Hello everyone!
Here am back with my second 55 Fiction. I received a tremendous appreciation i received from all of you! I thank everyone of you for this! Am happy that all my blogging friend are really amicable!
Once again, telling about 55 Fiction~It is a story containing 55 or less than 55 words. Like other short stories, 55 Fiction also has characters with a background and a situation where this Chronicle revolves! Here is my 55 Fiction..
Power of LOVE!
After that catastrophic accident, her world moved to a gloomier side.
Her Father had been into ventilator, Mother was traumatized.
Then one morning, she found her mom waking her up!
Phone rang!
The Doctor called and informed her, "Dad recovered"!
She replied "I Know!"
Her mom's smile told that...
She understood the POWER OF LOVE!!
Hope you all liked this. Kindly post all your feelings as comments... This 55 Fiction is dedicated to all those true lovers and those who felt the "Power of LOVE".
Keep Smiling!
With Love,
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Hey shruthi very good yaar. Nicely captured the feel of love in those 55 words. :) Keep writing
ReplyDelete@ram
ReplyDeletethnx :)
nice feel in tat 55fiction da...
ReplyDeletesuper... too read....
Note:
why always ending in sad note.
plzz do write some cheerful works. and suspense kind of stuffs.
Regards,
Prasee
@prasee
ReplyDeletethis is not a sad ending!!
her life became normal wen dad regained consciousness and her mom became cheerful!!
Good One!! :)
ReplyDeleteCan I have your mail id please??
this one is very nice...:D
ReplyDelete@shilpa,sid
ReplyDeletethank u so much!!
oyw wrote a 55-fiction myself...do read it...and ping me on facebook...
ReplyDeleteGood one again Shruti!!!!
ReplyDeleteCheers... improving all the time!!
Check out my recent post again got tagged by Shilpa.
Cheers
see my latest post for 55 fiction...is dere any other means of cntacting u? IM mayb orkut...like that???
ReplyDeleteu can safely put that in my comments...won't approve ;)
@sid
ReplyDeletesure ll look into ur 55fiction
Shruti,
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed the power of love in 55 words; like a single mustard seed, your short fiction appeals more than it appears.
Cheers
Hi Shruti! visit my blog to view my first hand try at 55 fiction :)
ReplyDeleteTo be honest, I am little dumb in understanding most of the 55-fiction kind of stories. And that is why I wait untill someone clarify the ending in the comments section. However I wnjoy once that is done :-). You have done a good job so far.
ReplyDelete@bharathi
ReplyDeletethis 55fiction is not complicated na?!
i don understand why you don't understand!!
thanks for your wishes!
The problem is not with you but its with me and my understanding. yes I understood your story after reading comments.
ReplyDelete@bharathi...
ReplyDeletehehehe :D
atlast you understood!
ha..ha..bharathi..i too have the same problem..... whenever i see the number 55....i would wait for others to comment....good one shruthi... i understood this one..since i know about u..
ReplyDelete@shankz
ReplyDeletethanks buddy!!
i didn't post the one i told you!
Very nice and cute story dear.. Keep posting ur works.
ReplyDelete@savi
ReplyDeletethanks!
true power!!
ReplyDeletecheers..keep going di:):)best wishes
@sri
ReplyDeletethank you so much
hi shruti. ur 55 fiction is very nice... really a power of love... keep goin
ReplyDeletepower of love or should i say the power of smile which gave it away in this case
ReplyDelete@archana
ReplyDeletethank you so much da!!
keep smiling
@venky
Seriously power of smile is measured by the power of love.
thanks for the visit.
fiction 55!cool!!gimme a hi-5 wen u c me...touching fictions....
ReplyDelete@srivats
ReplyDeletethanks bro!
hi-5 assured!!
Gud one Shruti!
ReplyDeleteLove is the greatest power on earth... It can conquer anything... but we ppl deceive some other things as power and go behind those....
@Bala
ReplyDeleteAhhh... This techie is speaking about love! Cupid smitten you eh? Who is that lucky?
Hello... wait... wait... I was speaking more generically about love... It may be b/w a parent and their kid, between friends, between siblings... So dont think of much ma...
ReplyDelete@Bala
ReplyDeleteSari sari....yepdi ketalum ess aagarenga! Pathukaren ;)
Eppadi kettalum unmai onnu tham madam!!! :-)
ReplyDelete@Bala
ReplyDeleteUnmaiya illaya nu seekrema kandu pidikaren!