Wednesday, January 20, 2010

55 Fiction - #29

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FATE??

He was astonished on seeing the big malls, skyscrapers. He told himself, "I will be working somewhere here in next 2 years". A gang rushed past him and he was floored. Bystanders pitied him. He was confused. When he tried getting up, he saw blood trickling from his abdomen. The gang shouted, "Have it blackie"


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47 comments:

  1. Shilpa GargJanuary 19, 2010 at 2:18 PM

    Ah...a sad turn of events!!
    Racial abuse and discrimination in today's age is truly sad! :(

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  2. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 3:02 PM

    >>Shilpz
    Yeah, I hate them!

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2010 at 3:59 PM

    however sad but racialism is a reality and one of biggest ills of humanity...

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  4. VineetaJanuary 19, 2010 at 4:28 PM

    I just imagined indians in Australia on reading this post :( Loathe them!

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  5. MakkJanuary 19, 2010 at 4:32 PM

    you hit the bulls eyes.

    Keep it up!

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  6. BharathiJanuary 19, 2010 at 4:43 PM

    fair enough. I was expecting a mis-encounter :-)

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  7. HaRy!!January 19, 2010 at 5:35 PM

    :( ....

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  8. Yellow TulipJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:28 PM

    sad anti-climax..

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  9. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:50 PM

    >>Dhiman
    Yeah re, u are correct! Reality hits hard!

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  10. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:51 PM

    >>Vineeta
    Yeah, I wrote this keeping them in mind

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  11. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:52 PM

    >>Makk
    Thank u ji :)

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  12. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    >>Bharathi
    I always read to ur comment first or search ur comments in case of my 55Fictions! Cos, ur logic sometimes amuses me!

    :) U r almost there!

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  13. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    >>Hary
    :(

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  14. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 6:56 PM

    >>Yellow Tulip
    yeah it is!

    P.S : Welcome back after a long time! Hope u r doing good!

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  15. Karthikeyan SJanuary 19, 2010 at 7:25 PM

    Soo Sad :((

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  16. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 10:10 PM

    >>KK
    yeah it is

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  17. RocksaJanuary 19, 2010 at 10:11 PM

    Tragic..Wish it would end like bollywood movies where hero jumps up despite the bleeding abdomen and beats the bad guys up! But reality is something else. Plot is nice though :)

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  18. Saurabh PanshikarJanuary 19, 2010 at 11:15 PM

    A different 55-er. Good one.

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  19. kanaguJanuary 19, 2010 at 11:53 PM

    sad ending... :( but the racism exists :(

    reminded me of one of my childhood incident.. when someone pushed me from the back while running to catch the bus... :D :D

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  20. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 11:58 PM

    >>Raksha
    Hi girl :), So nice to see u in H&M! All bollywood stuffs have one such ending! But practical life is different from the reel life as u said :)

    Thank u! Keep Visiting!

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  21. ShrutiJanuary 19, 2010 at 11:58 PM

    >>Saurabh
    Thank you birthday boy!

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  22. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM

    >>Kanagu
    Yeah it exists! What can we do to the Indians in Australia except for pitying them?

    I cant understand Ur childhood memory :(. Why they pushed u from the back?!

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  23. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2010 at 4:26 AM

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    but aren't you participating in blogomania:
    http://blogomania.cognizance.org.in/

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  24. MadmanJanuary 20, 2010 at 7:14 AM

    good one. U shoud include brownies to not the chocolates but the asians :-)

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  25. BharathiJanuary 20, 2010 at 9:01 AM

    oh, thanks. I try to write honest comments. thats all.

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  26. KavyaJanuary 20, 2010 at 10:48 AM

    Hi Shruthi, I chanced upon your blog today. And I absolutely love your stories.. Extremely innovative! The accolades you've been receiving are well deserving!

    To more stories... Cheers!!

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  27. SamadritaJanuary 20, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    Ah racial abuse!
    Read To Kill A Mockingbird if you haven't.

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  28. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com)January 20, 2010 at 1:02 PM

    nice! its sad that we humans still discriminate... very nicely written Shruti..

    --Tavish
    Latest blog post: Fiction 55 - Shift+Delete

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  29. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:16 PM

    >>RSV
    Grrr, its okay!
    Will check the link!

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  30. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:17 PM

    >>Venks
    They don't distinguish Blackie's and brownies! They consider everyone the same!

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  31. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:21 PM

    >>Bharathi
    That's what I like a lot! Thank u bharathi!

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  32. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:22 PM

    >>Kavya
    Welcome on board! A biggg Huggg to you! Confused? Girl u are my 100th follower! Am excited like anything...

    Really glad that you like my stories :)

    Keep visiting!

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  33. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:32 PM

    >>Sammy
    To Kill A Mocking bird by Harper Lee right? I love that book sammy! Especially when Boo Radley saves Jem and scout and disappears suddenly! Its one of the best book I have ever read! The court scenes involving Atticus is marvellous na?

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  34. ShrutiJanuary 20, 2010 at 1:38 PM

    >>Tavish
    Thank u so much re :)

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  35. Sathish Chandrasekaran (சதீஷ் சந்திரசேகரன்)January 20, 2010 at 4:35 PM

    Racial abuse is headlines in India & this fiction couldnt have come at a better time...

    Nice illustration pa :)
    Keep blogging
    cheers !!!

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  36. gilsJanuary 20, 2010 at 5:18 PM

    huh...semma nachu story...aana very bitter truth :(

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  37. RajlakshmiJanuary 20, 2010 at 8:07 PM

    racial abuse... ahhh how much i hate those who distinguish people on color... its sickenning...
    well written

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  38. Omkar KhandekarJanuary 21, 2010 at 11:41 AM

    Ah, that was impressive. Good work, gal :)
    By the way, I am a writer myself. You might want to check out my work. :)

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  39. ShrutiJanuary 21, 2010 at 10:44 PM

    >>Satz
    Hey correct! Wherever we turn, there is this news! Pity them!

    Thanks re :)

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  40. ShrutiJanuary 21, 2010 at 10:45 PM

    >>Gils
    Egjactly :)

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  41. ShrutiJanuary 21, 2010 at 10:46 PM

    >>Rajlakshmi
    U told correctly! Even I hate it!!
    Ty :)

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  42. ShrutiJanuary 21, 2010 at 10:46 PM

    >>Daone
    Thank u re :)
    U also a writer eh? Off to ur blog now :)

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  43. aayanmanJanuary 22, 2010 at 4:32 PM

    Nicely written.Reminded me of stuff happening in Ozland..

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  44. ShrutiJanuary 22, 2010 at 8:58 PM

    >>Gyanban
    Yeah! That was the motive behind this!

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  45. The AspirantJanuary 24, 2010 at 5:00 PM

    a gud motive behind d post.....
    d discrimination shud nt b let to increase as it vl leave wrld a harder place to live

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  46. ShrutiJanuary 26, 2010 at 11:38 AM

    >>TA
    You are correct! Already its a difficult place to survive! The reason- fellow human beings!

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  47. UnknownApril 15, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    Racism’ told in simple words!!

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