tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post5920277382142531499..comments2023-09-08T15:20:48.604+05:30Comments on Hits and Misses: GoodBye...Shrutihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-39846594065448733432010-09-08T01:40:41.665+05:302010-09-08T01:40:41.665+05:30Gud one shruti!!
Not much a story line in it... ...Gud one shruti!! <br /><br />Not much a story line in it... however ur excellent narration made the whole post beautiful.. <br /><br />That too narrating the beauty of a girl by another girl is too difficult.. but u have done it..<br /><br />As usual, an unexpected end with ur style!!<br /><br />Keep writing!!!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12492013628654539071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-51261281116766649602010-08-31T14:40:14.166+05:302010-08-31T14:40:14.166+05:30Hey Shruti,
Long time since I checked your blog.....Hey Shruti,<br /><br />Long time since I checked your blog.. however got to have a good read at this post...<br /><br />narration is great as usual... but something is missing..<br /><br />hope u write more n more!!!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12492013628654539071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-75989159248951959042010-08-14T21:34:35.570+05:302010-08-14T21:34:35.570+05:30Lovely, it s nice to read your story after such a ...Lovely, it s nice to read your story after such a long time...must keep churning out wonderful stuff.aayanmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881273343571611950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-7489488426544573452010-08-14T19:02:21.825+05:302010-08-14T19:02:21.825+05:30That was brilliant. Very well narrated...you haven...That was brilliant. Very well narrated...you haven't overdone it. I have seen similar stories on other blogs but quite exaggerated. It was a very good read. :)Nethrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02134454114991583342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-71087925403406148732010-08-14T18:20:29.049+05:302010-08-14T18:20:29.049+05:30Good to see you back in action.
All the best for B...Good to see you back in action.<br />All the best for BAT-13!<br />Cheers :)Shilpa Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11016927627801620377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-51510874516532261802010-08-13T06:27:56.689+05:302010-08-13T06:27:56.689+05:30First thing - your blog looks cool, the template a...First thing - your blog looks cool, the template and the feel i love it. I'm always curious how people conceive ideas and write such huge posts with attention to lots of detail. And you amaze me with your post in this regard. I hope the wish in your post comes true. <br /><br /><a href="http://psychesvisage.blogspot.com/2010/08/goodbye.html" rel="nofollow">~Vee...</a>Veehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01191763226046803992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-87259320005634094012010-08-12T16:21:32.601+05:302010-08-12T16:21:32.601+05:30Very nice post. Its too good to be true but wish i...Very nice post. Its too good to be true but wish it does come true one day!<br /><br />ATB for BAT13<br /><a href="http://survivaloftheoptimist.blogspot.com/2010/08/goodbye.html" rel="nofollow">Gkam - Goodbye</a>Gaurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12502915691020891469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-39979102760609693732010-08-12T15:12:50.236+05:302010-08-12T15:12:50.236+05:30It's like one of those soaps were the evil guy...It's like one of those soaps were the evil guys have a change of mind in the last episode and the hero magnanimously forgives them! Aren't jihadis brain-washed enough not to be shattered by an old man's tale? <br /><br />Still, I like the core idea of the post. A change of their heart is what we all wish for. :)<br /><br />All the best!Keerthi Purushothamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18418423877207466952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-84207330160244393602010-08-11T16:10:03.238+05:302010-08-11T16:10:03.238+05:30Hey shruti.. I dont know how I went back to your 1...Hey shruti.. I dont know how I went back to your 100th post :D I thought you had initially celebrated 50th and now it was 100th and commented again :P only later realised that it was an old post.. hehehe.. so silly of me :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-90720472268564937112010-08-10T15:57:53.664+05:302010-08-10T15:57:53.664+05:30Lovely post, I liked the way it ended.. Great...
...Lovely post, I liked the way it ended.. Great...<br /><br />All The Best for BAT 13.<br /> <br /><a href="http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2010/08/goodbye.html" rel="nofollow">gmsaravana - Goodbye</a><br /> <br />Yours Frendly,<br />Someone Is SpecialSomeone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-43243725759964506142010-08-10T15:03:06.176+05:302010-08-10T15:03:06.176+05:30>>Dhiman
Welcome back :)
Yeah, this is not m...>>Dhiman<br />Welcome back :)<br />Yeah, this is not my best :)<br />But lost the touch in writing..may take few posts 2 get back to my so called old form :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-64628999277519460832010-08-10T15:01:33.639+05:302010-08-10T15:01:33.639+05:30>>Harini
Yaar, how r u :)
ur comment made me...>>Harini<br />Yaar, how r u :)<br />ur comment made me blush...<br />Thanks a tonShrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-26368295157681566542010-08-10T15:00:28.498+05:302010-08-10T15:00:28.498+05:30>>Binzy
welcome 2 hits and misses..
Thanks a...>>Binzy<br />welcome 2 hits and misses..<br />Thanks a ton and same 2 u :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-55868652628070424202010-08-10T14:59:44.591+05:302010-08-10T14:59:44.591+05:30>>Worthless Rantings
welcome 2 hits and miss...>>Worthless Rantings<br />welcome 2 hits and misses..<br /><br />Obviously,...Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-59755574587928063242010-08-10T14:57:53.445+05:302010-08-10T14:57:53.445+05:30>>Raksha,
Yaar raksha, u r the one who undrs...>>Raksha,<br />Yaar raksha, u r the one who undrstnds me well all times...bouncing back??got free these two weekends, so back to back! surprised to see ppl still remember my blog :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-13010157401916779662010-08-09T22:19:52.061+05:302010-08-09T22:19:52.061+05:30I know you are back, and for good! I still miss th...I know you are back, and for good! I still miss the sharpness in your post! <br /><br />Good byes can never be so good, I wish the Aatif wakes up in every blood sucker out there!<br /><br />PS - I like your new template better. See you soon and take care! :)Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18379997271775437852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-49907278121934801172010-08-09T20:15:05.171+05:302010-08-09T20:15:05.171+05:30This started well and reminded me of mumbai attack...This started well and reminded me of mumbai attacks. But it suddenly had an unexpected turn and ending was rather abrupt.Well, i liked the early part. But the end part, left me wondering, why you chose to make your characters to say goodbye to a sensitive dream. May be cos of the sensitive issue that we have been facing and the situation in the valley is still hostile, i wasn't able to connect myself with the climax. Apart from that, i liked this one.Nithin RShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04210200269352572628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-45100209887577491412010-08-09T15:04:30.568+05:302010-08-09T15:04:30.568+05:30Loved your new template :) It's really classy....Loved your new template :) It's really classy.. Nice story girl but I agree it was not your best.. I expected more from you :D but since you have lost touch, I am sure after a few more, you will back in form.. dont stop writing :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-11834042775874237732010-08-09T12:34:54.145+05:302010-08-09T12:34:54.145+05:30Liked the new blog template :D
The story is quite ...Liked the new blog template :D<br />The story is quite nice but I have seen better works from you ...I know you'll get back to your old form soon...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-72108709868146379862010-08-09T00:07:42.392+05:302010-08-09T00:07:42.392+05:30This piece is brilliant. It reminded me why i actu...This piece is brilliant. It reminded me why i actually started to follow your blog.Harinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14027026610825955425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-50275818633586150232010-08-08T23:50:35.335+05:302010-08-08T23:50:35.335+05:30Well narrated stoy with perfect message at the end...Well narrated stoy with perfect message at the end !! All the best for BatomAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-59911675225670720332010-08-08T20:09:14.566+05:302010-08-08T20:09:14.566+05:30ah.. hope...
the quintessential human delusionah.. hope...<br />the quintessential human delusionNirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08100157658669039074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-3931345900588172562010-08-08T19:31:29.838+05:302010-08-08T19:31:29.838+05:30Someone's bouncing back eh? ;) :) Glad to see ...Someone's bouncing back eh? ;) :) Glad to see you write despite all that you've on your plate currently! Good job girlie! :)<br /><br />Well as for the story, I'd say it's well written.Having said that, I'd also say your best is yet to come :) I felt it has been done in a hurry and I know why :) The plot is good though :)<br /><br />Do you really think the jehadis will ever be enlightened with all the gyaan? How I wish! It is as difficult as Osama Bin Laden becoming the President of US! <br /><br />Anyways well attempted :) Do visit my page if time permits! Cheers! ATB with BAT :)Rocksahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00859564811829858632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-27319935819776195922010-08-08T18:59:22.235+05:302010-08-08T18:59:22.235+05:30>>Mayur
LOL, noone will like a bomb blast :)...>>Mayur<br />LOL, noone will like a bomb blast :)<br />But I wrote this at the last minute, hence so many typos.. Little bit lazy am! Will try 2 rectify soon:)<br />Thanks a bunch for pointing it out..<br /><br />Hope to see u back again :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4279470685835917366.post-31400577916203077582010-08-08T18:57:44.772+05:302010-08-08T18:57:44.772+05:30>>Venky
Wish to get you back on my blog agai...>>Venky<br />Wish to get you back on my blog again.. sure u have a lot 2 read with 100+ posts :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02907230191165124394noreply@blogger.com