55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
LETTERS
It was the last letter. She wanted to finish it soon.
It read : “I’m sorry mom – I loved him...”
It was punctuated by many sobs from the old lady.
“.... I can’t live without him, and so I’ve decided……… ”
She broke down – like she had every day for the past twelve years.
With Love,
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You seem to have a deep-rooted infatuation or love for tragedy. Back to square one again. :-|
ReplyDeleteNice line-up of words. The first two sentences provided a neat alibi and good choice.
Excellent piece of writing. so few words yet it speaks volumns.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Nice!!
ReplyDeleteaaaarrrrrrrrgggggh.......mudiala....podhum...ithoda nirithikuvom...
ReplyDeleteThis has got to be one of your most eloquent!! Keep at it, girl!
ReplyDeletehead spinning..suicide is never the answer me feels.. loved ones suffer too much. any alternative is better.
ReplyDeletecheers!
hmmmm....:O seriously u do think only from heart!!!
ReplyDeleteNicey!!!
o_O wat r the chances I was first....O_o
ReplyDeleteouch!! that was sooo touching... just loved this one... you are becoming better and better each day at this form of story telling...
ReplyDeleteits worth reading u again nd again, seriously.........
ReplyDeletei think u've mastered d art of saying nthing widout leaving nething unsaid.....
tragic story.. very nicely told...
ReplyDeletebtw i am falling in love with your F55s... and i dont think I can live without them... so I have decided to .................................comeread them often... hehehe
Cheers!
Tavish
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No surprise element in here.But very touching nonetheless. :)
ReplyDeleteWay to go girl!
29 F55 ? Good God ! You are giving Shilpa a run for her money ? :-) .
ReplyDeleteGood one ; liked it.
humm,,,,
ReplyDeleteMissing your own Double edge... you can right better.
still nice one!
You are getting good at this :)
ReplyDeletethembi thembi azha vaikaama vida maateenga pola irukee..
ReplyDeletenice one :) :)
Very typical of your posts. At first go i couldnt understand then i got it
ReplyDeleteHmm.. a love tragedy... the kinds that i dont like reading. A nice one though :).
ReplyDelete>>Rammm
ReplyDeleteYeah May be! I just love writing such senti things!
And regarding those words - I spent more time in arrangine the phrase :)
Ty :)
>>Yvonne
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch!! You are always encouraging!
>>KK
ReplyDeleteThanks!
>>Gils
ReplyDelete:-( :-(
>>Guria
ReplyDeleteWelcome back to H&M after a long time!! Thanks a lot for those words :)
>>Rohitha
ReplyDeleteYeah! But are they following the other options? They are infact blinded by love!
>>Sid
ReplyDeleteThanksey!
Btw, what made you to think that I think from heart?
>>Sid
ReplyDeleteU saw ur chances right?!
>>Rajlakshmi
ReplyDeleteHey thanks girl :)
Infact u won a contest on this fictions!
>>TA
ReplyDeleteHey thank u so much! Infact I am really happy to see ur comment! No matter how late it is, u read every post of mine fully and post a honest comment!
>>Tavish
ReplyDeleteLove is in the air ;)
Tavish is in love!! Oooooooh :P
jokes apart, u are welcome to reads my 55Fictions :)
>>Sammy
ReplyDeleteThis is a straight one, so no suspense :D
Thanks girlie :)
>>Madhu
ReplyDeleteWelcome back :)
Infact Shilpa is my Guru :)
Thank u :)
>>Makk
ReplyDeleteHey really even I felt after publishing that I could have wrote a better one!
>>Sojo
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy :)
>>Kanagu
ReplyDeleteDuh-wuh :(
All the dust in ur eyes will go off if u cry! So no harm in making u cry I guess :P
Thanks re :)
>>Venks
ReplyDeleteFinally u understood it na? Gud :)
>>Harini
ReplyDeleteU don like love tragedies? uhhhh! Thanks anyways :)
Brilliant piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteLoved the last line. It kinda shook me up.
>>Haresh
ReplyDeleteHi haresh, welcome to H&M!
Thank u so much for those words :)
Brought out the feeling that you wanted to convey very well Shruti!!
ReplyDeleteBut I don’t like the suicide theme in it..