Hi :)
Understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
SLAYING
The cops arrive on the scene.
"Looks like murder. He's been shot in the chest.", they say.
His wife seems to be in shock. Their little daughter is sobbing.
"Do you suspect anyone, ma'am?" they ask the wife.
She looks at them sadly. "The gun's in the cupboard. He was trying to molest my daughter"
How is this? Liked it? Drop a comment, let me know what you feel After reading this!
With Love,
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I did not like it...
ReplyDeleteI LOVED it. Truly Exceptional! :)
@Guria
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton sreya!
Too good.. another awesome 55 fiction..same here.. did not like it.. but LOVED it :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent work Shruti!!
ReplyDeleteA very sobering thought to this story......all to apparent in the world today. To achieve the message in 55 words is remarkable well done.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
it was great.. awaiting a post on this topic..
ReplyDeleteHey, Shrutuuuuu.. I'll b very blunt here(as um alwez ;).. wn evry one starts taking up the same issue one aftr the othr, it kinda bcums dragging.. nd thts wat happend wn i read this aftr having read Shilpa, Sid, Rahul and couple of othrs in last few days. Mayb bcoz i cud see no new dimension being added to this issue. (In Blog-a-Ton, we do the same thing but mayb format is sch tht it adds fun to it)..
ReplyDeleteHowever, the story is well written as alwez.. Keep thm cuming :)
Very well written, .... It is practical, responsive, responsible, relevant, revolutionary ,radical, instinctual, straight and it do sends a warning
ReplyDeleteI wrote my opinions on the same topic in my blog with anger and anguish. I read few posts on the same topic on my friend's blogs too. But your words had reflected my anger in 55 words.
I do really appreciate your approach and stand towards the social issues and concerns..... Keep exploring the social arena in all aspects.
Great effort buddy.
hey shruti,
ReplyDeletewell done..:)
amazing...again very different...from whr do u get so many different ideas gal?
ReplyDeletea good 55 shruthi... nice one...
ReplyDeleteyou are becoming really society conscious these days giving a lot of messages to the public good one.
ReplyDelete@Avada
ReplyDeletehey thanks a lot girlie! Nice to know that you LOVED this!
@Chatterbox
ReplyDeleteThank you!
@Yvonne
ReplyDeleteTo be frank i tried really hard to phrase this one!
Thanks!
@Vishnu
ReplyDeleteHey, idhula post ah! :O :O
Will try yaar!!
That was very well written Shruti :)
ReplyDelete@Vipsy
ReplyDeleteHey, thought about it but i felt like writing this! Thanks a ton vipsy!
@Mahesh
ReplyDeleteHey thanks a lot buddy! I tried to force the meaning and anger in 55words and I think I've done justice to whatever i wrote!Thanks mahesh!
@Prams
ReplyDeleteThank you sweety!
@Neha
ReplyDeleteHey when i see a daily I read something related to these social issues! I try writing them as 55F or a story or some blunt things!
That's it!
Thanks!
@Shankz
ReplyDeleteThanks ;)
@Venks
ReplyDeleteHey, giving messages in a way where it can reach people is gud na? That too, these issues are tuff 4 me to write!
@KG
ReplyDeleteThanks!
It could be someone's reality who knows...
ReplyDeletestrong write there girl.. way to go!
Rane
Some things we dare to write and you give them just in 55 words.. A good, clean and touching one..
ReplyDeletewhat can I say??Omg...ur brilliant shruti.. :D lemme close down the gap before a few flies cave in.. :P
ReplyDeleteWonderful.. :)
Love,
Nikhil
Great one.. :)
ReplyDeleteVery Nicely written..
Keep writing such Societal post...
Our little contribution would create a big difference.. :)
Cheers!!
@Rane
ReplyDeletehey welcome back after a long time!!
Thanks yaar!
@Raji
ReplyDeleteThe advantage is you need nt explain things in details..Just words with rite emotions bring the stuff!!
Thanks!
@Multimenon!
ReplyDeleteLong time no see?! Thanks yaar!
Fill in the gaps soon!
@Amit
ReplyDeleteHey,Even i felt the same...it can reach places and someone at sometime will realise!
nice another thrilling cop story
ReplyDeletei think u rock n all ur 55 fiction
hahhahhahaa
Regards,
Prasee
@Prasee
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy!
more awareness the merrier ..... gud
ReplyDeletethats a nice one.
ReplyDeleteoye..conveyed yur message plain and straight!! gud one as usual again!...kalakify yu!
ReplyDeleteu could hav kept that as a suspense.. but this one is nice too.. :D
ReplyDeleteshruthi...
ReplyDeletewe ll make a deal... wheneva u wanna write a 55 fiction, find two themes... one for u n one for me..
khe khe khe...
cuz i dono how u find topics for 55F???? ;)
do we hav a deal??? ;)
ugh! if a reaction is what you were aiming for, I don't think you could have done any better...can visualize the 'debate' the trial on this one. ugh! gives me the creeps
ReplyDeleteYou have said every thing in the post.
ReplyDeleteYou seem to be becoming an expert in 55
Wow.I guess that sums it up.I LOVED it!So much power in those words.
ReplyDelete@Naveen
ReplyDeleteThanks yaar!
@Bharathi!
ReplyDeleteThese days your comment doesn't exceed 10 words or sometimes u don't even comment! :O
anyways!
Thanks and ur comment mean a lot to me and You are the first person to review my blog!!
@Hary
ReplyDeleteThanksngooooo!!
@Anoop
ReplyDeleteHow should i maintain the suspense?!
@Anoop
ReplyDeleteNo Idea! But u think of concept and lemme writ! :P
good one.. and happy diwali..
ReplyDelete@Kay
ReplyDeleteHey, these incidents will surely send shivers down the spine!
@Chowla Ji
ReplyDeleteAm still an amateur!
Thanks for your wishes!
@Miss Nobody
ReplyDeleteThanks cutie!!
@Abdul
ReplyDeleteThanks re!
Thanks for ur wishes!
Hey that s one of the beautiful 55 fiction. You introduced me to this kind of fictions and you have already become an expert in this :) Keep going
ReplyDelete@RAM
ReplyDeleteHey, yellam unga aasirvaadham dan! Thanks!
Good one. Such men need to kicked out of this planet!
ReplyDelete@Adi
ReplyDeleteThanks re :)
Come join hands and we all shall kick them out!
man... u wrote a fiction 55 on the topic... nice.
ReplyDeleteit's one of the best 55f in your blog
ReplyDeletegr8
Good one:)
ReplyDeleteHey Shruti,
ReplyDeleteA 55 fiction well written by you as always... This time I guessed nothing about the suspense part....
I just adore your writing because even when you write some crisp writing, you always try to impart a kind of social issue in it... That's really great DUDETTE....
I jus luv ur writing Shruti!!!
Guessed the ending but your story is superb.Liked it a lot.Write more Shruti:)
ReplyDeletea good one shruti ..
ReplyDeleteI liked your 55 punch on the currently popular issue...
it emanates positivism and a determined action..
@Sid
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy!
@Chetan
ReplyDeleteOne of the best eh?? Thanks a ton re :)
@Ekam
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton re!
@Bala
ReplyDeleteU dint guess he ending! Whoa!! Now, Its really good :P
Hey, just my contribution to the society! Avlo dan!!
U love my writing? Thanks bala :)
@Sams
ReplyDeleteU guessed the ending!??
Oh migh God!! But will write something which u cant guess...Will write more sammy!!
Thanks!
@RSV
ReplyDeleteThanks rahul!!
Simply awsun Shruti..........................And the ending is awsum...............newaz im followin ya blog
ReplyDelete@Quintessence
ReplyDeleteHi girlie!
Welcome to my space and thanks a lot!
Bingo! Didn't see that coming. Lovely! :-)
ReplyDelete@Karthik
ReplyDeletehey thanks buddy!