Am setting my foot in the second month of blogging! Last month the same day my first post got published! Now after a month am here with my 21st post and 36 wonderful followers! Thank you once again!
Well friends, am here again with another 55 Fiction! Am so happy that people like my 55 fiction. Its been quite sometime that i wrote one 55Fiction! So, today being Friday planned to publish this one! This 55 fiction getting published on Friday is called "55 Fiction Friday"
Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
If only I had known before hospitalizing my son for cracked skull.
If only I had known before cracking his skull due to my rough blow.
If only I had seen before hitting my son for scratching the new car.
If only I had seen, he had scratched 'I love you dad' on my car.
I am dedicating this 55Fiction to The Crazy SiD who has gone for a brain transplantation to imbibe still more stupid things to his brain!
Hope you liked this one.. Please do comment on this 55 fiction attempt!
With Love,
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lol...if only i had known u were writing a 55...:P...nice one...
ReplyDelete@kaka
ReplyDeletelolzz to you too!!
Thanks!
well dis is vry well written.....
ReplyDelete@ The aspirant
ReplyDeletethanks re!
hey that was a good one..queen of 55 fiction :)
ReplyDeleteyei shruthi ennama nee kuttina epdi skull crack agum sollu. udane ipdi thaan enna kuttadha ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd shruthi congrats for 21 st post rather a month of blogging. Dont celebrate celebrate your 100th post
ReplyDelete@ash-win-i
ReplyDeletethank you re!! Queen eh?!
@venky
ReplyDeleteloosa pa ne?!
Andha payyana appa dan kutinaru!!
Va venum na naanum kutti kaamikren
@venky
ReplyDeletethanks yaar!
""Dont celebrate celebrate your 100th post""
yenna solla vara?!
Nice one :)
ReplyDelete@anu
ReplyDeletethanks yaar!!
Nice story. 21 posts per month is amazing. I could hardly manage one to two per week now adays.
ReplyDeleteConratulations for 36 followers and I hope you would reach 50 soon.
@Bharathi
ReplyDeletethanks for your wishes!
Hope you understood this without reading the comments :P
Ha ha. this one is quite easy. You wrote it like 2nd standard rhymes. Most of the times I find it difficult to understand the concept of 55 fiction. Recently I read one in some other blog and I coudnt get it. I read the comments section, every one wrote, 'hey excellent, splendid, wow etc. I dont know if they really understand or if People feign understanding or if they misunderstand or if am really that dumb. No idea :-).
ReplyDelete@bharathi
ReplyDelete2nd std rhymes ah?!
romba asinga paduthitengale!!
Hey really i too saw in many other posts comment section, the same splendid,wow!!
But are they reading the posts fully?! I had this doubt too!
A blow can crack a skull??? I think he must be having brawn Gp's suspension in his hand...he..he....
ReplyDeletesry... for talking about f1 here also.. but when i read cracked skull...f1 only came to my mind...
suspension of one car cracked the skull of one driver... it cracked the skull even after wearing the helmets.... the suspension made a whole in the helmet.... a very weird accident....
it's touching.... :)
ReplyDeleteI loved it... :)
cheers!!
@bharathi:even i dont understand some of the 55's.. I ask for explanation if i dont understand.... I thought i am the only dumb fool here....lol..u r there to accompany me now...thanks. ;-)
ReplyDelete@shankz
ReplyDeletedai! Ingayum F1 ah?! Mudila da! Nan sonna madri paithyam aaga pora! Freak!!
How a blow will crack skull? Gud question
the boy is jus a kid,tender! A rough blow caused that damage!
@Both shankar and bharathi
both you fellas keep on discussing abt 55Fiction
can't forget your discussions abt the spirit in my last post!!
@amit
ReplyDeletethanks yaar!!
glad that you liked it!
@ shruthi
ReplyDeleteWhat i meant was dont celebrate 21 st post, celebrate 100th post, Kalela thooka kalakam athaan
I know that his appa knocked on his head, how come his skull crack and get admitted in a hospital ethellam too much ma. Uruttu kattaiya vechi thirudanu nenaichi adichittaara :-o
;)
@venky
ReplyDeleteivlo theliva anuparaye!
""Uruttu kattaiya vechi thirudanu nenaichi adichittaara""
ada paavi!
avar appa da!! Kozhandha yoda brain romba soft and tender adan skull cracked :P
yeppudiiii!!!! B-)
@ Shankar: Haha ha, May be we are the only set who honestly accepted that we are dumb fools :-)
ReplyDelete@ Shruti: You dont make me dumb that often as you write simple 55s.
ReplyDelete@Bharathi!!
ReplyDeleteAaahhh!!
Thanks!! That's a great compliment i guess!!
Bharathi understands my 55fiction without seeing my comments section!
Nice Cracking 55fiction shruts...
ReplyDeletegood congrats for one month celebration in blogging world.
keeep rockng ..
ur Follower Only in blog,
Prasee
But once following in ********
Nice one again but one should never hit a kid :)
ReplyDelete@prasee
ReplyDeletethanks!
""following in ********""
whats that!
@kasabian girl
ReplyDeletethanks re! Yes! I made that imaginary father to hurt his kid :)
Cool poem.I dont understand 55fiction but liked your small poem :). Good going :)
ReplyDeletenaah!
ReplyDeleteits not a poem baba!! Its a short story!!
ha ha ha what a publicity
ReplyDelete@ shruthi
ReplyDeleteNice logic babyikku 6months thaana hehehe illa evalo vayasu, seri ada vidu story ok i expect much more from after writing some many 55 ficitons.
@bharathi
ReplyDelete:P
@venky
ReplyDeletehey next 55 la paaru!! Wait n watch!
yeah i remember this story from somewhere else, but never knew it can be made so precise to make a very goood impact...oh i luv yur 55 fictions!! neenga yengayooo poitinga....kalakal kalakal , kalakal :)!! tak care...god bless yu
ReplyDeleteHaRy
and hey chk out ma new post :)
@hary
ReplyDeleteyes i too heard about this story somewhere! so thought of making it as a 55!
""oh i luv yur 55 fictions!!""
Thanks re hary!
""neenga yengayooo poitinga""
yengayume pola hary!! Am flattered too much!
Thanks for those lovely words!
Yes will check it now!
Got this one as a sms long ago but u have made a good 55-Fiction post in it shruthi :)
ReplyDeletehey does my blog template load very slowly ??? coz some people want me to change it....
@sathish
ReplyDeletehey thanks re!!
Reg ur template,am getting loaded properly!!
don change! It suits well
I kind of knew of 55 but I am clearer now.Very well written and just to confirm I understood this before reading any comment.
ReplyDelete@Chowla ji
ReplyDelete""Very well written""
thank you ji!
""I understood this before reading any comment""
Am really glad to hear it!
Good one shruti.
ReplyDeleteThe Queen of 55 word Fiction.
@IP
ReplyDeletethanks re!!
Ahh!! Everyone calling me as "The Queen of 55 word Fiction"! Am still an amateur writer! Still long way to go!!
Keep Smiling!
Yeah i am smiling all the time.......thanks to u.
ReplyDeleteHave u forgotten my blog by the way?
@IP
ReplyDeletewelcome!!
Forgetting your blog!! NAah?! Am on the way!
How is ur blog-a-ton preparation going????????
ReplyDelete@IP
ReplyDeleteBlog-a-Ton to be very frank,even i don't have the slightest idea of how to write that!!
My..errr...our first time!!
Gonna write tommorow only!!
How about you!
same here yaar...hahahaha.... all u have to write is NEGATIVES AND POSITIVES of teachers now and then
ReplyDelete@IP
ReplyDelete""NEGATIVES AND POSITIVES of teachers now and then""
Hmmm... yeah! i dunno how am gonna make it!! Lets see!!
Yaar, finish it by tonight.
ReplyDeleteand post it early morning....i am sure u will be able to write
@IP
ReplyDeletei already feel like sleeping!! u started writing eh?!!
Yeah
ReplyDelete@IP
ReplyDeleteawesome!!
Shruti,
ReplyDeleteI have to be honest here. I have enjoyed many of your posts, for their diverse topic dealing and also the unique way you present them with. But this one didn't appeal much to me. Because, the 55 fiction posted here, is very popular. It originated almost a decade ago, and I have known this story since the past four years I guess! I don't say that you plagiarized, but that it was an innocent attempt!
Better luck next time!
Sorry for not visiting your blog in a week, was busy with exams and stuff! And now, I am back!
kya likha hai..
ReplyDelete55 fiction rockkss..
I seriously think I should try this atleast once..
great going..
@Pawan
ReplyDeleteam sorry that you didn't find this post appealing to you!!
Will surely present a much better one next time!!
Hey thats okay yaar!!
I can understand that you are back with a bang!!
Keep Smiling!
@RSV
ReplyDeleteonly 55fiction rocks eh?!
Not my attempt huh :P :D
Try it and have fun!
I like your 55 fiction and all the discussion about it! I think I will also confess that I am a dumb fool and didn't understand many 55 fictions but I have read many which are good and easy to understand!(you,IP,Sid,Vipul's and Shilpa Gerge's last one etc...)But it is fun to try and write them! All the bedt to you for a blog-a-Ton! I am trying to write as well!
ReplyDeleteJust check my latest 55 fiction.
@pra
ReplyDeleteam really glad that u like my post!!
thanks!!
thanks for your wishes for blog-a-ton!!
Best wishes 2 u too!!
Will check them!
Why are people 'lol'ing over this post .. can't they see the pain and agony of that poor boy !!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI could feel this post really hard ... the punishment was so hard on that kid, just for expressing his love for his father so unknowingly and innocently .. this was one of the BEST reads of my life ! But write happy posts, pl ... this one did hurt !
P.S. To everyone ..pl leave ur comments after reading the post.Don't just throw ur comment to get followers and back-comments !!!!
and m following ur blog (not u) for my life now :P
Shruti!
ReplyDeleteNicely condensed form of story (I too came across this a while ago). Good attempt :)
you always rockk
ReplyDelete55fiction seemed a new thing
so u know the expression..
the emotions touched the very soul..truly...and that can be the magic of a good writer
@sourav
ReplyDelete""this was one of the BEST reads of my life""
this comment made my day!!
Thanks for understanding this!
""and m following ur blog (not u) for my life now :P""
Lol :D
@RSV
ReplyDelete""you always rockk""
Is that so?!
""the emotions touched the very soul""
its a pleasure to here that!
Keep smiling!
@musings
ReplyDeletethanks anna!
anger has seen downfall of many and yet another in the story of yours!!!! we shud learn to control our emotions.
ReplyDeleteGud one
did u chek "Social Media: the next BIG thing". Its my new post. Comments please over it
ReplyDelete@sumeet
ReplyDeletethanks yaar!
@sumeet
ReplyDeletehey, i checked it long time back and wrote comments!!
But it vanished in thin air!!
funny!
ReplyDeleteBut did he blow or throw him to the wall like...... Are you sure of it :P
@Pramathesh!!
ReplyDeleteMan!! He is as strong as an iron!!
Simply amazing yaar.I was really moved by the story.Its difficult to create an impact on someone just with 55 words.Your work is stupendous :) Keep going
ReplyDelete@Ram
ReplyDeletehey am flattered da!!
THanks for your visit! Am glad!
Hey I hv read this earlier too ...but in the form of a long story.. Nice attempt to put it under 55 Fiction section..... BTW i hd heard of 55 fiction till date bt got to know wat it means jus today... Thanks..
ReplyDeleteHappy blogging..One month n u hv reached far way gal...... :)
@urvashi
ReplyDeleteHi :)
welcome to my blog..
""Nice attempt""
thank you so much!!
""i hd heard of 55 fiction till date bt got to know wat it means jus today""
Glad that you learnt about 55Fiction through my blog!!
""One month n u hv reached far way gal""
Thanks re!! :)
Well, a long read .. but an interesting one ... to be honest you could have made it shorter! No one now has so much time to read such long posts ... and neither is anyone so honest with their comments! I'm not a critic or a reviewer, just wanted to tell u this !
ReplyDeleteYour 55 word story is the best way to summarize any issue, U have ur own TALENT of hitting the spot with sharp words, U don't need essays to support what u say !
I don't believing in comparing times 'then and now' .. situations, students, level of competition, money matters, etc then were absolutely different(as you've said too) from now what it is !
And it's not actually right to compare a set of people from a profession, we still have lovely teachers around .. they give their best, do what they can to read a students mind and give their opinion honestly ! Teachers are individuals too, don't take up it as an issue, they had some usless teachers back then too, ask your parents they would obviously tell you !
Again loved Kevin and the mam's story, which was a 55 !!
Good teachers don't teach, they guide you .. they make you learn the right thing in a manner that you can have them in your mind all your life, not only till your next semester exams !
Then or now, we'll always have great teachers and the next best and most respected people after parents ! :)
Hope I wasn't rude, and I made my point clear, it's always my pleasure to read you more ! :)
Sourav...in love with me and life
take care !
@sourav
ReplyDeleteTook your advice and will try to reduce long essays!
Glad that you liked my 55Fiction!
Wow! 22posts in jus two months. Am still stuck at 22 even after three n half months.
ReplyDeleteSo, should i call you 'Queen of 55' or 'Miss 55'from now on....lolzz
@Shas
ReplyDelete22 Posts in one month!!
Be in home 24x7 and if boredom haunts you, you will end up writing even a post a day,accounting 30 posts per month!! :)
""should i call you 'Queen of 55' or 'Miss 55'from now on""
lolzz!!!
I shall be happy to get crowned as 'Princess of 55 Fiction!!'
I'm sure you had make out what mistake I did, instead of posting on the last post, I posted it here !!
ReplyDeleteSorry .. the poor silly me I am :P
@sourav
ReplyDeleteagain you have did the same!!
But thats ok!
Atleast from next post don't forget to write comments on the respective posts!!
What a composition of words and feeling! I liked it sooooooooo much! Glad to find you on blog :) btw.. I am also your follower now!
ReplyDelete@Vineeta
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
Glad that you liked it so much!
Thanks for following me!
Hey Vetty...
ReplyDeleteU have been so vetty that u have counted ur every foot steps in this blog.... :-D
BTW, gud writing de... Guess U got inspired by a similar story... Coz I have heared this one in a detailed format sometime before...
@Bala
ReplyDeleteRomba damage panadha da! Footstep yevlo azhaga irukku paru! :P
Andha detailed format ah dan 55fiction ah yezhudhinen
So copy adichitenu sollu!!!! :-P
ReplyDeleteAvlo detailed format ah 55Fiction ah yezhudhi paru! Idhula copy adikka onnume illa!
ReplyDeleteHi buddy...
ReplyDeleteIs it your own creation or got inspired from a PD book story....coz i read it elsewhere.
But the narration is great.
@Mahesh
ReplyDeleteHey actually, it is a long story, i took the essence of it and wrote a 55Fiction!