Tuesday, October 27, 2009

55 Fiction - #20

Hi everyone! This is my 20th 55 Fiction. Wow, I am really feeling happy.
Understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

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THE STORY

Shaan was narrating the storyline of his directorial venture to his friend, Madhu.cartoon After describing the tragic death of the lovers, he turned to see the moistened eyes of Madhu.
Shaan : My! this is just a sentimental story, don't cry.
Madhu : Tears are not for your sentiments, it is because of the Yawn I controlled

Yawn Specialist - Venky, gave me the concept YAWN and I wrote this 55Fiction based on the concept he gave me. So, how was it?

With Love,

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84 comments:

  1. MadmanOctober 27, 2009 at 8:41 PM

    you made me proud de carry on your good work. I am glad gave this concept to you.

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  2. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 8:44 PM

    @Venky
    Hey nejamave va? Glad that i didn't let u down!

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  3. kakaOctober 27, 2009 at 8:44 PM

    lol....but good work on the concept...and it is never easy stifling a yawn...:P

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  4. GuriaOctober 27, 2009 at 8:45 PM

    Good one, Shruti...
    Funny story, good concept! :)

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  5. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 8:45 PM

    @Kaka
    Experience speaks eh?!?!! :P :P
    Thanks!

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  6. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 8:46 PM

    Good sense of humour!

    Good that you passed it to me thro this post!!

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  7. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 8:49 PM

    @Guria
    Thanks Girlie! Really, struggled a lot to bring this in 55words!!

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  8. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    @Bala
    Hey thanks pa :)

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  9. NehaOctober 27, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    hey nice one queen :P

    jokes apart, this was a funny 55ver..

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  10. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 8:52 PM

    @Neha
    Heeheh.. even Butter queen acknowledged this :P
    Thanks Neha!

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  11. Pramoda MeduriOctober 27, 2009 at 9:00 PM

    Hi Shruti,

    good one..:) ..

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  12. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 9:01 PM

    @Prams
    Hey thanks!!

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  13. MustafOctober 27, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    Good one, bechara Shaan :(

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  14. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 9:11 PM

    @Mustaf
    Bechara means?!

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  15. MustafOctober 27, 2009 at 9:15 PM

    Bechara means poor guy,the way I understood this, his story must be so boring that Madhu felt terribly tired and so she yawned, so i said poor shaan.

    Did you mean something else? :O

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  16. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 9:17 PM

    @Mustaf
    U understood correctly! Btw, Madhu is a HE :P
    I didn't understand the meaning og Bechara...so asked :)

    P.S : Used HTML codes?!

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  17. MustafOctober 27, 2009 at 9:35 PM

    oh that hindi thing :)? ok no more hindi while commenting :D

    And i used your codes, it is perfect now. I had replied you in my blog.Thanks again here.

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  18. ShrutiOctober 27, 2009 at 9:39 PM

    @Mustaf
    Hey thanks a ton yaar!! I will be really glad if u don't comment in hindi :P

    U r always welcome :)

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  19. Mahesh Aadhya KalalOctober 27, 2009 at 10:24 PM

    It is a Googleee.....bit a spin....bit lite......a chick-let....jus a one more reading type..... sort of ...

    but the anthropologist in me says it is marvellous.....Yes, I mean it....

    I am not sure whether your intention, behind the writing is same, and exactly, what I perceived ..... may be it is jus my interpretation.....It seems quite simple, blend with subtle irony, but i caught many unsaid things(isms) hidden in those nuances of relativity and realism.....

    I liked the way u have drifted from categorizing urself in 55 fiction....
    Good effort.... :) :) :)

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  20. HaRy!!October 27, 2009 at 10:38 PM

    ipo than comedy ku erungi iruka!! nice nice! :D... kotavi vidrathula ena ore siripu...hmm come to think of it..ll do a 55 fiction as well? ena pa solra...ore mokaya poidum nu i think!

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  21. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 10:47 PM

    he he....
    :)
    great work shruti...
    reminds me of my profs....
    they also make make us yawn...

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  22. Darshan ChandeOctober 27, 2009 at 11:06 PM

    Haha... Turned out to be a joke... At first I thought it's really sentimental... Anyway, humor is good. A witty attempt :-)

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  23. Siddhesh KabeOctober 27, 2009 at 11:15 PM

    Rofl...super...

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  24. Rachana ShakyawarOctober 27, 2009 at 11:39 PM

    @ Shruti

    This was really fun reading it :D
    Also I read that in the above comments that Madhu is HE...hmm...I really wonder why is Madhu is HE...??

    Anyway great attempt :)

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  25. NανєєηOctober 27, 2009 at 11:54 PM

    lols .... :D :D
    good one

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  26. RajlakshmiOctober 28, 2009 at 1:19 AM

    Lolz loved the humour in the story... :) keep writing :)

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  27. AnonymousOctober 28, 2009 at 1:25 AM

    Good one girl.. I was really ROTFLing here.. nice concept too :)

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  28. ChatterboxOctober 28, 2009 at 3:49 AM

    That was very good Shruti!
    I too react similarly at times when I am subjected to something just too boring to bear which I can't run from.

    Keep up the good work!

    Cheers!!

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  29. UnknownOctober 28, 2009 at 9:04 AM

    LOL! Good 1 shruti :)
    That was a tough subject ... writing a 55er for 'yawn'
    I liked it..

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  30. BharathiOctober 28, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    nice lighter one, wspecially in the morning when I m about to start work :-). Hope I woudnt yarn today.

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  31. MakkOctober 28, 2009 at 9:31 AM

    :)!

    Keep it up!!

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  32. Raji UOctober 28, 2009 at 9:59 AM

    Nalla irundhadhu da.. I really liked.. congrats on completing your 20th 55 fiction.. :)

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  33. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:21 AM

    @Mahesh
    Whatta comment yaar! Yours was the first comment I read after switching on the system!
    ""It is a Googleee.....bit a spin....bit lite......a chick-let....jus a one more reading type..... sort of""
    Sort of?!?! Woh kya hai?

    what u presumed? Its simple I guess!

    Thanks a lot buddy!

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  34. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:34 AM

    @Hary
    Venky kudutha concept apdi :)
    But i struggled a lot while writing this 55Fiction... Couldn't compress it in 55Words...Happy 2 see the response :)

    The second part of ur comment.. I couldn't understand

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  35. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:51 AM

    @RSV
    Thanks :)
    My professor's did the same to me :) Singing lullaby :P

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  36. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:53 AM

    @Darshan
    Enjoyed it?
    Thanks yaar :)

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  37. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:54 AM

    @Sid
    Thanks yaar :)

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  38. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:57 AM

    @Rachana
    Madhu being a HE or SHE doesn't make any difference. But I wrote it as HE. That's why i corrected Mustaf!

    Thanks girlie :)

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  39. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    @Naveen
    Thanks :)

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  40. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    @Rajlakshmi
    Thanks girlie :)

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  41. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    @Avada
    Heheheh :P
    Thanks :)

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  42. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 11:00 AM

    @Chatterbox
    I do the same always when I am in my class :)

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  43. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 11:01 AM

    @Shruti
    Shruti(MM) liked Shruti's 55Fiction :)
    Thanks! Indeed it was really tough! Glad that I managed to shape this well!

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  44. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 11:02 AM

    @Bharathi
    Don't forget to tell me how your day was! Was full of yawn?!

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  45. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 11:02 AM

    @Makk
    Real appreciation from u! Then it must be good :)
    Thanks :)

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  46. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 11:03 AM

    @Raji
    Thank u so much da :)
    U r the first one to wish me on the completion of 20 55fictions :)

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  47. EkamOctober 28, 2009 at 11:13 AM

    Hehe...Boring college classes ki yaad aa gayi in which I used to yawn and sometimes sleep with eyes wide open and sleeping mind :D

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  48. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 11:19 AM

    @Ekam
    Sleep with eyes wide open? My friends are expert in them!

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  49. pRiYaN...!October 28, 2009 at 12:05 PM

    weird concept and good narration !

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  50. AnonymousOctober 28, 2009 at 12:06 PM

    This one was different from your 55-ers and on the lighter side :D ...enjoyed it a lot ...

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  51. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    @Priyan
    Thanks Buddy!

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  52. Mahesh Aadhya KalalOctober 28, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    @ Shruti,

    I dont mean it is simple....
    It may look simple.....
    but i felt it is marvellous....i said it in next line na...

    I gave you a compliment , but the other way....
    :) :) :)

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  53. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    @Dhiman
    Hi dhiman, welcome back after a longggg time :)
    Enjoyed?!
    That's what I want :)
    Thanks buddy!!

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  54. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 12:28 PM

    @Mahesh
    WoW!!
    I breathed a sense of relief!
    I am very happy to see such a comment!!

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  55. SwaramOctober 28, 2009 at 1:47 PM

    Ha ha this is simply superb Shru! Am yawning as I say this ;) ;) ;)

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  56. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 1:54 PM

    @Swaram
    hey girlie! I bored u so much that u stated yawning ??? :O :O
    :P
    Thanks sweety!

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  57. SwaramOctober 28, 2009 at 1:58 PM

    Arre no :P I felt as a part of the story myself that I started yawning he he he ;)

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  58. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 2:06 PM

    @Swaram
    I guess Shaan's story is that much poor!! First it was madhu who yawned, now its u!! :P
    Shaan, next time write a gud story :P

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  59. EkamOctober 28, 2009 at 2:19 PM

    I'm in expert in it too :D

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  60. kanaguOctober 28, 2009 at 2:55 PM

    ha ha ha... :) liked it..

    you are good in writing funnier things in 55 fiction.. mostly I have seen only the sad things in 55 fiction...

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  61. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 3:07 PM

    @Ekam
    Wow girl, u have so many talents :P

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  62. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 3:10 PM

    @Kanagu
    U haven't read any of my so called funnier 55Fictions?
    thanks buddy!!

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  63. RHYTHM AND RHYMEOctober 28, 2009 at 3:29 PM

    Congratulations on the 20th.
    Another good story and a pleasure to read.

    Yvonne.

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  64. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 3:37 PM

    @Yvonne
    Thank you so much for the wishes lady!

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  65. SapphireOctober 28, 2009 at 3:54 PM

    hahaha...good one, shruti!!

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  66. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 3:59 PM

    @Sapphire
    Thanks girl :)

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  67. Amit Kumar SinghOctober 28, 2009 at 4:17 PM

    Very Nice one :)
    Made me laugh :)
    Reminded me my one of my close friends..who used to sleep in every class... :)
    Cheers!!

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  68. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 4:20 PM

    @Amit
    u wont sleep in any class??? :O
    Thanks buddy

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  69. BK Chowla,October 28, 2009 at 4:58 PM

    It was vey simple but the narration was superb.

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  70. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 5:08 PM

    @Chowla ji
    Thank you so much ji!

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  71. BharathiOctober 28, 2009 at 7:47 PM

    Ha ha ha. its not a very busy day and I coudnt avoid a couple of yarns.

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  72. ShrutiOctober 28, 2009 at 7:56 PM

    @Bharathi
    Hope nobody saw your yawn's :P
    Hey, thanks for coming all the way and telling about ur day!

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  73. UnknownOctober 30, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    ha..ha.. that was funny... nice one...

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  74. UnknownOctober 30, 2009 at 11:08 AM

    Hi di....

    sorry for the late comment.... lol..that was funny.... a very good one.. VEnky's influence he..he....

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  75. ShrutiOctober 30, 2009 at 11:09 AM

    @Wall paper
    Sorry, I don't know ur name :)
    Hi and a big welcome to my blog!
    Thanku!

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  76. ShrutiOctober 30, 2009 at 11:43 AM

    @Shankar
    :P
    Thanks :)
    Epdi comment lam panna aarambicha!

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  77. UnknownOctober 30, 2009 at 11:47 AM

    today morning got some free time... some one asked for my template.. I came to blogger for giving them my template....

    seri blogger varaika vandhutom..ellaroda blog layum comment panlam nu... going to everyone's blog and commenting now.....

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  78. ShrutiOctober 30, 2009 at 11:55 AM

    @Shankar
    Yenna perundhanmai da unakku!! Unna nenacha perumaiya irukku!

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  79. UnknownOctober 30, 2009 at 12:01 PM

    why??whats there in giving template.... and I designed one slider for him too.... just a help from my side... that's it...

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  80. ShrutiOctober 30, 2009 at 1:44 PM

    @Shankar
    Naan template pathi sollala... yenna perundhanmaiya yella blog layum comment panre...

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  81. UnknownOctober 30, 2009 at 7:11 PM

    hello.... Na enniku comment pannama irundhurken??.. overa pesadha... ask bharathi..ashwini..shilpa.... I have never missed even one of their post....

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  82. ShrutiOctober 30, 2009 at 7:30 PM

    @Shankar
    Nan yenna pesinalum theva illama sanda varum! Leave it!

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  83. MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM)November 1, 2009 at 12:01 AM

    To whomsoever it may concern the Madhu mentioned here was not me ! Kidding..

    Nice post..

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  84. ShrutiNovember 1, 2009 at 5:54 PM

    @Madhu
    Lol :P
    Thanks :)

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