55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
FINAL DESTINATION
He told his mom, "Mom, I bought a new house. We are going to vacate this house. Pack your things and get ready soon". She was exuberant.
The car sped off from the old building and stopped infront of a two-storey building. After donning her specs she read : S.P OLD AGE HOME Welcomes Everyone.
With Love,
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hmm.. this was a sad 55 fiction.. bt happening a lot in real too. the destination was a sad one.
ReplyDeletegood strong 55 fic. we shd be caring for our parents not waiting to put them in some home where they are not cared for, well... not as much as we care for them anyways.
Strong and eloquent!!As you know, I'm afan of your 55-ers!! :)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your 99th post!! Bring on more Dhamaka for your 100th!
Want your 99th 55er soon, too! :D
ithu romba overu
ReplyDeleteA situation that is happening all too often in the world. Your excellent write about it was awesome to read.......and all in 55 words.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your 100th.
Yvonne:
aww...tht is really a sad one...
ReplyDeletethough jus 55 words..the message is so effective....
i like the way u bring up social issues in ur fictions..keep writitng :)
Hmm , well written and message is clear n chrisp in 55 words... nice ..will read on...was a nice sweet lil read ..
ReplyDeleteis this how a son will say when he sends his mom to oldage home???
ReplyDeleteshocking... :( :(
Nice 55.. Nice Message!
ReplyDeleteAll The Oldage Homes Should be Abolished!!
I really didnt expect this end. so sad but interesting story.
ReplyDeletenice one Shruti -- for moment reminded me of Lage Raho....
ReplyDeleteYou are hereby conferred the title of 'Queen of Pathos' in 55ers. :-( Your bright vs. pathos 55er ratio is approximately nil.
ReplyDeleteCmon, can't there be bright and cheery 55ers?
This one's definitely among your best.Keep it up Shruti! :)
ReplyDeletetouching and appealing ...
ReplyDeleteall the best for your 100th post :)
A sad reality!
ReplyDeleteaww that is so sad... brillianly written ...
ReplyDeleteheart-breaking.
ReplyDeletebeautiful. a master-piece.
touching...
ReplyDeleteBut its not a fiction in many cases unfortunately :-(
A heart-breaking one. Hi! Howz u?
ReplyDeleteWell written...Will be back for your 100th post
ReplyDeletehey nala iruku :) u hav written 33 55F ..awesome ! wil hav to read many I guess...wil do it soon
ReplyDeleteThat was so mean of that guy. Seriously, how can he even do that. Anyways, a very touching and heart breaking one.
ReplyDelete>>Leo
ReplyDeleteTy leo! But its a common sight that we witness everyday!
>>Guria
ReplyDeleteWow!! Welcome back!! Thank you!! You will see a real Dhamaka! 99th 55er is on its way :D
>>Gils
ReplyDeleteUnmaya sonna makkal idhan solranga!
>>Yvonne
ReplyDeleteThank you lady!! You won't be disappointed in my 100th post :)
>>Urvashi
ReplyDeleteThank u so much girl!! 55 Fictions are more effective than long fictions!
>>Vivek
ReplyDeleteHey, Welcome to H&M and hope to see u here more often!! Ty :)
wow! really nice!! :)
ReplyDeleteand hey, i really love all your 55 fictions and short stories! :)
>>Kanagu
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the way they will opt! I really can't understand how people are like this!
>>KK
ReplyDeleteYes they have to be.. But can they be?
>>Bharathi
ReplyDeleteThank you for your words.. These are some things which happen at unexpected times!
>>Gyanban
ReplyDeleteThank you! But reel life are impressed by real life happenings na!
>>Rammm
ReplyDeleteRead some of my first 55F's :)
Social Issues cannot be handled in a cheerful way!
>>Sammy
ReplyDeleteThank u so much!
>>Mahi
ReplyDeleteTy mahi :)
>>Adi
ReplyDeleteYes, you are correct!
>>Rajlaxmi
ReplyDeleteThank u so much!! :)
>>Abhi
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks buddy :)
>>Saurabh
ReplyDeleteOye!! H r u!
Thank u!
>>Shas
ReplyDeleteHi girl.. Am fine.. How r u :)
Thanks for the visit!
>>KG
ReplyDeleteThank u KG! Gud to see you after a longggggg time :)
>>Benny
ReplyDeleteOoooo!! U have finally come! Wish u write a beautiful story!! Thank u :)
>>Harini
ReplyDeleteThanks girlie :) :)
But see na! people like that are around us!
>>Tharangni
ReplyDeleteWow!! Thank u sweety pie! Its a real surprise :)
Gud to have u here :)
why does the son say
ReplyDelete" we are vacating the place"
Is the son gonna live in the old age home too?
"i have bought a new house"
Did he buy the old age home?
I know you are trying to keep the suspense but this is way too much dear
>>Venky
ReplyDeleteHahahaha :)
Too much lam illa.. fact :)
>>Rammm
ReplyDeleteRead some of my first 55F's :)
Social Issues cannot be handled in a cheerful way!
:-) I'll go and look at it some time. Issues are always negative (isn't it? and it is implicit unless you gain from it). Did I ask you to state social issues in a cheerful manner? Nope.
I only asked you to reduce gloomy posts. :-|
It is a tougher game to make someone smile than weep. One of your 55ers that I recollect off the top of my head is the Fiat ad influenced one. That WAS good and not pathos.
Keep up your neat work. You are creative and I would like to see cheery stuff from you as well and not remember you as one who always wallows in pathos. :-) [[Hopefully you won't come and hit me]]
>>Rammm
ReplyDeleteWell I won't hit u! But u are right! I ll not make people cry :P
well, again sumthing abt social world.....its so beautiful presented by you...
ReplyDeletereally, i can't understand hw cn a child does such a thing wid deir parents'....really sad..:(
>>TA
ReplyDeleteThey don't dare to do it! This is the reality!
Unexpected ending as usual… but also a sad one this time…
ReplyDeleteOld age is the time during which they crave for our time… but ppl always think the otherwise…