Friday, January 15, 2010

55 Fiction - #28

Here comes my 27th 55 Fiction! So everyone knows what a 55Fiction is right?! So read the 55Fiction and let me know what you feel about it!

IN HEAVEN...

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She died in a gory accident and reaches heaven.

She : God, I want to live long.
God : Your time is over, kid!
She : Fine, you have a computer with internet?
God : Why?
She : Yes or no
God : No
She : Gosh, I have to moderate the comments for the new post in my blog.
God : !!!???!!! *Faints*

That's the power of a blogger Big Grin Tongue
How is this new genre?

With Love,

Shruti-Logo

Image Courtesy : Google Images


76 comments:

  1. Mokka Poduradhuku Oru Alavu irukudu, Replaced Yeman With God?? He He :))

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  2. >>Karthikeyan
    Indha thathuvam unakku purila :P

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  3. The "she" is me :)

    lol!!!loved it totally :)

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  4. >>Anwesa
    Really :P
    Even 'She' is me :P

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  5. sema mokka di internet illama computer irunda epdi moderate pannuva loosu

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  6. lol it was great...loved it so much :)

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  7. APPLAUSE!!! This was "the" best fiction 55 I have read till now... and am saying this with all the honesty... you should have put this up for BAT 6... :)

    cheers!
    Latest post: All in a day's work part 2

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  8. >>An ordinary Girl
    :P
    Thanks girlie :D

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  9. >>Tavish
    Oye Tavish, U serious?! Best 55F till now :O :O :O

    I myself can't believe it! Am i reading it correctly?
    *faints* Reading ur comment *fainting again*

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  10. firstly i never really like F55 before... started liking it after reading Vipul's F55 for BAT 6... the one u just wrote was really funny and thats y i loved it...

    so fainted after reading the comment haan? lol

    ill know u r back up when i c this visible lol

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  11. made me smile..



    Keep it up!

    Keep smiling!

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  12. Added Internet?? any btw y u asked about yeman?

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  13. >>Tavish
    Yeah am ok now :D
    U read vipul's other 55-er's! Some are awesome, others are great :)

    Thanks Tavish :)

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  14. >>Karthikeyan
    Yeah added that! About yeman - chumma keten :D

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  15. Ayyayyo. Shruti, konja naalukku computer pakkamey yosikkaadhey. Romba yosikkarey :) :) (God is Internet, Internet is God, for this generation)

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  16. >>Rammmm
    Aama la romba yosikaren :P What to do, manufacturing defect :D

    Btw God is internet and vice versa, Idhu konjam too much!

    Btw, ur tamil is good :D

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  17. If I would been God I would assigned Chitragupt for comment moderation ;) after-all he maintains everybody's life's balance sheets :D ...
    On a serious note liked this lighter genre though did have blood in it but end was real funny ...

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  18. >>Dhiman
    LOL dhiman! Chitragupt is the PA for the Lord of death! :P
    And Mind u, Password must not be shared :P

    And I just tried this genre and gotta mixed response :)

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  19. Awesome.. Hilarious.. I bet 'She' is within all of us (us --> the crazy bloggers)

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  20. wow that was lovely...wen r u authoring for me? pls...

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  21. >>Hary
    Sari sari vidu vidu! Public public..

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  22. >>West Wind
    Hey She is you, She is me
    :D
    Correct We are crazy :P

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  23. >>Sid
    Hehehe Thanks sid :P
    For you?? Yeah sure..

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  24. >>Karthikeyan
    Unakku vera polappe illaya x-(

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  25. >>Karthikeyan
    Grrr... romba verupethara x-(

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  26. !!!kaameedi post!!! from u!!!!! nee joke adikarapo kooda paaren enaku seriousa solra mathiriye iruku :D like partibhan kanavu vivek :D

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  27. I actually lol-ed at that.
    Wonderfully funny 55-fiction this time Shruti! :)

    P.S:I AM BACK.And I would be stalking you regularly now! :D

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  28. hahahahaha :)) My god!! Tooooooooo good :D

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  29. >>Gils
    LOL gilsu!
    Birthday boykku kozhuppu jaasthi :P
    Sari kombukku yenna color paint adichennu sollave illa :D

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  30. >>Sammy
    Hey sammy is officially back! That's a news re :)
    U really LOL'd yeh? :P

    Thanks for stalking me and I will do the same :D

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  31. LOL!! sounds like what I would have said! :) Good 1

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  32. >>MM
    Not you alone shruti... We all are in the same gang :D

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  33. haha. that was funny, I am sure I will say this to god :P :P

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  34. Hehe! gr8 55-er

    You have a gift I say... Never take your hands of those keyboard! Even during headaches and "Pot" you write such good stuff!

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  35. new template looks cool, visiting after some time...
    nice work shruti..enjoyed reading your post.!

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  36. Swift thoughts...
    Wonderfully written...

    I too have tried it for the first time but I still dunno whether it can be considered as a 55 er or not...check out if u have time

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  37. Hey Shruti, I loved this one!! It couldn't have been any better than this. Wow!! kudos, thumbs up from my side girl!!
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    shilpa

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  38. Wowwwwwwww.......
    sooooooooperu........
    Shruti iz back to Queendom ... :)
    Sorry.....i cant use regular adjectives for this post.....
    A.W.E.S.P.L.E.N.D.I.D
    :) :) :)

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  39. awesum one yaar.......really too gud.... :D

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  40. >>AK
    Hey thanks girlie, we all will tell this surely to God! :P

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  41. >>Saurabh
    Hey thanks buddy!

    u are very firm regarding that POT matter :) I have a gift? Is it? LOL ;)
    Thanks re :)

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  42. >>Gyanban
    Welcome back after a long time :)
    Thank u and wish u a happy new year!

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  43. >>Geetha
    Hey thanks a bunch! I will visit yours for sure :)

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  44. >>Shilpz
    Hey thanks girl :)
    U and sid wanted 2 me try this genre na, thatsy wrote :)

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  45. >>Mahi
    LOL ;)
    Thank u! Back to queendom eh ;) :P

    Thanks for this good comment :)

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  46. Hey shruthi... here is my first attempt on a F55...
    Click here
    do let me know how it is...

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  47. oh! It's wonderful shruti, I literally laughed after reading.I am glad you tried this genre. I really loved this one. :) \m/
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    shilpa

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  48. >>Tavish
    Checked and commented too :)
    It was good :)

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  49. thanks for the feedback... i replied to ur comments too! :)

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  50. blogging is an addiction and poor god didn't know that... sob sob...

    nice one Shruti... :)

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  51. oh
    good god
    made me laugh, and felt proud, that i m also a blogger

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  52. >>Kanagu
    Well said :D
    Especially its like that for me :D

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  53. >>Chetan
    :D
    Yeah, proud to be bloggers :)

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  54. ROTFL!

    The kid could have better priorities ;-)

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  55. I like this genre Shruti!!

    I just loved the short smile that came from ur writing!!

    U simply rock with every genre u write!!

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