55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
LOVE STORY
He picked his lifeless mobile, swirled it, pleading it to come to life. He was awaiting the response from her, for the proposal he made yesterday (a day before V-day)
Ring!
He grabbed the phone, cleared his throat and squeaked a hi. Bated Breath. Silence.
“Sir, do you have a HDFC credit card?"
With Love,
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Some people need to keep at it Vda or not - good post !
ReplyDeleteI know... these telemarketing can be such a pain sometimes.. You will expecting an important call and they will disturb you so very badly..:)
ReplyDeleteNot ur best 55-fiction pa..
ReplyDeleteYou could loads better...
keep blogging
cheers !!!
poor guy
ReplyDeleteHaiyo.. Adanga Maatiya??..
ReplyDeleteUnnai Pol Oruvan paathiya enna?? :)
intha telemarketing thola thangala narayanaaa... kosu marunthu adichi kolunga pa!
ReplyDeleteHa Ha he better accepts it :P what if she accepts his proposal and he decides to splurge on ;)
ReplyDelete- Lakshmi Rajan
GingerChai.com
P.S > Finally i managed Sid to open his name/url option now i think I should make u do it :P OPEN IT.
lol :D kahaani mein twisht ;)
ReplyDeleteya, these marketing ppl call at the most innoportune moments! hope he get the right call soon! :D
Very clevery written. well done.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
lolzzz these telemarketing guys always chosse the wrong moment :)
ReplyDeleteOh oh! Comedy of error! Comedy when it happens to others and tragedy when it happens to us! ;) LOL!
ReplyDeletelol lol. Poor guy. By the way, it isn't any mistake of that marketing guy too. Being a marketing guy, I understand their pain ;)
ReplyDelete:-) nice twist, happens usually, but the realist that I am, wouldn't the guy have her number(s) on his mobile, especially that he has gone to the extent of proposing and almost every mobile owner uses caller ID? You can <Grrr> and laugh it off saying she may call from a PCO or from a friend's or a new number for a surprise. :-)
ReplyDeletelol... poor fellow... nice one Shruti! :)
ReplyDelete--Tavish
Latest Blog Post: Jab we met...
he he! when you least expect it!
ReplyDeleteI heard this one that a hot shot doctor got a call from some telemarketer...
He said "Madam I'm in the middle of a surgery and now if anything goes wrong, I'm gonna sue you"
He never heard from them again!
Nice twist! Enjoyed reading your 55 fiction :)
ReplyDeleteDats really funny one........even d most calm person loses his patience at such situations......:P
ReplyDeleteNice one Shruti... :) :) joined in the company???
ReplyDeleteA very god post I enjoyed. Well done Shruti.
ReplyDeleteawww...credit card... :(
ReplyDeletepoor guy... ;) ;)
awwwwwwwwwwwwww....
ReplyDeletei was about to write...
ReplyDeleteAnwesha's ..reaction...
lollzzz
Poor guy!! I was waiting for my friend to call up with result and my phone ran and i picked up... it turned out to be vodafone with a stupid offer :P.
ReplyDeleteCredit card co. calling means recession is over Now that's Good News...isn't it:D
ReplyDelete>>Gyanban
ReplyDeleteThank u :)
>>Raji
ReplyDeleteYes!! They can be PIA sometimes :P
>>Satz
ReplyDeleteWish I could ^_^
>>Abhishek
ReplyDeleteWelcome Back after a long time :)
Yes he is!
>>KK
ReplyDeleteUPO is nt on this storyline :P
>>Hary
ReplyDeleteAiiii!! Annatha sound lam bayangarama irukku!!
>>Chaiwala
ReplyDeleteLOL ;P
Btw, Wordpress readers are poncing on me for changing to name/url option!!
>>Vinay
ReplyDeleteYeah, Just think of his position na!! Poor guy :P
>>Yvonne
ReplyDeleteThanks lady :)
>>Rajlakshmi
ReplyDelete:P
Yes! They are like that!
>>Raksha
ReplyDelete:P yes sweetie :)
>>Aditya
ReplyDeleteOye! Adi s back or just a visit to blogs? Anyway am happy :)
Thanks :)
>>Rammmmm
ReplyDeleteyou told all the possibilities! Also, I dint Grrr or laugh it off! But this is just a fiction :)
>>Tavish
ReplyDeleteThank u so much!
>>Saurabh
ReplyDelete:P
The joke u mentioned was too good.. Wish I could tell something like that to all the calls i receive!
??KG
ReplyDeleteWelcome back girlie :)
Ty :)
>>TA
ReplyDeleteU r right :)
>>Kanagu
ReplyDeleteNot yet ma... Still vetti :)
>>KDPGrahi
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog :)
Thank u so much :)
>>Urvashi
ReplyDeleteIndeed very poor :P
>>Annwesa
ReplyDeleteI just smiled at ur reaction :)
>>Makk
ReplyDelete:) :)
>>Harini
ReplyDeleteeveryone of us has such experiences :)
>>Dhiman
ReplyDeleteArey... U completely gave a new dimension to the entire story :)
Simply great!! I liked this post!!
ReplyDeleteCheers!!
>>Sandy
ReplyDeleteThank u re and welcome to H&M
Gud one:)
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