Saturday, January 23, 2010

55 Fiction - #30

55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

LETTERS

It was the last letter. She wanted to finish it soon.
It read : I’m sorry mom – I loved him...
It was punctuated by many sobs from the old lady.
“.... I can’t live without him, and so I’ve decided……… ”
She broke down – like she had every day for the past twelve years.

With Love,

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39 comments:

  1. You seem to have a deep-rooted infatuation or love for tragedy. Back to square one again. :-|

    Nice line-up of words. The first two sentences provided a neat alibi and good choice.

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  2. Excellent piece of writing. so few words yet it speaks volumns.

    Yvonne.

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  3. aaaarrrrrrrrgggggh.......mudiala....podhum...ithoda nirithikuvom...

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  4. This has got to be one of your most eloquent!! Keep at it, girl!

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  5. head spinning..suicide is never the answer me feels.. loved ones suffer too much. any alternative is better.

    cheers!

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  6. hmmmm....:O seriously u do think only from heart!!!

    Nicey!!!

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  7. o_O wat r the chances I was first....O_o

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  8. ouch!! that was sooo touching... just loved this one... you are becoming better and better each day at this form of story telling...

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  9. its worth reading u again nd again, seriously.........
    i think u've mastered d art of saying nthing widout leaving nething unsaid.....

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  10. tragic story.. very nicely told...
    btw i am falling in love with your F55s... and i dont think I can live without them... so I have decided to .................................comeread them often... hehehe

    Cheers!
    Tavish
    Latest Blog post: Give me some beer... Give me Champagne

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  11. No surprise element in here.But very touching nonetheless. :)
    Way to go girl!

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  12. 29 F55 ? Good God ! You are giving Shilpa a run for her money ? :-) .

    Good one ; liked it.

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  13. humm,,,,

    Missing your own Double edge... you can right better.

    still nice one!

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  14. thembi thembi azha vaikaama vida maateenga pola irukee..

    nice one :) :)

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  15. Very typical of your posts. At first go i couldnt understand then i got it

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  16. Hmm.. a love tragedy... the kinds that i dont like reading. A nice one though :).

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  17. >>Rammm
    Yeah May be! I just love writing such senti things!
    And regarding those words - I spent more time in arrangine the phrase :)
    Ty :)

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  18. >>Yvonne
    Thanks a bunch!! You are always encouraging!

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  19. >>Guria
    Welcome back to H&M after a long time!! Thanks a lot for those words :)

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  20. >>Rohitha
    Yeah! But are they following the other options? They are infact blinded by love!

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  21. >>Sid
    Thanksey!
    Btw, what made you to think that I think from heart?

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  22. >>Rajlakshmi
    Hey thanks girl :)
    Infact u won a contest on this fictions!

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  23. >>TA
    Hey thank u so much! Infact I am really happy to see ur comment! No matter how late it is, u read every post of mine fully and post a honest comment!

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  24. >>Tavish
    Love is in the air ;)
    Tavish is in love!! Oooooooh :P
    jokes apart, u are welcome to reads my 55Fictions :)

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  25. >>Sammy
    This is a straight one, so no suspense :D
    Thanks girlie :)

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  26. >>Madhu
    Welcome back :)
    Infact Shilpa is my Guru :)
    Thank u :)

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  27. >>Makk
    Hey really even I felt after publishing that I could have wrote a better one!

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  28. >>Kanagu
    Duh-wuh :(
    All the dust in ur eyes will go off if u cry! So no harm in making u cry I guess :P

    Thanks re :)

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  29. >>Venks
    Finally u understood it na? Gud :)

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  30. >>Harini
    U don like love tragedies? uhhhh! Thanks anyways :)

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  31. Brilliant piece of writing!

    Loved the last line. It kinda shook me up.

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  32. >>Haresh
    Hi haresh, welcome to H&M!
    Thank u so much for those words :)

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  33. Brought out the feeling that you wanted to convey very well Shruti!!
    But I don’t like the suicide theme in it..

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