Well friends, am here again with another 55 Fiction. This is a new genre I tried writing up! Even I don't know how is that!
If you feel its good, then am happy!
If you feel I must improve, tell me I will listen!
If you feel am not upto the expectation, then Am sorry!
Those who are new to this concept, understand what is 55Fiction!? 55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
Sylvia was flying on cloud nine. It has been three months since Akshay accepted her proposal. She took her mobile to wish him.
Before she dialed his number, mobile started vibrating, "AKSHAY Calling"
"Hi Darling"
"Hey sweety, I want to tell you something."
"Tell Akshay, Am waiting to hear those three words."
"Am getting married"
Recently I read some lines from an unknown author, may be I got inspired with that and wrote this 55Fiction! Am writing that here for you!
It takes only a minute to get
a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone,
and a day to love someone.
But it takes a lifetime
to forget someone.
How is it? Worth a Read?! What you feel?
P.S : This is my 25th post!
With Love,
Image Courtesy : GOOGLE IMAGES
Huray!! First one to comment?!!
ReplyDeleteI like the short poem(new genre you call it!) as well as the 55 fiction.The last poem of unknown auther is brilient!
Just check out my new post. You inspired me to write it.Thank you!!
Great one.....i dont expect anything less from THE QUEEN of 55 word fiction.
ReplyDeleteP.S: Once again u proved that u are stupid. I read and comment on each of ur post. How can i forget u?
@pra
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit!actually i tried writing up a disclaimer sort of thing! I din't call the so called poem as new genre!
It was the 55fiction that is a new genre!!
Thanks pra!
@IP
ReplyDeleteThanks and am not the queen!
Still an amateur!
P.S: Again its your perception that am stupid! No more comments!
What can I say about the person who egged me on to write the 55-Fs in the first place!!
ReplyDeleteBut even better was how you portray the feel of your every post! Love it!
Keep 'em coming! :)
Love.
@sreya
ReplyDeleteam just the initiator of your talents!
Glad that you like it!
Yes! I will write many more!
I liked the last 55 fiction more than other the first one was also good. And shruthi please temme how to add smileys i wanna add in my blog too. please
ReplyDelete@venky
ReplyDeletethat means you don't like this one eh!
hey i write my posts using Live writer and shankar taught me that!!
yeah i liked it but the other two overshadowed it. And about the smiley thinks thanks. I will ask shankar about that.
ReplyDeleteAnd i have a 55 fiction waiting in the wings, let see if can do justice and for now check out my new post as well.
@venky
ReplyDeleteOh migh! Will try to write a better one!!
Wow!! You too in the 55fiction gang?!
Welcome!
That was indeed a great read Shruti:)
ReplyDeleteHmmmm good one ! :)
ReplyDeleteP.s > Please activate the non-google , non-open id login for comment. I mean one where i can jus enter my name and url. Its pain to enter my google login each time to comment :S
- Lakshmi Rajan
www.gingerchai.com
Ouch.. painful !!! :(
ReplyDeleteI love happy endings.. alas! life isn't always fair.
nicely told.
55 was good... but the end was too obvious... got used to such twist..and incase of love... its pretty obvious....
ReplyDelete"It takes only a minute to get
a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone,
and a day to love someone.
But it takes a lifetime
to forget someone."
sms lerundhu dana copy adicha??? i got this message some days before..
Nice one again Shruti :)
ReplyDeleteNice one! but why does all love stories end in heart-break? and you are already an expert in 55-Fiction :D
ReplyDeletereally loved it.... :)
ReplyDeleteenthralling one...
Cheers!!
Greetings for completion of ur so lovely, so intersting 25th posts..
ReplyDeletekeep writing.. :)
Cheers!!
Congrats on the 25th post :)
ReplyDeleteGud one :)
its actually nice. very nice.
ReplyDeleteHey Shruti..kalakal ngo... hmm three words! happa...how much they can change the life it looks!! and this story is very frequent at present i assume!..and hey can yu do me a favor..can yu check my last blog that shows in your dashboard , Was it stupid who or tooth fairy? Have been told that my new blogs are not reflecting to any followers..? sola mudiyuma? thanksngo
ReplyDeleteToo good writing. Reminds me of a song-Loving, Touchin, Squeezin!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing :)
this 55 thing is somehow getting on me....
ReplyDeleteits speciality of conveying so much through so few words..
beautiful as always!!
keep them coming!!
HI Shruti,
ReplyDeleteWell done..:)
I too like the last lines of your posts..:)
Keep writing :)
I think all lines are something everyone can appreciate and understand
ReplyDeleteNice one...
ReplyDeleteAnd congrats for your 25th post! :)
hey shruti,
ReplyDeletei like this 55 fiction of yours. Because i haven't read other 55 fictions by you so i can't say if it is better or previous ones were better.
But i will read them soon!!
shilpa
Shruti wrote:
ReplyDelete"Thanks and am not the queen!"
Hmmmm......maybe the KING.
KING SHRUTI........lol
u r rocking with the 55 fiction..!ver touchng story
ReplyDeletethats definitely worth a read anytime of the day.
ReplyDeleteps: no one is worth a whole lifetime.
@Ekam
ReplyDeleteThanks girlie!
@Mr.R
ReplyDeleteThank you!
""Please activate the non-google ""
Many of them feel this is convenient as I receive comments from my personal friends to!
Don't mistake me yaar!
@lostworld
ReplyDeleteThanks dear!!
Life isn't the same always!! :)
@shankz
ReplyDeletei can understand you! But am sorry for giving such twists! it has become irresistible!
That's not from SMS! I read that in a book 'Anonymus'!
@kasabian girl
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
@dmanji
ReplyDeleteThanks!
""why does all love stories end in heart-break""
Not all, but some! May be fate of love ?!
""you are already an expert in 55-Fiction""
Naah! Still am an amateur
@Amit
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked it!
Thanks :)
@amit
ReplyDelete""Greetings for completion of ur so lovely, so intersting 25th posts""
Woww!! thanks for such lovely words!!
@swaram
ReplyDeletethanks re!! :)
@bharathi
ReplyDeletethanks a ton!!
@hary
ReplyDeletethanksngooo!!!
""how much they can change the life it looks""
exactly!! heartbreaking words!
Tooth fairy is showing in my dashboard!but it got updated today only!! :O
hey shruti....nice one!!!!!but i hate heart brakes..:P....i dont think i am qualified enough to comment more on this one....:)
ReplyDelete@aditya
ReplyDeletethank you so much!! :)
@RSV
ReplyDelete""beautiful as always""
thanks!!
@pramoda
ReplyDeletethanks yaar!!
@kay
ReplyDeletethanks and glad you understood the concept!!
@anu
ReplyDeleteThanks sissie
@shilpa
ReplyDelete""i like this 55 fiction of yours""
Thanks yaar!!
Do read all of them and tell me :)
@IP
ReplyDeleteNobody can be as brilliant as you!! Awesome :)How you got it!
: :P ;)
@Sri
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
Touching story :P
@scarlet diaries
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
""thats definitely worth a read anytime of the day""
Thanks and am glad to hear that!
""no one is worth a whole lifetime""
Very true!
Keep Visiting!
@Kaka
ReplyDeleteThanks!
If you are not qualified to write comments, then am not even qualified for writing them :P
well it's really good.........
ReplyDeletei cn never write sumthin in such shrt words ......so its amazing.....
cheer :)
@The aspirant!
ReplyDeleteEven it was very difficult for me the very first time! But, 'Try, try,till you succeed!'
Thought-provoking 55-fiction pa :)
ReplyDeleteThis is wat i stressed about in my previous post that people make emotional decisions when in a relationship that is the rootcause of their problems...
keep blogging :)
cheers!!
@sathish!
ReplyDeleteYes, you are right! All are emotional backups!!
Thanks for your words
Shruti,
ReplyDeleteWhile you being a voracious reader, I can understand a girl of your age will definitely give in the best. But what makes your write-ups a bit put-off is - (1) Unnecessary usage of those exclamation marks. You use them quite often..probably that's your way. But '!' loses it's significance. Use only when needed.
2) You always write in only one tone(tune). Having a very beautiful name - "Shruti", try changing the writing style. Follow a passive approach sometimes. You should also sound like a Danielle Steel when needed instead of Sidney Sheldon as most of the time.
4) Doing better..appreciation to you whole heartedly. But avoid those overkill usage of sentence framing(phrasing).
Warm Regards,
Praveen.
@praveen!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
Thanks for giving me such a detailed comment!! Am really happy to listen to it. I was expecting some comments like this to improve myself!
1)""Unnecessary usage of those exclamation marks"". Yes I use that very often! Surely will reduce them
2)""try changing the writing style""
Yes am thinking, any suggestions?! REASON : I never read daniel steel!
3)where is the 3rd point?!
4)""But avoid those overkill usage of sentence framing""
I don't understand.
Btw, how you know everything? That i read sidney's and am a voracious reader?! I was awe-struck!
Girllll.. this was one of your best fiction 55 so far!!!! toooooo good :) you are indeed a queen of fiction 55!!
ReplyDelete@ashwini
ReplyDelete""this was one of your best fiction 55 so far""
I was thinking the opposite way! :)
After you told i am happy!!
""you are indeed a queen of fiction 55""
Am blushing! Without knowing what to reply!!
THANKS:)
Shruti!
ReplyDeleteNot all three words are cheerful, right :). Good post Shruti :)
@musings!
ReplyDeleteExactly!!
Not everything is same! Thanks for your wish!
you are looking to master 55's.. :)
ReplyDeleteHello
ReplyDeleteVisit my blog.
An award is waiting for u.
Hey Shruti!
ReplyDeleteThat was a nice 55 piece.. :) I liked it.. and your blog also seems pretty cool.. as in.. the content, the template.. everything.. really good.. :)
I could visit my blog(and your blog) only today after reading your comment on my post.. thanks for that.. :) I am very short on time as my MBA kicked off really hard.. :P
I'm sure to catch up with more on your blog.. keep writin'.. keep blogging.. ;)
i thnk i agree with the lines abt al lyftime to forget some one,
ReplyDeleteany ways, i liked ur 55f,and you are getting better and better in it with each post
keep smiling!
hey scene dhan po..all r praising u as queen of 55 fiction.. nice to hear :)Really an intersting genre,which I never knew before,I saw it in u r blog... short n sweet stuff..It sembles like a T20 match..But the purists stil love a detailed fictional story,coz test matches r still the toughest test for any cricketer :) So waiting to read a pure fictional story frm "Queen of 55 fictions" :)
ReplyDeleteSo I've heard you are the Queen of 55 Fiction. I've seen it today. Hey girl, you rock!! So sad for that girl. Kinda depressing too!! :):) I'm blogrolling you!! Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteOh my awesome...brilliant...lajawab...superb!!!
ReplyDeleteCheck out my new post dear :)
ReplyDeleteA really Nice Blog and anice story tooo...
ReplyDeleteFRom right now I am a member of your Blog...
Keep writing..
You are also invited to my blog
:)
It takes only a minute to get
ReplyDeletea crush on someone,
an hour to like someone,
and a day to love someone.
But it takes a lifetime
to forget someone.
Gr8 lines......
@shashank
ReplyDeleteYes even i would like to get a PhD But none awards DOCTORATE for 55FICTIONS!! :P :D
@Ip
ReplyDeletechecked out and thank you so much!
@Saad
ReplyDeletewelcome to my space!!
""That was a nice 55 piece""
Thanks a ton!! :)
Glad that you liked the contents in my blog along with the templates :)
""I'm sure to catch up with more on your blog""
Thank you :)
Keep smiling!
@Chetan
ReplyDelete""you are getting better and better in it with each post""
Am really happy that am showing some improvement!
Great that you liked my 55F :)
@Benny
ReplyDeleteyes!!everyone is praising me like that! But I myself don't know whether am eligible for that!!
Even am thinking of writing a Fiction!
@Rajalakshmi
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog :)
""Hey girl, you rock""
Thank you and accept my bow!!
Though this is a fiction, the incident portrayed is familiar!
Thanks for blog rolling me!!
@SiD
ReplyDeleteheheheh :P
thank you siddhu!
@Aditya!
ReplyDeleteSure!! :)
@Vijay
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!!
""A really Nice Blog and anice story tooo""
Thank you so much!
Thanks for becoming my follower!!
You won't be disappointed by my blog!
@Mr.Ali
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
""Gr8 lines""
Yes it is!
super one shruthi. Liked that poem at the beginning very much and the 55 fiction is really superb and touching. Keep going. ATB
ReplyDeleteHi akka!
ReplyDeleteI did ur tag!
And check out my new post! :)
Hey Shruti
ReplyDeleteI am waiting for your comments in my first attempt at 55...
@RAM
ReplyDeleteHeheheeh!! I wrote something and it turned out to be a poem :P
Thanks for your wishes :)
@Anu
ReplyDeletesure will check out re!!
@RSV
ReplyDeleteYes sure :)
hey its nice and tough to express in limited words...you have mastered it...
ReplyDeletenice blog !!!
then can i adopt this technique ( 55 fiction ) to keep my blog alive ?!?!?
-bluffmaster
www.gr8bluffmaster.blogspot.com
@Priyan
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
Thanks for your words :)
Then regarding your request, 55Fiction is a common thing! Anybody can try their hands on it!
You have your own concepts and Shape them as a 55F!
Nice lines abt "Someone" shurts..
ReplyDeletesuper feel to read...
keep rocking
Regards,
Prasee
@prasee
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
Hi! Shruti,
ReplyDeleteCongrats!! on completing your 25th post. Do check out my latest post.
Happy Blogging!!
Hi Shas,
ReplyDeletethank you and will check out yours!
oooooh..!!
ReplyDeletewell penned..!
@Vinz
ReplyDeleteThank You!!
Very well written Shruti!!
ReplyDeleteSo crispy, but also poignant too!
And the quotes mentioned in the posts are catchy and good...
@Bala
ReplyDeleteHey thanks da :)