Sunday, September 20, 2009

55 Fiction - #12


Here is my next 55 Fiction.

Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.

THE VITAL DECISION

Saif dumped her. She told herself, "He is loving someone else. How dare he do that?". Tears kissed her cheeks and her taste buds smacked it. She took Venom to her lips. Her mind and heart conflicted each other. She heeded her mind, wiped those tears and uttered, "I will live to see him regret"


Hope you liked this one.. I was completely out of my mood while penning this down. So I don't know whether I could live upto all your expectations. If I don't, am sorry!

Please do comment on this 55 fiction attempt!

With Love,






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93 comments:

  1. Indian PunditSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:03 AM

    "I will live to see him regret"

    Great story Shruti.....awesome.

    Cheers and wanna chat?

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  2. Sathish Chandrasekaran (சதீஷ் சந்திரசேகரன்)September 20, 2009 at 2:21 AM

    Hey kewl work :)
    rombo nalla irundhuchi :)

    "I will live to see him regret"
    sema punch po ;)

    btw Unnaipol Oruvan will be put up soon :)


    keep blogging :)
    cheers!!!

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  3. Vipul GroverSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:57 AM

    Thts a nice one, better thn sum previous ones!! U shud more oftn b out of ur mood i blive :p

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  4. SoinSeptember 20, 2009 at 3:49 AM

    the oldest love story on earth...loves someone else..

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2009 at 3:57 AM

    finally I got to read it!!
    that was definitely a kind of whine....
    hatred is something that should avoided though... a nice reflection of what usually happens with us...

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  6. pRiYaN...!September 20, 2009 at 6:28 AM

    wow !!! you are tuned well to 55 fiction...cheers !!


    -bluffmaster

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  7. MadmanSeptember 20, 2009 at 6:56 AM

    Not bad for a story written in a bad mood. Was that 55 fiction or 55 Faction :). Yet another post in the midnight moon huh?

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  8. kakaSeptember 20, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    haha....well here the guy dumped the girl...something for a change...:)....offlate watever movies i have been watching it is the girl who always says "u have been dumped"....:P....good one...:)

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  9. HaRy!!September 20, 2009 at 9:09 AM

    super pa.... a real eye opener for some one who is crestfallen!! need to take it from the mind rather than heart.!! yapa at least ithu sogam ilama irunthuchi... just jokin..good one!

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  10. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:19 AM

    @IP
    Thanks re :)
    I had hit the sack before you sent this!

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  11. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:21 AM

    @Satish
    Kewl one eh?!
    Heheh :P
    Thanks :)

    Waiting for unnai pol oruvan's review!!
    :)

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  12. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:22 AM

    @Vipul
    Ahhh!!
    Welcome to my blog after a long time :P
    ""better thn sum previous ones""
    That is the most unexpected comment yaar!!

    ""U shud more oftn b out of ur mood i blive""
    :P Lol

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  13. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:22 AM

    @RSV
    Hey checked out and thanks for the 2 awards!!

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  14. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:23 AM

    @Priyan
    ""you are tuned well to 55 fiction""
    Mebbe! But not while writing this!

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  15. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:23 AM

    @Soin
    Oldest love story eh?!

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  16. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:24 AM

    @Venks
    ""Not bad for a story written in a bad mood""
    Thanks for this honest comment re!!

    Yes, midnight la post panadhu dan :P!

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  17. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    @RSV
    ""hatred is something that should avoided though""
    Yes, but not with a guy who dumped her and loves someone else!

    Thanks :)

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  18. GuriaSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    "completely out of mood" and the result is... this?

    Girl, you have scored an Over-boundary yet again!! :)

    No wonder, I wait when Shruti is going to write her next 555 fiction!

    Way to go!

    Love. ^_^

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  19. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:27 AM

    @Kaka
    Welcome back after a long time!
    Girl telling those lines?! Not the sect of girls i have witnessed!

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  20. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:27 AM

    @Hary
    ""need to take it from the mind rather than heart""
    That was the essence of the story!
    Unakku sogam pdikadha!!

    :)
    Thanks!

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  21. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:30 AM

    @Guria
    ""completely out of mood, and the result is... this?""
    :P

    ""you have scored an Over-boundary yet again""
    Thanks a ton!

    ""next 555 fiction""
    Migh!!?! Another short story eh?!

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  22. NehaSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:35 AM

    kya baat hai...pretty neat one shru..read the fiction story i had posted earlier ths month - the ultimate painting..hope u like tht..

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  23. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:51 AM

    @Neha
    Thanks!!

    Ya. I have read that and it was damn good!

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  24. Anu...:)September 20, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    "I will live to see him regret"
    strong statement:)
    Nice one!:)

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  25. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 10:36 AM

    @Anu!

    Thanks sissie!

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  26. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 20, 2009 at 10:43 AM

    Hey...well done ..:)

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  27. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 10:45 AM

    @Pramoda
    Thank you!

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  28. Amit Kumar SinghSeptember 20, 2009 at 11:01 AM

    gr8 one.. :)
    I loved this one very much.... :)
    One needs a strong purpose to continue one's life...
    This was exactly the girl found....

    Cheers!!

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  29. BennySeptember 20, 2009 at 11:43 AM

    Shruthi..meaningful n thoughtful 55 fiction..Never kenw 55 fiction stories can be so powerful.Honest feelings of a broken heart!Job,well done! And I really wonder if u were in a a bad mood penning down this! If so,u write alwz when u r in a bad mood..jus kidding :)

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  30. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:10 PM

    @Amit
    ""I loved this one very much""
    Really ah?!
    wow!!

    Thanks amit!
    Confessions of a broken heart!

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  31. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:12 PM

    @Benny
    Haaa!! Now you understood 55Fiction can be powerful eh?!

    ""I really wonder if u were in a a bad mood penning down this! If so,u write alwz when u r in a bad mood""
    Many telling the same :(
    Seems always i must be in a bad mood!

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  32. Siddhesh KabeSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    Oh man...superb...i was about 2 shout y do all these end in tragedy...but then the ending brought me back 2 senses...:D

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  33. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:18 PM

    @Sid
    Thank god! You dint shout! I wanted to stress the fact- Confessions of a broken heart!
    Thanks :)

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  34. EkamSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:29 PM

    Shruti that was great! Yaar mere dimag mein kyun nai aati yeh stories :(

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  35. EkamSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:30 PM

    Your last story was awesome. I just loved it:)

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  36. RAMSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:32 PM

    wow. that is really a cool one. a pinch of self confidence and hope in her words. neat one shruthi :)

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  37. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:43 PM

    @Ekam
    Thumahri dimag mein yeh stories kyun nahi aati hai?
    Aaram se think karo yaar! You will get better than everything! If not, be in a bad mood and you can do it with ease!

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  38. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:43 PM

    @ekam
    Last story was awesome eh?!
    Thanks girlie!

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  39. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 12:44 PM

    @Ram
    Thanks da!

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  40. BK Chowla,September 20, 2009 at 12:59 PM

    You are doing well on 55. Keep it up.

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  41. pawanSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:24 PM

    Good one!
    I can give a 7!
    But you know you can be far better!
    Btw, I am coming back on to my blog today!
    Cya there!
    Cheers!

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  42. The AspirantSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:31 PM

    no matter in wad mood u r, u really r gr8 in writing dis thing called "55 fiction"
    dis is d best one i hv read.......

    cheers

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  43. Saad ShaikhSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:32 PM

    I will live to see him regret

    wow.. awesome line conveying the right attitude.. :)

    your 55s are really good.. ;)

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  44. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:36 PM

    @BK Chowla
    Thank you ji!!

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  45. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:38 PM

    @Pawan
    7???
    wow!!
    ""But you know you can be far better""
    I was out of my mood, so i know i cant give my best :)

    Will see you there ya ;)

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  46. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:39 PM

    @The Aspirant
    hehheh :P
    Great eh?!
    Thanks a ton!

    ""dis is d best one i hv read.""
    Am really honored!!

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  47. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 1:43 PM

    @Saad
    My 55's are gud eh?!
    Thank you :)

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  48. SapphireSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:06 PM

    nice :) :) A cliched plot - guy loves someone else :P - yet told nicely :D

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  49. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:13 PM

    @Sapphire
    Cliched story eh?!
    Fine, next time will giv u a surprise!

    Thank you!

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  50. Chetan MaheshwariSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:27 PM

    hey
    it might be not like your previous posts, but you have written in another beautiful style-
    tears kissed her cheeks, and taste buds smacked it.
    i like the two lines

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  51. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:36 PM

    @Chetan!
    Heeheh another beautiful styl?
    Wow!!

    ""tears kissed her cheeks, and taste buds smacked it""
    I never wrote these kinda lines in my posts! :P
    Just tried them!

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  52. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:43 PM

    Ah..I love the I'll live to see him regret part ;)

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  53. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 2:46 PM

    @Kasabian girl
    hehehe :P
    I too like it! :P

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  54. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2009 at 3:24 PM

    Nice attempt.
    You are really good at writing 55Fiction.
    Keep it up...
    :)

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  55. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 3:33 PM

    @Vijay
    Thanks alot buddy!

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  56. Yellow TulipSeptember 20, 2009 at 3:46 PM

    "I will live to see him regret"
    ...wow...tat was bold and really good one dear..:)...

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  57. Sugandha GuptaSeptember 20, 2009 at 4:28 PM

    this one was out of mood ???
    man no wonder they call u 55 fiction queen :)
    nice :)

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  58. RajSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:06 PM

    makes u crack a smile and say way 2 go girl. :P

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  59. Raji USeptember 20, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    Hey bud, you are something super. I loved it.. mutual feelings I guess!!

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  60. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:36 PM

    @yellow tulip
    he shattered her dream hence this decision!

    Thank you!

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  61. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:37 PM

    @Suga
    welcome back to my blog!!
    ""no wonder they call u 55 fiction queen""
    Ahhh!! Too much of praise for me yaar!

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  62. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    @Scarlet diaries
    hey that was a cute comment!
    Thanks!

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  63. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 9:39 PM

    @Raji
    am i something super?!
    Nothing like that, just one fellow blogger like you!

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  64. RHYTHM AND RHYMESeptember 20, 2009 at 10:41 PM

    Great Story, clever how you do it.

    Yvonne.

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  65. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 10:57 PM

    @Yvonne
    Thanks!

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  66. Priyanka AgrawallaSeptember 20, 2009 at 11:04 PM

    wow!! this one was too good Sruthi... "I will live to see him regret". the attitude in these words.. Liked it :)
    Happy writing!

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  67. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 11:06 PM

    @Priyanka
    Hi :)
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thanks for liking it on the first go!

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  68. BharathiSeptember 20, 2009 at 11:15 PM

    Good one. I have a feeling that you more often write tragedy.

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  69. ShrutiSeptember 20, 2009 at 11:37 PM

    @Bharathi
    Is this a tragedy?!
    Am nt able to differentiate! I pen down whatever comes to my mind!

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  70. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2009 at 1:35 AM

    "I will live to see him regret" - this was too good girl... another awesome fiction 55 from the queen :)

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  71. ShrutiSeptember 21, 2009 at 1:38 AM

    @Avada
    From the queen!?
    :O
    Am jus 12 55 fiction's old! Too young to be crowned as a queen!

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  72. PrashansaSeptember 21, 2009 at 3:07 AM

    Nice 55 fiction as usual Shruti! Two awards are waiting for you! collect them a.s.a.p.

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  73. ShrutiSeptember 21, 2009 at 9:34 AM

    @Pra
    Thanks pra!
    I received those awards! thanks a ton!

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  74. SwaramSeptember 21, 2009 at 10:11 PM

    I will live to see him regret - What a punch!

    hey u r dng really gr8 @ the 55ers! Want more :)

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  75. ShrutiSeptember 21, 2009 at 10:14 PM

    @Swaram
    ""hey u r dng really gr8 @ the 55ers! Want more""
    Hehehe
    wish granted!

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  76. Sh@sSeptember 21, 2009 at 10:35 PM

    All those who have had a heartbreak should read this 55 of yours.

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  77. ShrutiSeptember 21, 2009 at 10:45 PM

    @Shas
    That's a real compliment!

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  78. Aditya KasavarajuSeptember 22, 2009 at 12:50 AM

    //"I will live to see him regret"//

    Super finish!

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  79. ShrutiSeptember 22, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    @Aditya!!
    Thank you! :)

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  80. VinzSeptember 22, 2009 at 12:02 PM

    Gud one...
    Just liked the positivity..!!
    cheers..!!

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  81. lostworldSeptember 22, 2009 at 3:22 PM

    :) She should be glad instead that she didn't get stuck with such a loser.. !!

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  82. ShrutiSeptember 22, 2009 at 3:50 PM

    @Vinz
    Thank you!! Positive attitude wins the situation!

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  83. ShrutiSeptember 22, 2009 at 3:51 PM

    @Lostworld
    Yes, she can be, but the pain lasts forever!

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  84. PradsSeptember 22, 2009 at 4:50 PM

    Hey super...
    Great presence of mind for saif's ex Gf...

    Saif u will surely regret man...

    Great feel to get


    Regards,
    Prasee

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  85. ShrutiSeptember 22, 2009 at 4:56 PM

    @Prasee
    Thanks buddy!

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  86. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2009 at 9:26 PM

    Thats a good ending!:)

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  87. ShrutiSeptember 23, 2009 at 9:30 PM

    @Srivatsan
    Hey, welcome to my blog!!
    Thanks :)

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  88. Musings of a lonely travelerSeptember 25, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    Revenge for regret, huh?? liked this 55 fiction Shruti :)

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  89. ShrutiSeptember 25, 2009 at 11:51 AM

    @Musings
    yeah!
    Thanks :)

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  90. AnonymousNovember 11, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    For me it didnt seem to be a fiction.. but a short post with a strong theme within...

    "I will live to see him regret" - Excellent!!! Thats where u stand tall Shruti!!!

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  91. ShrutiNovember 11, 2009 at 2:03 PM

    @Bala
    Thank you
    Thank you
    and
    Many thanks to you!!

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  92. AnonymousNovember 11, 2009 at 2:10 PM

    You are always welcome!!! :-)

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  93. ShrutiNovember 11, 2009 at 6:09 PM

    @Bala
    :-)

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