55 fiction is more or less a short story. These stories have characters, struggles and answer. These stories often have a wonderful turn towards the end! It has only 55 words or less than that(u start counting the words in my story)
I always wanted to write a Mini-fiction. So here is my 55 fiction!!
Topic: Odd Morning
She opened her eyes to the warm rays of Sun.
She had barely slept after returning from the railway station last night
Her man must be going in train for his sister's marriage.
Lazily, She switched on the TV,
Headlines: Train Derailed; All passengers dead.
She never got out of her bed again!
Hope you liked it!
This is my first attempt in writing a 55 fiction!! Do tell me your comments
P.S: Shilpa only commented and suggested me to Give a title
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Hi Shruti
ReplyDeleteHit or miss?? Hit of course!!!!
Good first attempt!!!
Cheers.....
@ Indian Pundit
ReplyDeletethank you so much!!
Thanks and more thanks.
ReplyDeletei am so very glad that u liked my posts.
i am following u now too......
Check out my posts:
"The God's Masterpiece".....
i dedicate it to you.
Cheers and stay tuned.
hey IP am glad too that yopu are following my blogs!
ReplyDeletethanks for that dedication!
Hey superb attempt yaar. A story with 55 words! still could not imagine how you could think like this. Great going.Keep it up )
ReplyDeletekeep posting many things lik this..its really fantastic!!
ReplyDeleteHi Shruti
ReplyDeletei dedicated that post to you because i guess u really liked my posts as soon as u read them.
i loved your comments.
Most importantly, you are the ONLY PERSON who agreed with me wholeheartedly!!!!
Cheers.
@Sri,
ReplyDeletethank you so much da!!
@IP
hey really i loved ur posts the moment i read and those thoughts reflected in your comments section!!
Thanks for the dedication. Am honoured
I don have words to say. Its really fantabulous. U proved ur creativity. I wish u'd become a great writer.. keep goin.. This fiction is great great and GREAT.. My best wishes..
ReplyDeleteshurthi .. No words.. re to comment on this 55th fiction .
ReplyDeleteGood opening scene..
she thought tat she will miss her man for few days..
But she didn't thought for ever..
They know they can Never Live missing each other...
So he Carried her with him forever
dedicated to Symbol of true Luvs .
Regards,
Prasee
@prasee
ReplyDeletethanks!
its 55fiction not 55th fiction
A Good attempt.
ReplyDeleteA suggestion: You should have a title for the story too!! :)
grabbing the tag means just write the tag after a nice link from where u got it.....then pass it on to others whom u feel deserving
ReplyDeleteCheers....and girl i am sure u know how to hyperlink...u are a techie after all......haha
Step by Step guide:
ReplyDelete1) First declare from where u got the tag.....give a hyperlink to that blog.
2) Write your ten points........
3)Then pass the tag to other bloggers.
Thats how tags are normally written!
Forgot to say Cheers in my last comment.
ReplyDeleteSo Cheers.
@IP
ReplyDeletehey thank you so much re!!
That's a good title, and it explains and gives more meaning to your 55 Fiction!!
ReplyDeleteCheers
and
Happy Blogging! :)
hey quite nice, short and sweet...
ReplyDeleteI like this and yo...m following u now, check next friday am also gonna attempt something...:D
@Sid
ReplyDeleteThanks that someone got Idea from my blog!
Hei! this fiction is a huge creativity packed into a small pill. Good writing. Keep it up!
ReplyDelete@musings
ReplyDeletethank you so much for your appreciation!
Nice creative post. I tried my bit of 55-fiction in my recent post. you can check. seems your followers started increasing. Good. All the best.
ReplyDelete@ Bharathi
ReplyDeleteThanks, Its through your blog,many are coming and seein my blog!
thanks
wow..I still havent got a clue about what 55 fictions are ......
ReplyDeletegood attmept though..I am yet to make my attempt..
@shankz
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
will teach you abt 55fiction :D
LOL. so how much royalty you gonna pay me? Jus kiddin.
ReplyDeleteYours is a nice blog and I am sure it will get more popular.
@Bharathi
ReplyDeletethanks for telling my blog as a nice one. I feel lik am rewarded by you!
Hope t becomes popular
hey i loved it Shruthi...it was awesome....da!PERFECT epitome f true love!keep it up...
ReplyDelete@abi
ReplyDeletethank you so much!!
HI dear,
ReplyDeleteGreat work da... your first post itself was awesome.. only few talented story writters end their stories with an irony...
But you ve created it in ur very first post..it shld be appreciated!
Keep it up! :)
@poorni
ReplyDeletethank you so much poorni
Not that good Shruti... It was more like reading newspaper ma...
ReplyDeleteSince this was ur first attempt, just pass for u!!!!!! :-)
@Bala
ReplyDeleteAiyaa..bala sir passed me in this 55F!!