Monday, November 30, 2009

55 Fiction - #24

Here is my 24th 55-fiction. What is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time. Come, lets get into the action!

AN ENCOUNTER

Eyes met eyes over a novel on the train. They exchanged glances, conversation, addresses. She was mesmerized by the way he spoke. It was perfect, she thought. They kissed goodbye in the corner where no one could see. He promised to visit after her return from vacation.
She returned home to find her house ransacked.


With Love,

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63 comments:

  1. Enna koduma?? pasangala nambavae kudathu... Rite shruthi...

    Anyways.. something new and different kalakura po..

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  2. >>Raji
    We can believe guys, but we shouldn't trust unfamiliar guys :)
    Hope u understood the difference between the two!

    Is it different!?!? Thank u sweety!

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  3. its a untouched topic....you have succeeded in every attempt you have made...cheersss !!!

    -pRiYaN..!

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  4. Thats really a different kind of story.. Interesting plot.. I read the ending twice.. Just loved the feel of it.

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  5. did not like the concept, unless and until you prove that the two person where same, u cannot rule out anything.

    Robing a persons house can b accompalished anytime, so need not b urs, unless of course if you do boast about ur large house in that case, you should get robed.


    Cheers,
    Ravan
    There is a funny story in everything!!

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  6. pasangala namba kudathaaa! :( ...emathravanga yara iruntha ena...blame the one who gets cheat instead!! it can always be the other way around bcos pasanga easily for for any female!...epadi nama reverse swing!

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  7. good one shruthi thirudargal Jakirathai. It happen to anyone. I can see why you used a man and women conversation to build up the tension. Well thought one.

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  8. Thats was great,an interesting lesson to impart

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  9. Cute! And different! Good one, girlie!!! :)

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  10. lollzzzz...

    Be careful...haaan...

    :)

    nice one.

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  11. Yieeeekkkkks!!! Torture, torment all put together!

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  12. lol poor girl. Good one shruti. I see you are excelling in this format of fiction :)

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  13. hmm nice one packs a punch.... girl was hasty, so she made waste :)



    i am still waiting for the replies on facebook ;)



    take care and keep writing.............

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  14. BTW.. Nalla dhaan twist yosikkareenga :))))

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  15. Indha pasangalae ippadi thaa esamaan :P

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  16. hahahaha!! My goodness! Only u can think of such a twist when the start was sooo romantic!! Real good one :))

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  17. pasanga mela apdi enna kandu... :( :(

    but then good story :D :D

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  18. Wonderful one Shruti! I loked the end twist so much!

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  19. Kahani mein twist... I like it! ;)

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  20. First time here and glad to see ur attempt at 55F..

    See you around sometime at my blog :)

    Cheers
    Mahesh

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  21. OH...That's a tragic end.. I knew it when it was getting so romantic, it might end in such a tragedy but did not expect this kind of end :)

    Such a stupid girl...Exchanging number is one thing..but she exchanged addresses?? that's height of stupidity...

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  22. quite nice one...........again a sting in the tale

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  23. :)..Quite good and sensitive too..:) Well written shruti..hw r u gal..?

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  24. Quite a twist :)

    A wonderful 55-fiction piece just like always :)

    Cheers!!

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  25. Hehehe...good one yaar.. Crisp and clear undestood in the first attempt :P

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  26. >>Thouzif
    Welcome to H&M!!
    YEah exactly...Btw, what reply?!

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  27. :o .... did not expect that .... fun read though .. keep it up

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  28. Totally unexpected ending! :O really different kind. Good one as usual, queen :)

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  29. >>Kay
    Many a times, it holds true :)

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  30. >>Rajlakshmi
    You read twice! Ty girl :)

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  31. >>G3
    Twist nallarukka?! thanksungammani!

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  32. >>G3
    Indirect ah yarayo solrapla irukke...neenga gils ah solla matenga nu i know! :D

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  33. >>Vineeta
    :D :P
    Thank u girl.. 55Fiction demands such twists!

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  34. >>Adi
    wow, u r back or just a visit?! Thank u!

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  35. >>Gils
    Unna pathi yezhudhiteno??

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  36. >>Hary
    Indha comment kagave room pottu yosippa pola!

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  37. >>Sid
    Opinion differs re :)
    Thanks for being frank!

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  38. >>Priyan
    Thanks buddy! U have been supportive from the beginning!

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  39. >>Kanagu
    Yedho namalala mudinja kaariyam :D

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  40. >>Pra
    Thank u girl!! Happy to see u back :)

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  41. >>Kaddu
    End mein twist achi hai na?! Thank u!

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  42. >>Mahesh
    Welcme to H&M
    Stupidity?! Yeah, but this is just a fiction na!

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  43. >>TA
    Another sting :P :D
    But, u dint get weird thoughts na!?

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  44. >>Prams
    Hey thank u!! It has been a long time since i saw u in my blog!!
    Am fine girl! How are you?!

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  45. >>Ram
    Understood?!? Atlast u started understanding things!

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  46. >>Thousif
    Thank u! What you asked in FB?

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