Well friends, am here again with another 55 Fiction! Am so happy that people like my 55 fiction and as my friends commented, my comments are sky rocketing! This post is also special for me as my Followers increased from 5 (before 15days) to 25!! My comments also increased to 550+ and my visitors count reached 660+..
I must thank everyone, each one of you personally for making my blog a successful one! This is my first venture in penning articles!
55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.Most 55 Fiction works are dramatized so as to get the effect in limited time.
Here comes my 55 Fiction.....
The phone rang...
"Akhil here.."
"Am Rita! Akhil, I enjoy this awesome climate by lying in my bed. Am flying in clouds, I'm extremely happy..."
"Rita, Listen...."
"Naah Akhil, am sensing all these amidst combating those Red Demons.."
CLICK!
He dialed....
"Rita, hear....."
"......"
"Rita please hear me...."
A still voice replied, "Rita passed away doctor!"
I Solemnly dedicate this article for persons who died in Cancer and the families who lost their dear ones!!
P.S : Many told me to write this in a paragraph. But I wrote this one again in the same manner because its in a conversation format!
Hope you liked this one.. Please do comment on this 55 fiction attempt of mine..
With Love,
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Nice.. well written .. there are some experiences in life.. which have no reason and no logic to explain..
ReplyDeleteKeep Writing and smiling
@arnav
ReplyDeleteyou are right!!
Same feeling i had when i was writing this post!
Keep smiling!
this one was pretty good shruti....:)...more that that it was ur dedication that i liked...:)
ReplyDeleteoooo cancer!! i hate that word :( my grandma died out of cancer and those memories can never drain out!! and senorita...as usual kalitinga poonga:)... epadi nga ungalala ipadi elutha mudiyuthu...:)..cya around
ReplyDelete@ shruthi
ReplyDeletehey shruthi this is similiar to Delhi 6. Were you watching delhi 6 before you wrote it.
Shruti!
ReplyDeleteIt was so touching and you managed to do this time with the bad disease, cancer. Co-incidentally, the book I purchased two days back is "Just Little Run Around the World" - a true story of a wife running around the world in memory of her husband (who died in 2002 of Prostate Cancer) to create cancer awareness. I recommend you to read this book, as you will understand how God had made certain people who are too beautiful at their hearts.
Shruti! no wonder that you receive such unlimited number of visitors; you deserve this :)
Good one. I liked it. After reading the last line I read the whole story again.
ReplyDeleteYour blog reflects your innocence which everyone will like. I am sure your blog will get more and more popular day by day. All the best. By the way am I the first or second follower?
Nice Shruti..like the post!
ReplyDeleteCongrats and hope you keep getting more followers everyday :)
Cancer is a dreaded word !!!! A sad one left me little sad :( but thats Ok ...
ReplyDeleteyou are becoming a SEO guru I mean attracting so many visitors so easily GR8
Hi Shruti.. :)
ReplyDeletevery good one.. :)
really touched my heart...
cheers!!!
A clean post, but it has stark similarities with "The Jacob's Ladder", a movie which amplifies excellence!
ReplyDeleteA good try and a great output!
Cheers!
hey congrats for all the above u mentioned...
ReplyDeletebut i didn't really understand this 55...
I just realized after reading last two lines that...it was dedicated to cancer patients...
@ Shankar: she (her spirit) made the call after she was dead.
ReplyDeletespirit......??? hmmm....fine....
ReplyDeleteshruthi..did u watch any horror show last night?? ha..ha.... lol.. just kidding..i read it again... its nice...thanks bharathi..for explanation..thanks a lot...
@kaka
ReplyDeletehey thank you so much yaar!!
@hary
ReplyDeleteoye! I know the real pain when someone suffer from the loss of their dear ones!!
yennala mattum yepdi mudiyuthaa??
idhu ungalukke konjam over ah therila?! I am writing just like other fellow bloggers!! :P
Anyways glad that you are visiting and appreciating my posts!!
@venky
ReplyDeletehey too much ah pesaraye!!
i dint watch delhi-6 still!! So its my own creation!!
@mohammed
ReplyDeletethank you so much anna..
Yaa i too heard about that book! Even am thinking of reading it!!
Thanks for your wishes :)
@Bharathi
ReplyDeletethank you so much! Am flattered completely!! I dunno whether i have that 'innocence'! After you told, i started analyzing myself!!
btw,you are my second follower!!
@kasabian girl
ReplyDeleteglad that you liked this post!
thanks for your wishes!
@dmanji
ReplyDeleteits not only a dreaded word, its a dreaded disease!!
Thanks for those comments :)
@amit
ReplyDeletethanks for the visit!!
Even i felt so much while writing this!
@pawan
ReplyDeletei din't have "The Jacob's Ladder" thoughts while writing this!!
Am elated after knowing the output is good!
@shankar and bharathi
ReplyDeleteam really sorry for not making the story clear!
Its not a spirit yaar!!
Its just the last words of the dying girl..
Red demons refer to the Blood cancer- Leukemia..
She calls the doctor who happened to be her friend the feelings she has, while on her death-bed !
From next time i ll be more clear
oh...
ReplyDeletepardon me...i did not understand...from where was she calling??? :o
hey understood...:D
ReplyDelete@SiD
ReplyDeleteU are really buddhu!!
you touched me.. very well written...
ReplyDeleteRane
@rane!
ReplyDeleteThank you re!
@shruthi
ReplyDeletecopyrights untha hehhehe. Jusy kidding
LOL. you spoiled my happiness. For once I thought I got the story line correct. sorry Shankar for misleading.
ReplyDeleteromba touching....,keep rocking:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed post :)
ReplyDeleteglad am following some good blogs :)
Beautiful one.
ReplyDeleteSad but nice. Cheers
@venky
ReplyDeleteaarambichutaya!!
too much ah pesareye!!!
@bharathi
ReplyDeletelolzz to you too!!
But how home this made to think of spirits?
@srividya
ReplyDeletetouching ah??
:P
thanks di
@satish
ReplyDeletethank you so much yaar!!
@IP
ReplyDeletethank you!
I linked up flying in clowds and red demons and thought she's dead and speaking from on the way to heaven or hell :-). Thinking too much ah. Any way dont you think this is a good plot for you to write a 55 fix. A person calling another from death bed. but later the receiver found that the call was made after she died. :D
ReplyDeletenice da super ....
ReplyDeletenice way of thinking
Regards,
Prasee
It was very emotional. don have words to say more than tat.. Good work
ReplyDelete@prasee
ReplyDeletethanks!
@bharathi!!
ReplyDeleteYou started thinking so much these days!
Results of self-analysis huh!!
why don't you try writing a fictitious 55 fiction?!
@savitha
ReplyDeletethank you so much for the visit!
Glad that you liked it!
Thanks girl for visiting my blog :) You have a nice blog here.. This story was so touching.. Will read more articles now..
ReplyDeleteCancer is downright scary. And just hearing incidents about it shakes me. Even if it's someone totally unrelated to me. :/
ReplyDeleteI will try if I get some interesting plot. Tks
ReplyDelete@ashwini
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my space!!
thanks for those encouraging words!
@archana
ReplyDeleteIts a dreaded disease yaar!! That's why we feel a lump in our throat when we hear that!
@Bharathi!
ReplyDeleteAll the best :)
Hello!
ReplyDeleteAm new to your blog...and I must say you are an awesome writer! :)
Keep writing! :)
Hi anu
ReplyDeletewelcome to my space!!
Thanks for calling me as an "Awesome writer"
Am just in a beginning stage and lots to learn!
Am happy to see you here!!
Keep visiting
A moving post.
ReplyDeleteCongrats! comments are raining and you are getting hounded by followers....lolzz.
@shas
ReplyDelete:-P
you are exactly right!!
Thanks for dropping by!
the whole point of it lies in the fact that how you unknowingly erase the virtual diluting it into the reality...
ReplyDeleteReally, gorgeous...
@Bharat
ReplyDeletewelcome to my space
thanks for your valuble comments!
Hey really touching one yaar. You have got a very neat narration skills.Keep going :)
ReplyDelete@ram
ReplyDeletethank you so much for visiting
Good one! Even I thought that she called after she died! but your idea is way better :-)
ReplyDelete@Pra
ReplyDeletehey thanks yaar!! Thanks.. Hope my Idea paid off.
hey super ah iruku..I wrote the same subj in my last post in 555 words..u wrote in 55 words.. ;) short n sweet!Btw,first time here!! nice template n intersting posts!! wil keep following..cheers :)
ReplyDelete@benny
ReplyDeleteGlad that you visited this one!! Thank you so much yaar!!!
Gud one!!!!!
ReplyDeleteSorry for being away for few days.... have got busy with my prfessional comitmnts..
though have managd to post new blg.. check it
cheers
SUmeet
hey sumeet!!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!!
Yep! SUre will check it!
That was very well written Shruti :)
ReplyDelete@ekam
ReplyDeletewelcome to my blog!!
Thank you so much!!
Gud one Shruti!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd hats off to the cause u dedicated this post too!
I know that ur dedication is from your heart, but not just from mind...
@Bala
ReplyDeleteThank u so much! This thanks comes from my heart!