Saturday, June 26, 2010

55 Fiction - #34



Long long time since I wrote a 55Fiction! It has been 4 months since I wrote a 55F! And here am with a fiction! Just read it and let me know what you felt! Are you game? Go ahead and read this!



A TALE



Krish was a regular kid. He went to school, and hated math. Playing cricket was his passion. He would run to the ground, join his team after school and then they would play. He would grab the bat, stand and wait. And listen for bells on the rolling ball. His ears were his eyes.







With Love,



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23 comments:

  1. VivekJune 26, 2010 at 12:34 PM

    well tried ...Shruti..55 words are always diff ..though I hv seen ..22 words ..as well these are the toughest to pen down..I never ..tried ..BTW..

    have a gr8 weekend

    Enjoy ! :)

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  2. Karthikeyan SJune 26, 2010 at 12:52 PM

    Soo Good Shruti! Nice to See you Back after Long time ! :)

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  3. UnknownJune 26, 2010 at 12:53 PM

    Gr8 to see you back in action and in your old form....

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  4. NehaJune 26, 2010 at 12:53 PM

    nice one shruti.. :))

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  5. RajJune 26, 2010 at 2:31 PM

    snake!

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  6. AnwesaJune 26, 2010 at 3:27 PM

    nice one :) the last line keeps you hooked.

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  7. Rachana ShakyawarJune 26, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Hi Shruti Sweet!!

    Beautiful Narration!! SO Apt!
    You indeed came with the bang!!
    :)Welcome back...! Missed you and your awesome posts so much...

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  8. Saurabh PanshikarJune 26, 2010 at 4:02 PM

    Good one... Welcome back!

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  9. RHYTHM AND RHYMEJune 26, 2010 at 6:40 PM

    Welcome back especially with an excellent story.

    Yvonne,

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  10. Pramoda MeduriJune 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM

    Hi SHruti, I've just said in ur previous post that i've been missing ur 55 fictions..

    and here u r with one more nice story..

    Thanks dear

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  11. The AspirantJune 27, 2010 at 1:55 AM

    u havn't missed a thing yaar....
    its awesum nd m glad to read dis 55fiction frm u again....

    cheers :)

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  12. SJune 27, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    Here after a long time, and I am glad am not disappointed. nice post.touched. you take care! :)

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  13. HariniJune 27, 2010 at 11:02 PM

    Very nice :)

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  14. Scribblers IncJune 28, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    very impressive stuff...infact, its extremely tough to give such a concrete end to a story. GOOD job! :)

    Scribblers Inc.

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  15. AnonymousJune 29, 2010 at 11:33 AM

    Welcome back girlie.. sorry for commenting so late. I read it on the day you published. So happy to see a 55er from your side after such a long time. Too good as usual :) Hope we will get some regular doses from your side :)

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  16. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com)June 29, 2010 at 4:18 PM

    nice one buddy.... good to see u back! :)

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  17. MakkJune 30, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    Should I say welcome back?

    Keep SMiling.

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  18. AnonymousJune 30, 2010 at 10:41 PM

    I am touched by this one Shruti... nice one :)

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  19. lostworldJuly 2, 2010 at 10:58 PM

    Nice.. A 55-er isn't too time consuming right. Do write more often. We miss your thrillers ;)

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  20. RajlakshmiJuly 5, 2010 at 2:24 AM

    long time :)
    and nice 55-er :)

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  21. Sh@sAugust 9, 2010 at 1:14 PM

    Touched. Do i need to say more :)

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  22. Mahesh Aadhya KalalAugust 26, 2010 at 2:28 PM

    Nice one,liked the pic

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  23. UnknownAugust 31, 2010 at 2:53 PM

    Nice one Shruti!!!

    Understood after reading many times... Hope I understood!!!

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