Tuesday, August 11, 2009

55 Fiction - #3


Well friends, am here again with another 55 Fiction! Sid said "A 55 fiction bug has bit him smile_tongue". I think am influenced by the same bug. I tried two 55 fiction and got a wonderful response! So I tried another genre of 55 fiction today!! Don't know whether it will work out!!! Keeping my fingers crossed!!!fingerscrossed

Well telling about 55 fiction it can be called as "Micro-Fiction". It contains characters, a plot where the story revolves! It should contain only 55 words or less than that! Here comes my 55 fiction....

STARGAZE

Krish envisioned his enemy coming near him.

"Should i kill him with my rifle?"

Nope!

'Something more is entailed for him', Enunciating himself, Krish struck him hard!

Thud!!

He dropped down! Krish smiled!

SLAP!!!!!!!!!!!

Suddenly he woke up with a start,

only to find his wife rubbing her cheeks.smile_eyeroll

'Help me, God' he prayed silently.

Hope you liked this genre of my 55 Fiction!! Please do comment on my attempt!! If its bad, am sorry!! Will surely come with something best!

Till then, Keep Smiling.

With Love,





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39 comments:

  1. Siddhesh KabeAugust 11, 2009 at 8:43 PM

    ha ha ha ha...this is nice...

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  2. Siddhesh KabeAugust 11, 2009 at 8:44 PM

    God saw krish now...:P

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  3. ShrutiAugust 11, 2009 at 8:46 PM

    @Sid!!
    huh!!!
    am relieved...Atleast u fel like laughing!!!
    thank God!
    Thanks Sid!

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  4. RAMAugust 11, 2009 at 8:47 PM

    Hey nice and funny one.Good try with humour.Especially liked your signature which bears your name :)

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  5. ShrutiAugust 11, 2009 at 8:49 PM

    @Ram
    hehehe :D
    thanks!

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  6. PradsAugust 11, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh

    super. super.. comedy..

    Prasee

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  7. PradsAugust 11, 2009 at 9:14 PM

    THANx u sooo much shruts....

    i liked alot....

    Thanx for dedicating to me

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  8. ShrutiAugust 11, 2009 at 9:22 PM

    @prasee
    thanks!!
    its dedicated to all my friends who supported me

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  9. Indian PunditAugust 11, 2009 at 9:30 PM

    Thats a great post Shruti.

    i am jealous of your 55 word fictions.....hahahaha

    Cheers Shruti rocks big time.

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  10. ShrutiAugust 11, 2009 at 9:31 PM

    @ IP
    thank you so much!
    Jealous huh?!!
    :P

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  11. UnknownAugust 11, 2009 at 9:33 PM

    wow..this was cool....di....

    well when u said its a 55 fiction i thought once again it would be about mom,dad or sis.. but this was different...

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  12. ShrutiAugust 11, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    @shankz
    thank you so much da!!
    I was keeping my fingers crossed!!
    but til now had a nice respons!!

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  13. Shilpa GargAugust 11, 2009 at 10:10 PM

    Humor in 55!! That's cool!! :)

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  14. UnknownAugust 11, 2009 at 11:23 PM

    Man!!!!!!!!!!!! THis 55 fiction craze seems to be catching up fast!!! Gud one!!! Thanx for visiting my blog!! Happy frenship day to u too.

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  15. KarthikAugust 11, 2009 at 11:38 PM

    where did u get ur signature from??? its really cool....

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  16. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 12:04 AM

    @sumeet
    thank you for ur visit!

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  17. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 12:06 AM

    @karthick
    secrets are to be maintained

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  18. Musings of a lonely travelerAugust 12, 2009 at 10:57 AM

    :) atleast he dared to slap his wife whilst dreaming. Short and funny Shruti

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  19. BharathiAugust 12, 2009 at 1:03 PM

    'Help me God' is a nice way to finish. Very nice. I enjoyed.

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  20. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 3:23 PM

    @musings
    hehehehe :P
    thanks!!

    @bharathi
    thanks yaar!
    again difficulty in understanding 55fiction huh!?

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  21. Amit Kumar SinghAugust 12, 2009 at 3:36 PM

    quite a hilarious post..
    :)

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  22. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 3:43 PM

    @amit
    thanks for ur comment :P

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  23. BharathiAugust 12, 2009 at 6:33 PM

    Nope. Now I became expert, reading shruti teacher's continuous home work of 55-fictions.

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  24. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 6:37 PM

    @bharathi
    Teacher does a homework?!
    funny :P

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  25. UnknownAugust 12, 2009 at 6:44 PM

    Great strategy, good answers, really you are rocking with 55 fiction.

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  26. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 6:50 PM

    @yogesh
    thanks for visiting my blog!
    thanks for your encouraging comments!

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  27. pawanAugust 12, 2009 at 7:37 PM

    Good one Shruti!
    You have a great blog here, nice and interestingly layed out!

    Will be visiting back again!
    Cheers!

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  28. ShrutiAugust 12, 2009 at 8:03 PM

    @pawan!
    thank you so much yaar!!
    sure!! its my pleasure to have u here!

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  29. Lakshmi RajanAugust 13, 2009 at 9:06 AM

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  30. Lakshmi RajanAugust 13, 2009 at 9:08 AM

    Hi Shruti !

    Just read all those 165 words :p i mean your three 55 fictions ! I should say , you are getting better and better :) Simple but nice , if I have to sum it up. Keep them comming ! :)

    Mr.R

    GingerChai.com

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  31. ShrutiAugust 13, 2009 at 11:02 AM

    @ Mr.R
    glad that u read all 164 wrds!!
    my first 55F will have 54 wrds only:P
    glad that you visited this one!
    keep smiling

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  32. UnknownAugust 13, 2009 at 12:01 PM

    Hey its great. It was funny and i could see u rocking here :)

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  33. ShrutiAugust 13, 2009 at 12:19 PM

    @savi
    thank you da!!!
    :)

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  34. Sh@sAugust 16, 2009 at 8:35 PM

    Hi! shruti, it was a good one with a humourous ending.

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  35. ShrutiAugust 16, 2009 at 8:50 PM

    hey shas thanks for the visit!

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  36. AnonymousOctober 15, 2009 at 12:55 AM

    Crazy krish!!!
    Atleast the husbands were able to take revenge in this way... :-)

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  37. ShrutiOctober 15, 2009 at 9:55 AM

    @Bala
    Hey,all wives are not the same and also all hubby's aren't the same!!

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  38. AnonymousOctober 15, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    True!!! :-)

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  39. ShrutiOctober 15, 2009 at 6:25 PM

    @Bala
    Idhulayavadhu accept panengale!

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