Friday, September 25, 2009

55 Fiction - #14


Here is my next 55 Fiction.

Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

THE JOURNEY

Recession, politics, marriage… they talked about everything on the way. His quick wit and sound knowledge took her by surprise. Throughout the journey, they spoke. But it’s his casual charm that struck her the most. As the journey came to an end, he looked deeply into her eyes and said, 'Chutta, de do didiji'

For those who don't know Hindi, the translation for the last part 'Chutta, de do didiji' is Give me the change sissie, as asked by auto drivers Tongue out

Wrote a new genre as I told you all in my last 55Fiction. This is not a tragedy which makes you sigh! Liked it eh?! Should I improve?

With Love,






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71 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:30 PM

    chhutta dedo didiji....
    ha ha....
    maza aa gaya.....

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  2. NανєєηSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:34 PM

    lols ... gud one ....

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  3. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:36 PM

    @RSV
    :P
    So was this different?

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  4. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:36 PM

    @Naveen
    Lolzz :P
    Thanks!

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  5. VinzSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:40 PM

    Indeed, a surprise..!!

    :)

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  6. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:40 PM

    @vinz
    :P
    Thanks

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  7. Amit Kumar SinghSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:45 PM

    Gr8 one...
    Ha ha ha ha ...:)
    loved it.. :)

    Cheers!!

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:48 PM

    yeps it was different and I thoroughly enjoyed the difference...

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  9. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:53 PM

    @Amit
    hehehe :P
    Thanks

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  10. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:53 PM

    @RSV
    Thanks re!!

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  11. NehaSeptember 25, 2009 at 1:57 PM

    hey nice one...

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  12. ParitoshSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:04 PM

    As humans we have the tendency to judge the intellect of someone from their jobs. It happens with me too. But when they turn out to be different its a very pleasant surprise.

    Loved the way you captured this.

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  13. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:16 PM

    @Neha
    Thanks :)

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  14. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:18 PM

    @Paritosh
    You are very true! I have seen auto drivers who speak about music and politics!

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  15. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:19 PM

    Hehhehe...:) Enjoyed reading it ..:)

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  16. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:23 PM

    @Prams
    hehehe :P
    Thanks :)

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  17. MakkSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:48 PM

    awwww
    was it comedy?? ..I had taken for another tragedy.

    lolzzzzz....

    :D

    nice one!!

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  18. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:50 PM

    @Makk
    Oh migh! Its ur perspective!
    If you think this as a comedy, then it is!
    :D :P
    Thanks Makk!

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  19. RajSeptember 25, 2009 at 2:55 PM

    lol. axed. :P

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  20. lostworldSeptember 25, 2009 at 3:02 PM

    Aha.. this surpassed all the others written till now.

    aur likhiye didijee !

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  21. HaRy!!September 25, 2009 at 3:06 PM

    Now this is a different take from yur end is'nt it? good one! :) ethavathu funny ah next time ezhutha mudiyuma? unala mudiyathathu iruka...keep the good work mam :)!

    HaRy

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  22. Indian PunditSeptember 25, 2009 at 3:17 PM

    Hahahahahahahaha......'Chutta, de do Shrutiji'....hahaha

    Awesome Shruti.

    u just rock yaar.

    Cheers.

    Check out The Part 2 of Maa Durga Series.

    Some nice pandal pics there.

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  23. kakaSeptember 25, 2009 at 3:28 PM

    do u like 20-20 a lot????wondering wat is the conn to ur post????i will let u know....well ur 55's are always good...i am running out of ideas wat to comment...:)

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  24. SwaramSeptember 25, 2009 at 3:40 PM

    Gud one :)

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  25. BK Chowla,September 25, 2009 at 4:48 PM

    Very original and very humorous.

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  26. Anu...:)September 25, 2009 at 5:06 PM

    That was tragically comical :P

    Nice change from the usual! :)

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  27. Musings of a lonely travelerSeptember 25, 2009 at 5:09 PM

    Shruti! quite unpredictable plot. It refreshing to read your entries after such a pretty long gap sissie :)

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  28. GuriaSeptember 25, 2009 at 5:50 PM

    Hey, good one!

    Just have time to read your post (and then run again!), really enjoyed it! :)

    Love, G.

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  29. AnoopSeptember 25, 2009 at 6:08 PM

    Hmmm...
    this one is good.. ;)

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  30. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:33 PM

    @Scarlet diaries
    :P

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  31. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:34 PM

    @Lostworld
    Oh migh!!
    Thanks a ton girlie!

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  32. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:40 PM

    @Hary
    Yes, i neva wrote anything like this. First time!!
    Will try humor next time.. But i dunno how much i can do justice

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  33. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:42 PM

    @IP
    Thanks re!! Do i rock?! I don't know :P

    Will check out your post!

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  34. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:48 PM

    @Kaka
    Yes i like 20-20 so much!!
    Thanks!! Running out of ideas for commenting eh?!!

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  35. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:48 PM

    @Swaram
    Thanks :)

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  36. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:50 PM

    @Chowla ji
    Thank you so much!

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  37. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:50 PM

    @Anu
    Nice change eh?!
    Thanks :)

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  38. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:51 PM

    @Musings
    Is it refreshing?! Oh!! That's great!!
    Thanks anna!!

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  39. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:52 PM

    @Sreya
    carry on with pandal hopping!!
    Thank you!!!

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  40. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 7:53 PM

    @Anoop!!
    Was this good?! Thanks!!

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  41. Sathish Chandrasekaran (சதீஷ் சந்திரசேகரன்)September 25, 2009 at 9:48 PM

    hmmm good attempt pa :)
    u keep gettin better in ur 55-fiction attempts :)


    keep blogging
    cheers!!!!

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  42. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 11:03 PM

    @Satish
    Thanks ma :)

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  43. RHYTHM AND RHYMESeptember 25, 2009 at 11:32 PM

    Very good, well done.


    Yvonne

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  44. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 11:36 PM

    @Yvonne
    Thanks a ton re!!

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  45. Siddhesh KabeSeptember 25, 2009 at 11:53 PM

    Superb posting...perfect twist...

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  46. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 11:58 PM

    @SiD
    :P :D :O Thanks

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  47. Aditya KasavarajuSeptember 26, 2009 at 12:53 AM

    When did the Auto fellas at Chennai started speaking in hindi? :P

    hehe this is soo good shruti. I like such light hearted ones. tragedies make me saddy waddy :P

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  48. UnknownSeptember 26, 2009 at 8:56 AM

    nice one shruthi....

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  49. ShrutiSeptember 26, 2009 at 9:51 AM

    @Adi
    Thanks :)
    Let me try some more genres too!!

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  50. ShrutiSeptember 26, 2009 at 9:51 AM

    @Shankz
    Thanks da

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  51. MadmanSeptember 26, 2009 at 4:10 PM

    Thats a good one. Nee enna Amit 123 rather amita 123 ah autokaran hindi la pesaraan

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  52. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2009 at 6:59 PM

    It was very nice, it seems to me that you really love writing 55fiction. Keep it up.Thumbs up.

    shilpa

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  53. ShrutiSeptember 26, 2009 at 9:08 PM

    @Venky
    :O

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  54. ShrutiSeptember 26, 2009 at 9:09 PM

    @Shilpa
    Thanks re :)

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  55. RAMSeptember 27, 2009 at 12:24 PM

    hahaha... good one

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  56. The AspirantSeptember 27, 2009 at 5:06 PM

    ha ha ha ha ha
    dis is really very gud.... :P
    really awesum

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  57. ShrutiSeptember 27, 2009 at 7:33 PM

    @Ram
    Thanks :)

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  58. ShrutiSeptember 27, 2009 at 7:34 PM

    @The Aspirant
    Hey thanks buddy!!

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  59. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM

    hahaha.. too good girl.. sorry for the late comment.. good to see a different genre of fiction 55.. lol :)

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  60. ShrutiSeptember 29, 2009 at 11:25 AM

    @Avada
    Hehehehehe :P
    Thanks :)

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  61. PrashansaSeptember 29, 2009 at 11:46 AM

    Hey Shruti This is avery different 55 fiction. It is not only the comedy as it looks on surface! Very deep one...

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  62. ShrutiSeptember 29, 2009 at 12:37 PM

    @Pra
    Hey pra, welcome back after a long time!!
    Very deep one?!
    May be!!

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  63. Shilpa GargSeptember 29, 2009 at 11:03 PM

    Interesting! :)

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  64. ShrutiSeptember 29, 2009 at 11:22 PM

    @Shilpa
    Thank you!

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  65. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2009 at 9:01 AM

    Now I believe we shall tag you as 55 fiction queen!

    Good one.

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  66. PradsSeptember 30, 2009 at 10:20 AM

    Good one but diffrnt try.. ..

    keep going forward//

    Regards,
    Prasee


    plzzz infrm me abt ur new blog updates

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  67. ShrutiSeptember 30, 2009 at 12:38 PM

    @Amrit
    Yo!!
    Welcome back after a long time..
    You are tagging me as 55Fiction Queen eh!!
    Thank you thank you!!
    Ahhh... the Crown is wonderful!!
    I love it!!

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  68. ShrutiSeptember 30, 2009 at 12:40 PM

    @Prasee
    Thanks :)

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  69. AnonymousOctober 14, 2009 at 10:50 AM

    Gud one... I somewhat guessed the suspense at the start itself... May be am becoming brilliant reading ur posts... :-P

    hey girls.. U like speaking about politics too??? I dont think so...

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  70. ShrutiOctober 14, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    @Bala
    hey, yen posts ah padicha blunt ah irukara mindsum sharp aaidum :P
    So no wonder that u became brilliant!

    I speak politics man ;)

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  71. ShrutiJanuary 6, 2010 at 12:24 PM

    hehee.. well done! :)
    WHy did he look so deeply into her eyes to say that :P

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