Multimenon, Miss Nobody, Shruti, Rachana, Shilpa Sharma, Shilpa Garg, Dhiman, Vipul Grover, Chatterbox, Suga

::::ADORABLE BLOG AWARD::::

(Am not linking names from this award. Kindly bear with me). In these 2 months, I have read so many blogs and there are some blogs which is adored by everyone of us. If you are already visiting the winning blogs (the winners here), continue. If you aren't, then go and read them. You may get hooked on to them like me. I like many and The winners are the top 12 in my preferences.

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  • Guria
  • RSV
  • Shankar
  • Avada Kedavra
  • SiD
  • Pramoda
  • Yellow tulip
  • Bharathi
  • Vipul
  • Shilpa Sharma
  • Dhiman
  • Shilpa Garg

::::BLOG ARTIST::::

Everyone of us has received in one form or the other for our writings. We rarely find Blogs with cartoons or pictures drawn by the author. This is the first time (atleast to what I know) artists are going to get awarded. Only two guys are eligible for this award. Both are wonderful artists and I have wondered about the formers thinking ability and the way he associates things. The latter we all know him - The funniest chap in Blogosphere.

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  • Shrivatsan
  • SiD

::::AWESOME BLOG AWARD::::

Am giving this award for those bloggers who really works hard for writing their posts. Some of their works go unnoticed many a times. Atleast by this way let them all know, I love their blogs so much.

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  • Pawan (The most deserving among all)
  • Bala Nagesh
  • Benny
  • Chowla Ji
  • Yvonne
  • Mustaf
  • Mahesh
  • Shilpa Sharma
  • Neha
  • Rajalakshmi
  • Miss Nobody
  • Pra
  • Shashank
  • Chetan
  • Aditya
  • Kaka
  • Kanagu

::::BEST BLOGGER::::

The winners of this award writes so well and they captivate your heart the moment you start reading their posts!

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  • Saad
  • Rachana
  • Amit Singh
  • Kanagu
  • Swaram
  • Shruti
  • Ekam
  • Lostworld
  • Avada Kedavra
  • Sourav
  • Chatterbox
  • Suga
  • Samadrita
  • Rohini Prashant
  • Shrivatsan
  • KG
  • Anu
  • Guria

::::LOYAL AWARD::::

Am giving this award for the persons who are my regular visitors and many of them has become my good pals. In one way or the other, they have mentored me. Thanks for all your support and keep visiting! I have written 5 names in a point just to reduce the length of the post and it doesn't contain a particular order.

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  • Chowla Ji, Kaka, RSV, Neha, Naveen
  • Kanagu, Shankar, Bharathi, IP, Sid
  • Amit Singh, Pra, KG, Yvonne, Venky
  • Vishnu, Hary, Sathish, Anu, Guria
  • Aditya, Ekam, Lostworld, Swaram, Avada Kedavra
  • Benny, Bala Nagesh, Chetan, Pramoda, Mustaf
  • Mahesh, Rajalakshmi, Yellow tulip, Makk, Rohini
  • Samadrita, Miss Nobody, Rachana, Shruti, Shilpa Sharma, Chatterbox.

Thank you guys!

::::GOLD STAR BLOG AWARD::::

Am going to give this award for the most deserving blogs. One way or the other, their blog specializes. From poetry to story, from 55 Fiction to Handling social Evils. Check out the winners and do tell me whether am correct in this judgement.

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  • Bharathi
  • Vipul
  • Pramoda
  • Shilpa Sharma
  • RSV
  • Guria
  • Pawan
  • Yvonne
  • IP
  • Shilpa Garg
  • Avada Kedavra
  • Amit Singh
  • Shankar
  • Venky & Hary (Both of them share this award for the most freaky write up's!)
  • Swaram
  • Neha
  • Pra
  • SiD

So how was the celebrations? Enjoyed? Congratulations Winners..

Thank you everyone for the support you have given me till date!

P.S : How does my new template look? Shankar helped me in selecting this template. Thank You Shankar!

With Love,

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Friday, September 25, 2009

55 Fiction - #14


Here is my next 55 Fiction.

Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

THE JOURNEY

Recession, politics, marriage… they talked about everything on the way. His quick wit and sound knowledge took her by surprise. Throughout the journey, they spoke. But it’s his casual charm that struck her the most. As the journey came to an end, he looked deeply into her eyes and said, 'Chutta, de do didiji'

For those who don't know Hindi, the translation for the last part 'Chutta, de do didiji' is Give me the change sissie, as asked by auto drivers Tongue out

Wrote a new genre as I told you all in my last 55Fiction. This is not a tragedy which makes you sigh! Liked it eh?! Should I improve?

With Love,






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