Hiya buddies! Well, as the post name indicates, here comes my 26th 55 Fiction! So everyone knows what a 55Fiction is right?! So read the 55Fiction and let me know what you feel about it!
THE FINAL JOURNEY
Akash was enjoying his drive on a dark deserted highway. He was terrified and caused him massive heart attack, when he glanced in the rear view mirror. To his horror the vehicle following him had no driver!!
His last breath escaped when the driver of the right hand driven car overtook him.
With Love,
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I smile too! :-)
ReplyDeletePhew!! that was close:) enna oru horror.. nice..
ReplyDelete>>Lostworld
ReplyDeleteEven am smiling :D :) :P ;)
>>Raji
ReplyDeleteHey thanks girlie.. Paavam he died :(
This one was really nice!! See that even made me to post a comment. :P
ReplyDeleteTell me, how do you get this idea? :p anyways, it was very good. But the poor fella died!! :(
shilpa
haahah :D itha nee 110 word fictiona potrukalam..semma twist..hey unaku surutti nu per vachathu saria iruku :D endingla surutidra :D
ReplyDeletelol. :P
ReplyDeleteyou always cook up a curry dont you?
Thigil Kadhai 55er. Good twist.
ReplyDeleteWell, this can happen only in Europe. :-)
>>Shilpz
ReplyDeleteSo all the posts which you didn't comment was not upto the mark na?
Thank you..
Ideas? I saw an Italian Promo today in FB somewhere.. So wrote :)
>>Gils
ReplyDeleteHey Gilmananda, pera kola panrethuke unakku IPC section 32 la thooku thandanai kudukka mudivu panirkken :P
Twist-surutti...avvvv... Rammmm solrapla, ur creativity is reachin heights!!
Nandri :D
>>Raj
ReplyDeleteDo I?? :P
tsk tsk you still dont know? :p
ReplyDeleteit nearly always gets a lump in my throat.
whhhhat a twist ..!!!
ReplyDeleteYou inspired me to try my hand at 55fiction..:)
>>Rammmm
ReplyDeleteI saw an advertisement of FIAT, whose makers are Italian.. So thought about writing this F55 :)
Konjam Dhigil, konjam facts, konjam twist=this F55
>>Raj
ReplyDelete:P :D
Lump in your throat? Interesting :D
>>Vanessa
ReplyDeleteWelcome to H&M..
Thank you and after trying your hand in 55F, do let me know..
Keep visiting!
YOU BETTER FIND MY BLOG NOW. :P
ReplyDelete>>Raj
ReplyDeleteSearching for a long time :P Will find soon :D
Hey, its not like that. I normally like all your posts. But this idea was quite unique. :)
ReplyDelete>>Shilpz
ReplyDeleteI know very well girlie.. I am happy to see your comment in my blog :)
i think u should have written a short story on this...it would have been a nice horror story!
ReplyDeleteVery good if not a wee bit spooky.
ReplyDeleteyou have quite4e a talent for these stories. well done.
Yvonne,
>>Neha
ReplyDeleteIs it?! I am not so good in writing horror stories!
Thanks Neha :)
>>Yvonne
ReplyDeleteThank you so much lady :)
jeez.. so he died in just 55 words... good one.
ReplyDeletehaha!! loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha. that was funny
ReplyDelete>>Harini
ReplyDeleteI killed him in 55words :P
>>MM
ReplyDeleteThank u girlie :)
>>AK
ReplyDelete:)
Thank u sweety!
Oh yes you killed him in 55 words flat as you said. A neat execution.
ReplyDeleteouch... that hurts to the driver...:D
ReplyDeletenice going...;)
>>Shas
ReplyDeleteThank u shas!! :)
>>Sid
ReplyDeleteAre you that Ghost Driver?!
hey shruths awesome di. It is very rare i congratulate like this. This one really deserves it, well thought and witty. I would certainly rate it one of the best 55 F of yours if not the best
ReplyDeleteAaila mien to free mien hi mar gaya..
ReplyDeletehe must thought when his soul escaped body trap. lollzzzzzz
Keep Smiling.
hey shruti...first time here...impressed! :-)
ReplyDeletesome imagination...*pat on d back* :-)
Hey enaku puriyala pa :(
ReplyDeleteMay be am not reading it right :(
anyways na busya ???????/
Appo neenga ?????...Yenoda blog pakkam neenga vandu romboooooooooooo naal achi pa ....
Hey Shruti,
ReplyDeleteForgive me for being overtly critical, but I sincerely think this story needs a rewrite. Its an amazing concept but put together quite poorly (according to your standards). Hope you don't mind the cynical me barging in.
Paritosh
Nice one... what happened to the newly liberated soul... ???
ReplyDeletehmm..pretty cool one..
ReplyDeleteI wrote em too...
kinda weird.though
ohh god girl you almost gave me an attack :P... very well written :)
ReplyDeleteEnaku suthama puriyala... :(
ReplyDelete>>Venky
ReplyDeleteHey thanks a lot buddy! But I find something still is missing from here!!
>>Makk
ReplyDeleteWelcome here after a long time :)
LOL :P
>>Sandeep
ReplyDeleteWelcome to H&M
Thank u! And am really glad that u are impressed!
>>Satz
ReplyDeletepurilaya?!
Hey that guy is driving the car.. sudden ah rearview mirror la patha oru car comin without a driver! He thinks its a ghost.. But when the car overtakes him, he sees the driver in right side.. :)
Car have 2 types na? left hand drive and right hand drive! Thats what i used here!
all incidents of horror are like that only ... if we dont get whats going on ... it becomes paranormal
ReplyDeletethough its quite impossible to see right hand n left hand cars both on the same road
>>Paritosh
ReplyDeleteThank u so much for criticizing this post! I liked your frank comment!! Even I felt some improvement is needed. But I dunno how to do it! That's why published as such. Infact I took a whole 3 hours to write this! The toughest of all my 55Fictions! U aren't cynical re, just giving me the inputs.. Please feel free to correct me..
U think of any possibilities?!
>>Roshmi
ReplyDeleteThank u! Newly liberated soul knocked the doors of heaven :P
>>Sorcerer
ReplyDeleteWelcome to H&M
Thank u! I read urs too :D
>>Rajlakshmi
ReplyDeleteTake meds girlie :P
Thank u!
>>Kanagu
ReplyDeleteAgain me repeating :)
Hey that guy is driving the car.. sudden ah rearview mirror la patha oru car comin without a driver! He thinks its a ghost.. But when the car overtakes him, he sees the driver in right side.. :)
Car have 2 types na? left hand drive and right hand drive! Thats what i used here!
Understood now?!
>>Naveen
ReplyDeleteRight and left side cars can be seen in Europe :)
after that, the director said 'cut. cut'. both the actors from the car came alive.
ReplyDeletesee how I finished it very positive.
you need to see lots of Vijay movie to think of all those unbelievable twists.
>>Bharathi
ReplyDeleteLOL :P
Vijay movie ah? Avvv... yen idha kolaveri?! Hunter patha effecto?!
Nah. I dont see his movies (atleast in theaters). I dont wanna be hunted.
ReplyDeleteBut it seems its not that bad.
>>Bharathi
ReplyDeleteU don wanna be hunted!? LOL!!
Ahhh?! Is it?! My friends asked me to give the money to a charity than watchin hunter :P
Ohh...Very well written..I was laughing as well as feeling bad for the poor guy...
ReplyDeletelolzz! Kahani mein twist! And a really unexpected one!
ReplyDeleteKeep writing! Loved reading this post.
>>Dil
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!! Mixed emotions eh?! Even I felt such mixed thingie while reading my fellow bloggers comments! :P
>>Mainak
ReplyDeleteHi :)
Welcome to H&M
Thank u and keep coming in :)
Cool & funny fiction it is!!
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