Hi friends! This is my 16th 55Fiction. This is purely a fiction and doesn't imply on any particular individual.
Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
PASSIONATE KISS
Late,chilly weekend nights of kissing are always such a romantic idea.
Mmmm.....damn, he was good. The pressure was perfect. He teased her naughtily. Rough drags accompanied with passionate kisses aroused her.
The warmth drawing her in closer, she wanted it to go on forever....
The director said “Cut! The shot came well!"
So? How is this 55Fiction? Please do comment on this 55 fiction attempt!
With Love,
Image Courtesy : Google Images
he..he..lol.. A very good 55 Shruthi...good one..
ReplyDeleteNice Shruti! The end is good and came as a surprise ;)
ReplyDeletePretty darn GOOD :) This is great.keep more coming
ReplyDelete@Shankz
ReplyDeleteHey yes!! :P
Thanks!!
:D
@Kasabian Girl
ReplyDeleteHey welcome back after a long time!!
:P
Thanks girlie!
@Miss Nobody
ReplyDeleteHey thanks a ton sweety!!
Loved it another winner.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
@Yvonne
ReplyDeleteA Winner? Wow!!
Thanks
hey weightu..super ah irundhudu!!! nice one :)
ReplyDeletehe he I sometimes dream to be the male counterpart...
ReplyDeletegood one...
good one !!
ReplyDeleteOooh what a hot story! ;)
ReplyDeleteNiiice. You're becoming the queen of 55 word stories! Getting better with each 'Take' !!
Late,chilly weekend nights of kissing are always such a romantic idea.
ReplyDeleteWell, well, well... What should I say? ;)
No 1: i am surprised and happy that you posted this in broad daylight rather demeaning day light to be precise.
ReplyDeleteNo2 : you are getting really better and at this 55 fiction. Finally you are showing the real deal.
This is very nice one ...shruti.. :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it.. :)
Cheers!!
wow everytime u write 55s ... m jus loving them ..... so elegant and crisp writing ... nice one though ... very funny and nie end ...
ReplyDeleteunexpected ...
Hehe :D
ReplyDeleteSurprise element in director :D
Good one :)
ROFL :D U do manage to end it so well every time girl! Gr8 gng :)
ReplyDeletelol damn good :)
ReplyDeleteenjoyed it :P
Goodie! What a description!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed thoroughly :)
haha, this surprise was different from all the other surprises that I read on other posts...dame cool...
ReplyDeletePS: see I had told u na, ur post Tardy Realization is indeed a great one...it got picked up for the spicy saturday post too...congo :)
ena oru villathanam!!he he... neeyum unoda thoughts!! nala room pottu yosipingalo!! or is it brain storming..
ReplyDeleteHahaha...Thats pretty cool one... a different one indeed.. Keep blogging :)
ReplyDelete@Benny
ReplyDeleteHey thala, thanks da :)
@RSV
ReplyDeleteLol :P
Thanks :)
@Naveen
ReplyDeleteThanks!
@Lostworld
ReplyDeleteHey Really it is a hot story girl ;)
'Take'
That's a nice punch! Good!
Thanks girlie!
lolz....
ReplyDeletegood 55-fiction Shruthi :)
enjoyed it :)
Huh!!Dunno when am gonna be the first person to comment on ur post..
Such is the demand for ur posts these days ;)
TOUCHWOOD :D
keep blogging
cheers!!!
@Paritosh!
ReplyDelete""What should I say? ;)""
Ahhhh!! Tell me, whatever u think! :P
@Venkz
ReplyDeleteNo.1: Broad day-light! It would have been better if i posted this in night :P
No.2:That's a real compliment! Thanks da!
@Amit
ReplyDeleteHey thanks buddy
@Simba
ReplyDeleteHeheheh!! Thanks buddy!!
Thanks for those appreciation!
@Ekam
ReplyDeleteHey thanks girlie!
i thought of something else at the end
ReplyDeletegood one, and different one
keep going!
@Swaram
ReplyDelete""U do manage to end it so well every time girl""
Ahhh!! That's a sweet comment!
Thanks a ton!
@Riya
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my space!
Thanks!
@Guria
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed!? Thanks!
Now this was a LOL one!!!
ReplyDelete:D
shilpa
@Neha
ReplyDeleteReally!!???Wow!! Diferent from everything?!
Thanks girl!
P.S:Yes lawyer's view never go wrong!
@Hary
ReplyDeleteHey...yen pa ipdi pesare!!
Room podala! Thaniya ukkandhu yosichu paru! Indha maadhri thathuvum naraya varum :P
@Ram
ReplyDeleteThanks da!
@Sathish
ReplyDeleteyen blog la comment pana ivlo potiya!!
Pull arikudhu!
Thanks for ur comments buddy!
@Chetan
ReplyDeleteThanks for your best wishes buddy!
@Shilpa
ReplyDelete:P :D :P :D
Thanks :)
hahaha...am still in all laugh .. :) ..:)
ReplyDelete@Prams!
ReplyDeletehehehehe :)
Laugh a lot!
another masterpiece from the master herself. :P
ReplyDelete@Scarlet diaries
ReplyDeleteAhhH!!! Thanks a ton re!! :)
tsk tsk. then lemme c u on my blog once. :P
ReplyDeleteps: ever tried dark?
u shud. its easy.
That was nice.The surprise element was perfect.Couldn't have guessed. :)
ReplyDelete@Scarlet diaries
ReplyDeleteYes! Will visit for sure :)
Dark?? That word scares the hell outta me!!
@Sammy
ReplyDeleteHey thanks girlie!!
Happy that i can satisfy you!
Good one Shruti.
ReplyDeleteNice work.
Good one girlie.. from murder and tragedy to kissing eh? ;) nice progression.. hehe.. just kidding.. I cudnt guess the ending.. full suspense..
ReplyDeleteLove your blog ..... there is an award waiting for u at my blog :)
ReplyDeleteLOL!!!!
ReplyDeletevery nice one... :)
ama... directorku yen indha kola veri.. ?? ;)
ReplyDeletePerfect Shruti. Nice one!:-)
ReplyDeleteNo comment on the post, it's any way good, everyone has said so, one more person echoing the same doesn't make any diff :)
ReplyDeleteBTW, are u trying ur hands on acting too nowadays :D, nehi just a wild thought randomly came. woh heroine ap to nehi the na? kyuke itna achha fiction imagine karna muskil hain without reality!! ho ho he he ha ha
Shruti,it is a very nice post.I am still trying to get the feel of 55.Vipul has suggested I try 55.????
ReplyDeletehellooo...please check my latest 55 fiction, another one and purely fictitious, no reality :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for welcoming me :)
ReplyDeleteI have tried to write 55 Fiction too..i will be glad if u check it out n tell me tht is it good or not.. m waiting :)
he he...:)...too good dear:)..nice cut:)...
ReplyDelete@IP
ReplyDeleteThanks!
@Avada
ReplyDelete""from murder and tragedy to kissing eh""
Hey actually, i came in reverse order i guess!!
First it shud have been kissing-->Love & Lust, then when both betrays it shud be tragedy. Then, without tolerating this it shud have been a murder :P :P
@Naveen
ReplyDeleteHey thanks a ton! Added your award too :)
Thanks!
@Kanagu
ReplyDeleteThanks girlie!
@Kanagu
ReplyDeleteAnga than director twist vechanga!! :P
@Pra
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton girlie!
@Mustaf
ReplyDeleteArey, thanks for those kind words! I dint try acting yaar!! :O :O
You always think the other way!
@Chowla Ji
ReplyDeleteJi,thanks a ton!! Arey try it and lets all witness a new dawn! Hope your 55Fictions will be awesoem!
@Mustaf
ReplyDeleteSaw And commented
@Riya
ReplyDeleteHi girlie!!
Will check ouT!!
@Yellow tulip
ReplyDeleteThanks girlie!!
nice realy .... goood
ReplyDeletenice expressions hahahhahahhaha
i guessed tat last line before completing ,,,,,
ur 55 fiction s romantic ...
hahhaha
but dont keep end like this ,,,,
u rock da...shruts
Regards,
Prasee
@Prasee
ReplyDeleteU expected the ending? :O
Anyways thanks!
mokka poteengalae.. not only the director cut it.. u too cut it short.. loved it..
ReplyDeleteVishnu
ReplyDelete55fiction na apdi dan!! Pinna full movie, flowers dashing lam ah kamipanga :P
Thanks!
Even I wished it would go on forever ;)
ReplyDeleteNice creativity haan ;)
@Adi
ReplyDeleteHaan?! Whats this? Let me tell the director. He may organize some special shows for you!
wonder if the girl wanted a re-take.. but the second take wouldnt have the same effect as before, ud it? wats so exciting abt romance/sex is not the actual physical interaction but the lack of it.. knowing it is right in front of you and u'd eventually get it but as for this precise moment t is fresh, pristine and of course unavilable.. :)
ReplyDeleteur post reminded me of a poem by John keats - 'ode on a greecian urn'.. the bold lover and his maiden who'll remain one forever..
wonder wats bigger.. the prescence of beauty or the ability of mankind to admire it..
You always think the other way! areeee...what does it mean? :d achhi hain ya bura? thik hain...abhi se sirf sidha sochunga..will the following comments be OK?
ReplyDelete"Awesome...very good yar..excellent, i loved the way u penned it down"...i think this comment is applicable to any and every post..chalega na :P?
@Abdul
ReplyDeleteHi yaar!!
Second take ?? Ummmm... No chance!
Even i read 'ode on a greacian urn
"" Bold Lover, never, never canst thou kiss,
Though winning near the goal -yet, do not grieve;""
A great comment!!
@Mustaf
ReplyDeleteWoh neither achi hai nor buri! Did i mean it that way? No!!!!!
Actually i read your other comment, ur thought,that i did not post your comment! I said "You always think the other way" for that!
arree...didn't you see my smiley signs kya in my prev comment..bhar bhar ke dalethe ta ke u dont take the comment srsly :) (putting one more here :D)
ReplyDelete@Mustaf
ReplyDeleteArey! Maaf karo na mustaf! Ek aur request! Aap apne comments english mein type karo. Mujhe hindi nahi maalum hai!
nice one. you becoming better and better
ReplyDelete@Bharathi
ReplyDeleteWelcome back after a log time!!
Thank you so much yaar!!
splendid and sublime....realistic and quite igniting. :)
ReplyDelete@Mahesh
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog yaar!!
Thank you for those nice words!!
hummm
ReplyDeleteclimax... you could have written better..i know
anyway ....check out my page..some thing for you
@Makk
ReplyDeletewill try to write better next time!!
Thanks! Also will check out now!!
"Late,chilly weekend nights of kissing are always such a romantic idea. " - Experience pesutha shruti???
ReplyDeleteWarm begining... hot proceedings... and atlast a thumping suspense... overall good writing DUDETTE...
Methu konjam konjama mooda engayo kondu poga vachitu, mandayila nachinu oru kottu vacha mari irunthichu... :-D :-D
@Bala
ReplyDeleteExperience ah?yen bala indha kola veri yen mela?? DUDETTE?? :P
understood thereason :)
LAST POINT: LOL! :P
@Shruti...
ReplyDeleteKolai veri ellam illa... athavathu apadi experience iruntha, unga kitta sishyana senthukalamenu than... :-P
Aaana innum answer sollave illaye... experience nu eduthukkava????
@Bala
ReplyDeletehey pichu pichu!!
yenadhidhu?
my policy is- BEING SINGLE IS FUN
Indha exp lam illa pa..
@Shruti...
ReplyDeleteha ha... :-)
y tension??? relax...
less tension, more work ma...
"BEING SINGLE IS FUN" - ithu konjam too mucha theriyala... ella ponungalum kazhuthula thaali nu onnu erura varaikum adichu vidura dialogue la onnu ithu than shruti madam...
yen innum un requirements fullfill panra qualitiesoda aalu kidaikalaya???
@Bala
ReplyDeleteI won't get tensed that easily bala..
All girls are not same. I am not tat sort which you have mentioned here.
Aalu? Yen requirements romba kami bala. Adhukke aalu illa.. Innum perusa plan potta, avlo dan!!
Balakku naraya GF's eh? or married?
ha ha ha... Paakalam... how different u r from other girls nu....
ReplyDeleteOru ponnuku requirements romba kammiya... adhisayam aanal unmaya????
Nee vera... GFs kidayathu... marriedum kidayathu... Still a enjoying bashing bachelor!!! :-D
@Bala
ReplyDeleteDefinitely different bala!!
Adisayam aanal unmai...idhu kadhai alla nijam :P
Bashing bachelor eh? hehehe :P :D