Here is my 24th 55-fiction. What is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time. Come, lets get into the action!
AN ENCOUNTER
Eyes met eyes over a novel on the train. They exchanged glances, conversation, addresses. She was mesmerized by the way he spoke. It was perfect, she thought. They kissed goodbye in the corner where no one could see. He promised to visit after her return from vacation.
She returned home to find her house ransacked.
With Love,
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Enna koduma?? pasangala nambavae kudathu... Rite shruthi...
ReplyDeleteAnyways.. something new and different kalakura po..
>>Raji
ReplyDeleteWe can believe guys, but we shouldn't trust unfamiliar guys :)
Hope u understood the difference between the two!
Is it different!?!? Thank u sweety!
its a untouched topic....you have succeeded in every attempt you have made...cheersss !!!
ReplyDelete-pRiYaN..!
Thats really a different kind of story.. Interesting plot.. I read the ending twice.. Just loved the feel of it.
ReplyDeletedid not like the concept, unless and until you prove that the two person where same, u cannot rule out anything.
ReplyDeleteRobing a persons house can b accompalished anytime, so need not b urs, unless of course if you do boast about ur large house in that case, you should get robed.
Cheers,
Ravan
There is a funny story in everything!!
pasangala namba kudathaaa! :( ...emathravanga yara iruntha ena...blame the one who gets cheat instead!! it can always be the other way around bcos pasanga easily for for any female!...epadi nama reverse swing!
ReplyDeletegood one shruthi thirudargal Jakirathai. It happen to anyone. I can see why you used a man and women conversation to build up the tension. Well thought one.
ReplyDeletehaha...isn't that right!? :)
ReplyDeleterofl D: :D ithu chaancela
ReplyDeleteThats was great,an interesting lesson to impart
ReplyDeleteCute! And different! Good one, girlie!!! :)
ReplyDeletelollzzzz...
ReplyDeleteBe careful...haaan...
:)
nice one.
Yieeeekkkkks!!! Torture, torment all put together!
ReplyDeletelol poor girl. Good one shruti. I see you are excelling in this format of fiction :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist in the tale...!
ReplyDeleteGood one Shruti :)
ReplyDeletehmm nice one packs a punch.... girl was hasty, so she made waste :)
ReplyDeletei am still waiting for the replies on facebook ;)
take care and keep writing.............
BTW.. Nalla dhaan twist yosikkareenga :))))
ReplyDeleteIndha pasangalae ippadi thaa esamaan :P
ReplyDeletehahahaha!! My goodness! Only u can think of such a twist when the start was sooo romantic!! Real good one :))
ReplyDeletepasanga mela apdi enna kandu... :( :(
ReplyDeletebut then good story :D :D
Wonderful one Shruti! I loked the end twist so much!
ReplyDeleteKahani mein twist... I like it! ;)
ReplyDeletehe he:) kollaikara romance:p
ReplyDeleteFirst time here and glad to see ur attempt at 55F..
ReplyDeleteSee you around sometime at my blog :)
Cheers
Mahesh
OH...That's a tragic end.. I knew it when it was getting so romantic, it might end in such a tragedy but did not expect this kind of end :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a stupid girl...Exchanging number is one thing..but she exchanged addresses?? that's height of stupidity...
quite nice one...........again a sting in the tale
ReplyDelete:)..Quite good and sensitive too..:) Well written shruti..hw r u gal..?
ReplyDeleteQuite a twist :)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful 55-fiction piece just like always :)
Cheers!!
Hehehe...good one yaar.. Crisp and clear undestood in the first attempt :P
ReplyDelete>>Thouzif
ReplyDeleteWelcome to H&M!!
YEah exactly...Btw, what reply?!
:o .... did not expect that .... fun read though .. keep it up
ReplyDeleteTotally unexpected ending! :O really different kind. Good one as usual, queen :)
ReplyDelete>>Mohammed
ReplyDeleteThank u anna!
>>Makk
ReplyDeleteHeheh :D
Sure :)
>>Kay
ReplyDeleteMany a times, it holds true :)
>>Rohitha
ReplyDeleteTorture of whom?! :P
>>Rajlakshmi
ReplyDeleteYou read twice! Ty girl :)
>>G3
ReplyDeleteTwist nallarukka?! thanksungammani!
>>G3
ReplyDeleteIndirect ah yarayo solrapla irukke...neenga gils ah solla matenga nu i know! :D
>>Vineeta
ReplyDelete:D :P
Thank u girl.. 55Fiction demands such twists!
>>Roshmi
ReplyDelete:P :D Thank u!
>>Adi
ReplyDeletewow, u r back or just a visit?! Thank u!
>>MN
ReplyDeleteThanks sweety!
>>Gils
ReplyDeleteUnna pathi yezhudhiteno??
>>Hary
ReplyDeleteIndha comment kagave room pottu yosippa pola!
>>Sid
ReplyDeleteOpinion differs re :)
Thanks for being frank!
>>Priyan
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy! U have been supportive from the beginning!
>>Kanagu
ReplyDeleteYedho namalala mudinja kaariyam :D
>>Pra
ReplyDeleteThank u girl!! Happy to see u back :)
>>Kaddu
ReplyDeleteEnd mein twist achi hai na?! Thank u!
>>Sri
ReplyDelete:D :P
Scene comment
>>Mahesh
ReplyDeleteWelcme to H&M
Stupidity?! Yeah, but this is just a fiction na!
>>Mahesh
ReplyDeleteSure, thank u!
>>TA
ReplyDeleteAnother sting :P :D
But, u dint get weird thoughts na!?
>>Prams
ReplyDeleteHey thank u!! It has been a long time since i saw u in my blog!!
Am fine girl! How are you?!
>>CB
ReplyDeleteThnx girl :)
>>Ram
ReplyDeleteUnderstood?!? Atlast u started understanding things!
>>Naveen
ReplyDeleteThank u!
>>Avada
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks dearie :)
>>Thousif
ReplyDeleteThank u! What you asked in FB?
Thank you everyone :)
ReplyDeleteGud one Shruti:)
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